Wednesday, 18 September 2019

Writing 567 paragraph and transition words

Don't copy from a book. 0/6
Plagiarism - 

RO run-on sentences
2 sentences with no punctuation between them

Cut the meat into small pieces mix it with the vegetables then put it into a frying pan. RO
run-on
divide these into sentences

Cut the meat into small pieces. Next, mix it with the vegetables. Then put it into a frying pan.

Cut the meat into small pieces mix it with the vegetables then put it into a frying pan. CS comma splice - a comma is not strong enough to go between sentences

Cut the meat into small pieces and mix it with the vegetables. Then put it into a frying pan.

Recipe - sequence, order of time
at first, first, first off
To begin with, cut the meat into small slices.
Boil 4 cups of water; at the same time, you can peel the carrots and cube the celery.

COMPOUND SENTENCES
two simple sentences together
My favourite recipe is chicken soup. It is easy to make. 2 SIMPLES
My favourite recipe is chicken soup + it is easy to make. COMPOUND

, FANBOYS
, SOBA   , so     , or   , but   , and
My favourite recipe is chicken soup. It is delicious, and it is easy to make.

My favourite recipe is chicken soup. It is delicious; moreover, it is easy to make.

When you fry the onions, they can burn easily; consequently, keep a close eye on them.

As a rule, making soup is very easy.

I like lots of kinds of soup; for example, I like tomato soup and chicken soup.
I like lots of kinds of soup; especially, I like tomato soup and chicken soup.   

Soup is easy to make; on the contrary, bread is harder to make.

In conclusion, 


These transitional terms bring your writing to life.
It makes your writing sound energetic, authentic, real, and natural.

Learn a few at a time. Use them in your writing.

I like coffee, and I like tea.
She plays soccer very well; in addition, she is on the volleyball team of her high school.
MORE ENGAGING, MORE INTERESTING

She plays soccer very well, and she is on the volleyball team of her high school.

He loved her very much; however, he didn't ask her to marry him. COMPOUND
; semicolon are not high frequency

He loved her very much. However, he didn't ask her to marry him. 2 SIMPLES

TWO STYLES FOR TRANS WORDS
; VVVVV,
You don't have to use the semicolon; instead, you can use the period.
. VVVVV,
You don't have to use the semicolon. Instead, you can use the period.

Which style do you like?  
My advice is to mix it up.
We have a toolbox full of tools. 
SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX

pescatarian -eat fish, but not other meat
vegetarian -
vegan - no animal products at all

A&W hamburger "Beyond Meat Burger"

cow meat - beef
pig meat - pork 
deer meat - venison - gamey taste, game
camel meat
snake meat
very tender special beef - veal
lamb - lamb

likewise - in the same way, in a similar way



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