Monday, 30 March 2026

P1 and P2 EF7/10/11 Class 29

 

Welcome back from Spring Break.

We have three weeks left in our course.

 

Sentence work coming up: sentence combining

Writing work coming up: essay writing

 

 

Today’s Agenda

·      Attendance

·      First day of registration for Q4

Did you try to reg?

Were you able to reg?

Self-paced courses are still available. You will have to finish by mid-late June.

Go to Room 203 to reg for SP.

The maximum number of courses that you can take at one time is two (2).

Reg for summer school will begin probably mid-June. We do not have the summer schedule done yet.

Summer school runs five weeks: July and the first week of August.

 

·      Talk about spoken presentations- next week

 

·      Return Quiz 1

Go over

Optional RW for a point

·      Finish Animal Farm Chapter 3

·      HW   Prepare Animal Farm Chapter 4

 

Tuesday, March 31

·      Sentence combining work

·      Animal Farm Chapter 4

 

Wednesday, April 1

·      Sentence combining work

·      Animal Farm Chapter

 

Thursday, April 2

·      Sentence combining work

·      Animal Farm Chapter

 

Friday, April 3

·      Statutory holiday

Good Friday

 

Monday, April 6

·      Statutory holiday

Easter Monday

 

Tuesday, April 7

·      Presentations 1

·      Animal Farm Chapter

 

Wednesday, April 8

·      Presentations 2

·      Animal Farm Chapter

 

Thursday, April 9

·      Presentations 3

·      Animal Farm Chapter

 

Friday, April 10

·      Presentations 4

·      Animal Farm

 

Final week- essay, movie

Monday, April 13

Tuesday, April 14

Wednesday, April 15

 

Thursday, April 16

·      Optional replacement quiz and/or test

 

Friday, April 17- final day

·      One-on-one meetings, final marks and comments

 

Quarter 4 begins on Thursday, April 23rd.

 

 

 

 

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Spoken Presentations: X/10, 10 points

Next Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday

 

These are fun and interesting.

 

Choose one of the topics:

What is your favourite place in your home country or elsewhere?

OR

Who is a person who you know in your life who you look up to?

PHRASAL VERB look up to- respect, admire

 

There will be two parts to this presentation:

 

1.    WRITTEN- a couple of paragraphs (2, 3 paragraphs)

-Write about the place or the person.

-Write about your relationship to this place or person.

          The writing will be in standard paragraph format, like we have practiced in this class.

 

2.    SPOKEN (3-5 minutes)

On your presentation day, you will tell the class about this place or person and your relationship to it or them. You will come up to the front of the class. You can take a few written notes in case you forget something. However, no reading. Also, please, do not recite a memorized speech.

You can practice at home. Time yourself.

 

Here are some possible topics to focus on:

Favourite place

The name of the place

Where the place is

When you went there

Who you went with

What the scenery was like

What you did there

What your memories are of the place

 

                     Admired person

                     Who the person is

                     Information about the person

Where you knew them

What you did together

What you like about them

What you learned from them

What your memories are of the person

 

Today, think about what person or place you want to tell us about.

Choose one person or place that would want to tell us about.

 

ACTION

Step 1- Choose the place or person that you would like to talk about. Email the name of the place or person to me by tomorrow 7PM. 7PM tomorrow is the deadline.

ahaley@vsb.bc.ca

Value (1pt)

 

Remember to put your full name and class in the subject line of all emails to the teacher.

 

SUBJECT LINE: Mei Chen EF7

 

Hi Allan,

I will talk about my sister, Maryam.

OR

I will talk about Bushoi Park, which is in my hometown.

Thanks,

Mei

 

I will respond:

Thanks. Sounds good.

Allan

 

Step 2- Sign up for a presentation time.

 

Step 3- Begin to brainstorm ideas. Then begin to write.* We will take some class time to work on this.

 

*You could get ChatGPT or a translating app to write this for you in .003 seconds. Hopefully, you will take this as an opportunity to do some organization, planning, and writing on your own.

Of course, the VSB and SHEC policies regarding plagiarism and academic honesty apply. If I see that your work is plagiarized or translated, or AI-generated. it will get a 0 and a letter in your file.ope

I know what your writing looks like.

 

 

 

 

 

This will be a nice challenge, writing and speaking to the class.

Some people like to show some pictures. Some people are good at PowerPoint or presentation software.

You don’t have to, but pictures are effective.

 

IDIOM A picture tells a thousand words.

 

You can use your laptop or phone with the LCD projector.

We can check the tech any day before you present.

The LCD projector is a bit old. If the projector doesn’t work with your phone, maybe you can email your pictures to a classmate whose phone works with the projector.

 

Encouragement section!

We all want to hear what you have to say. We are interested in what you have to tell us.

We are on your side. We want you to be successful and feel successful with your presentation.

 

We will give helpful feedback to each person.

We will be positive and supportive of each other.

 

Marks x/10-

1 point email by tomorrow 7PM

                     1 point check-in on Thursday

4 points for the writing

                     4 points for the speaking

 

FAQ (Frequency Asked Questions)

-Will we do preparation work in class?

We will take some class time, and you will have to do much of it outside of class.

 

-Can I show pictures or videos?

Yes, absolutely. You can use your own computer or phone.

You can use the LCD projector to project them on the screen.

You can test the tech any day this week to make sure it works.

I have a C port and an HDMI connector.

I do not have Lightning connectors.

 

-When do I pass in the writing?

Pass in your writing first thing on the day you present.

 

Questions? Please ask.

 

 

 

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P2

Quiz1

Phones and devices put away.

Write an appropriate sentence for each.

 

simple   compound   complex   compound-complex

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Vocab reviewed for HW

1.    or                 struggle

COMPOUND    SIMPLE

She can struggle to learn/with Math 12, or she can quit.

The old man struggles to walk or run.

You can overcome any struggle, or you can give up.

The man was struggling to breath when he ate peanuts or strawberries.

 

 

2.     because    secret

COMPLEX ADV CL

I will not tell anybody because it is a secret.

Don’t tell anyone your SIN/PIN because it is a secret.

SIN- social insurance number, 9-digit number

 

It is a secret. noun

It is secret. adjective

 

3.    since           complete

COMPLEX ADV CL   SIMPLE

Mai went home early since her work was completed.

His family has felt complete since they had their 10th child.

Some countries are facing a demographic crisis.

 

4.    however    suddenly

COMPOUND ;

We were having a nice day at the beach; however, it suddenly got cold.

 

5.    therefore   equal

COMPOUND ;

All animals are equal; therefore, humans should protect all animals.

In the eyes of the law, all people are equal; therefore, we can have a fair society.

 

6.    as                 remind

COMPLEX ADV CL      SIMPLE

The mother reminded her kids to put their shoes away as soon as they walked in the door.

I don’t want to remember my bad situation that I got into yesterday.

Please remind me to get milk as I will forget.

Her phone sent her a reminder as her appointment got closer.

As she was sick, her daughter reminded her to V eat take/have some medicine.

As a wife, I always remind my husband how lucky he is.

 

What kind of sentence do you want for each?

 

You can do an optional rewrite for a point.

Pass it in today or first thing tomorrow.

 

It rained suddenly.

It started raining suddenly.

 

 

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Animal Farm Chapter 3 crossword

I chose words that are difficult and probably new, but also useful higher-level vocabulary.

 

grudging(a)- unwilling to give praise, unwilling to be positive or helpful

He grudgingly agreed to help. adv

 

 

 

grudge(n) – a bad feeling about someone

She has a grudge against her sister.

He holds grudges. He is resentful.

She forgives and forgets.

 

drudgery(n)- hard boring work

Some people find math to be drudgery. Some people find washing the dishes to be drudgery. Some people find doing their taxes to be drudgery.

 

leeching- a chemical leaks into the ground or water

leech(n)-

 

rite – ritual, ceremony

In Canada, getting your drivers license is a rite of passage.

rite of passage- becoming an adult

turn a new page in a life

 

right- homonym

write - homonym

 

 

rot(v)- spoil, go bad- food

 

malinger(v)- shirk, be lazy, do no work, fake being unable to work

mal- bad

soldiers- do not want to fight

On Animal Farm a few animals do not want to work.

He shirked his school work.

 

motto- slogan

Obama “Yes, we can!”

Trump MAGA “Make America Great Again.”

Nike “Just do it!”

MacDonalds “I’m Loving It!”

 

Your personal motto: Never give up.

Boxer’s motto: I will work harder. Napoleon is always right.

 

toil- hard work

She toils day and night.

He toils seven days a week to put bread on the table.

 

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Animal Farm Chapter 3

         

Interesting quotations that point to important themes in the novel:

 

  “How they toiled and sweated...” (17)

“toiled and sweated”(17)

The animals “toiled and sweated”(17) to get the harvest in.

 

  “Gee up, comrade” (17)

gee-haw- cowboy

 

  “not an animal on the farm had stolen so much as a mouthful” (17)

 

  “Boxer with his tremendous muscles always pulled them though”(18)

“tremendous muscles”(18)

 

naïve- will believe anything that someone tells you

 

  “Nobody shirked- or almost nobody” (18)

 

  “Donkeys live a long time” (19) taciturn, close-lipped

 

  “these two were never in agreement” (20)

 

  “Snowball declared that the Seven Commandments could... be reduced to a single maxim...” (21)

 

  “the education of the young was more important...” (22)

 

  “who wants to see Jones come back” (23)

 

Teacher’s example

  “Everyone worked according to his capacity” (18)

  Refer to Marx “From each according to his ability, to each according to his needs”

 

Chapter 3

         

Interesting quotations that point to important themes in the novel:

 

  “How they toiled and sweated...” (17)

“toiled and sweated”(17)

The animals “toiled and sweated”(17) to get the harvest in.

 

  “Gee up, comrade” (17)

gee-haw- cowboy

 

  “not an animal on the farm had stolen so much as a mouthful” (17)

 

  “Boxer with his tremendous muscles always pulled them though”(18)

“tremendous muscles”(18)

 

naïve- will believe anything that someone tells you

 

  “Nobody shirked- or almost nobody” (18)

 

  “Donkeys live a long time” (19)

 

  “these two were never in agreement” (20)

 

  “Snowball declared that the Seven Commandments could... be reduced to a single maxim...” (21)

 

  “the education of the young was more important...” (22)

 

  “who wants to see Jones come back” (23)

 

Teacher’s example

  “Everyone worked according to his capacity” (18)

  Refer to Marx “From each according to his ability, to each according to his needs”

 

MY LECTURE NOTES Chapter 3

  Mollie shirking

  Cat shamelessly lazy, charmer

  Old Benjamin “unchanged” “would express no opinion” “cryptic answer”

  regular Sunday ceremony, “the meeting”

  flag- symbolism, representative of ideal

“the hoof and horn”- looks like the USSR flag “the hammer and sickle”

 

  pigs put resolutions- animals vote

  meeting ends “Beasts of England”- song

  Napoleon & Snowball “never in agreement” (20), beginnings of power struggle

  pigs have headquarters

  Snowball- Animal committees, all failures, animals reverting to type

  literacy program, Benjamin “nothing worth reading” (21), most animals functionally illiterate, illiterate masses

Boxer tried to learn to read

  therefore Snowball reduces seven commandments to “single maxim” slogan

  “essential principle of animalism” 4 legs good, 2 legs bad

FOUR LEGS GOOD, TWO LEGS BAD!

 

  Napoleon takes the puppies, young dogs to raise

 

  milk and apples go to the pigs, Squealer spins it with fallacious argument evoking science, specter of Mr. Jones, pigs sacrificing for animals

 

Friday, 13 March 2026

P2 EF710 Class 28

 

Sentence work coming up:  sentence combining- after Spring Break

 

 

Today’s Agenda- final day before Spring Break

·      Attendance

·      “Self-Assessment Reflection” Week 6

·      Quoting section- Animal Farm

·      Animal Farm Chapter 3

·      Quiz 1- sentence quiz (25m at the end of the class)

 

Two-week Spring Break

 

Monday, March 30th

·      First day of reg for Q4

·      Finish Animal Farm Chapter 3

·      Animal Farm Chapter 4

·       

 

Tuesday, March 31

·      Animal Farm Chapter

 

Wednesday, April 1

·      Animal Farm Chapter

 

Thursday, April 2

·      Animal Farm Chapter

 

Friday, April 3

·      No school

Good Friday

 

Monday, April 6

·      No school

Easter Monday

 

Tuesday, April 7

·      Animal Farm Chapter

 

Wednesday, April 8

·      Animal Farm Chapter

 

Thursday, April 9

·      Animal Farm Chapter

 

Friday, April 10

·      Animal Farm Chapter

 

Final week

Monday, April 13

Tuesday, April 14

Wednesday, April 15

 

Thursday, April 16

·      Optional replacement quiz and/or test

 

Friday, April 17- final day

·      Meetings, final marks and comments

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Animal Farm quoting section

“ “  quotation marks

 

l  Talk about quoting, instead of copying

l  Plagiarism is copying with showing where the text came from.

 

l  Uses of quotation marks      1.reported speech

                                                   2.titles

                                                   3.quoting from text

 

1.direct quotation- My sister said, “Feed the dog.”

indirect quotation- My sister told me to feed the dog.

 

2.title of an article, poem, short story, not a book

“I Confess” “Dead Men’s Path”

title of a book Animal Farm or Animal Farm    italics ctrl i

 

3.quoting material in answers

 

Using “ ” quotation marks in our answers

INCORPORATE quoted material

borrow quoted material and put it into our own sentences

 

 

EXAMPLES OF REPLACING YOUR VOCAB WITH QUOTED MATERIAL FROM TEXT

 

Old Major was the oldest pig on the farm. All of the other animals respected him.

 

 

 

INCORPORATE “wise and benevolent”(1)   brackets

brackets- page number   (1)  (p1) (page 1)

 

short story- only a few pages- 2-12pp

novel- hundred pages, 300 pages

 

“wise and benevolent”(1)  

Old Major was the oldest a “wise and benevolent”(1) pig.

 

Old Major was a “wise and benevolent”(1) pig. The other animals respected him. 2 SIMPLES SENT

 

Old Major was a “wise and benevolent”(1) pig who the other animals respected. COMPLEX SENT

The other animals respected Old Major who was a “wise and benevolent”(1) pig. COMPLEX SENT

Old Major was a “wise and benevolent”(1) pig who was respected by the other animals. COMPLEX SENT passive voice

 

Old Major was a “wise and benevolent”(1) pig, and the other animals respected him. COMPOUND SENT

Old Major was a “wise and benevolent”(1) pig; the other animals respected him. COMPOUND SENT

Old Major was a “wise and benevolent”(1) pig; for this reason, the other animals respected him. COMPOUND SENT

 

Old Major was the oldest pig on the farm, and all of the other animals respected him because he was “wise and benevolent(1). COMPOUND-COMPLEX SENT

 

VERY HIGH-QUALITY WRITING

Good for E10, E11, E12, college or university, job

 

Quote just a few words. 2-3-4 words

 

 

Benjamin was a pessimistic donkey who was loyal to Boxer but who was serious around the other animals. COMPLEX SENT

 

Benjamin was a pessimistic donkey who was loyal to Boxer but serious around the other animals. COMPLEX SENT- more concise

 

Benjamin was a pessimistic donkey who was loyal to Boxer; however, he was serious around the other animals. COMPOUND SENT

 

INCORPORATE QUOTED MATERIAL FROM THE BOOK INTO OUR WRITING “cynical”(2) “devoted”(2) “never laughed”(2)

 

Benjamin was a “cynical”(2) donkey who was loyal to Boxer but serious around the other animals.

Benjamin was a “cynical”(2) donkey who was loyal to Boxer but serious around the other animals.

 

Benjamin was a pessimistic donkey who was “devoted”(2) to Boxer but who was serious around the other animals.

 

Benjamin was a “cynical”(2) donkey who was “devoted” to Boxer but who “never laughed” around the other animals.

ALL THREE TOO MUCH, PICK ONE

 

Benjamin was a pessimistic donkey who was “devoted”(2) to Boxer but who was unsmiling around the other animals.

“never laughed” SYNONYMS– unsmiling, serious, long face, joyless

 

Benjamin was a pessimistic donkey who was “devoted”(2) to Boxer but who always had a long face around the other animals.

 

IDIOM Turn that frown upside down.

 

IDIOM poker face=- blank face, showing no emotion

 

 

This kind of writing with a couple of quoted words or short phrases gets top marks. Teachers love it.

Most students in English 11 and English 12 can’t do it.

You will be the star of the class. Belle of the ball. Teacher’s pet.

 

Students practice one about Boxer.

Try a sentence of your own about Boxer. Include a few quoted words.

Choose a word or two from the book about Boxer. Put it into a sentence with a quotation.

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“cart-horse”(2)

“enormous beast”(2)

“somewhat stupid appearance”(2)

“universally respected”(2)

“steadiness of character”(2)

“tremendous powers of work”(2)

“not of first-rate intelligence”(2)

 

Boxer was strong and hardworking. No “”

Boxer is one of the "cart-horses"(2) on the farm.

Boxer who has a "white stripe"(2) on his nose was a horse.

Boxer is an “enormous”(2) and honest horse.

Boxer was an "enormous beast"(2) of a horse.

Boxer was very strong but had a “stupid appearance”(2).

The animals “universally respected”(2) Boxer because he was honest and hardworking.

 

 

Quotations show that your points are based on the novel.

-evidence

 

All future tests, you will be expected to use quotations. You’ll get it with practice.

 

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Chapter 3

 

Interesting quotations that point to important themes in the novel:

 

  “How they toiled and sweated...” (17)

“toiled and sweated”(17)

The animals “toiled and sweated”(17) to get the harvest in.

 

  “Gee up, comrade” (17)

gee-haw- cowboy

 

  “not an animal on the farm had stolen so much as a mouthful” (17)

 

  “Boxer with his tremendous muscles always pulled them though”(18)

“tremendous muscles”(18)

 

naïve- will believe anything that someone tells you

 

 

  “Nobody shirked- or almost nobody” (18)

 

  “Donkeys live a long time” (19)