Writing567 Paragraph writing is hard!

writing a paragraph - Grade 12 (125w)
9-10 sentences
One thing! One topic! One controlling idea!
Boom!

TRANSPORTATION
TS There are several types of transportation. BORING

Cars - - self-driving cars
Self-driving cars will be of great benefit to people who live in cities.

Self-driving cars - negative


Clothes - newcomer, live in Vancouver - some essential clothes
1. hiking boots - mountians, hiking, meet friends
2. raincoat doublesized umbrella- rains a lot - meet people, talk to people, practice English
3. hat - Whitecaps - ice breaker
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We want an interesting- something that a reader wants to read.