Monday, 9 February 2026

P2 EF71011 Class 6

 

The Seawall – walk all around Stanley Park and False Creek

 

sea- ocean

wall- barrier, like a dike

 

earthquake

tremor- small shaking

 

South Hill – high ground

 

Do you live on high ground?

 

Vancouver- schools K-12 – seismically upgraded

 

Canada- provinces

US- states

Japan- prefectures

 

 

 

Today’s Agenda

·         Attendance

·      “Adult Ed Student Information Verification”

·      Start “Literary Terms”

·      Continue “Ice Storm” module

·      ONGOING Continue “Verbs in Simple Sentences”

 

Tuesday

·      “Correction Codes”

Go over

·      Return Test 1

Go over

Optional rewrite for one point

 

·      HANDOUT “Comma Splices”

Teach, exercises

·      Continue “Literary Terms”

·      Continue “Ice Storm” module

 

Wednesday

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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“Adult Ed Student Information Verification”

Check that your information is correct.

If it is all correct, please sign and the date the paper. Give it back to me.

If there are errors, make corrections on the paper.

 

PEN- Personal Education Number

DOB – date of birth

 

 

 

 

**

 

Literary Terms

 

1.       Setting is the time, place and cultural, psychological, religious, and economic circumstances that form the backdrop of a story.

time and place- Where does the story happen? When does the story happen?

 

“Suits” Netflix

setting where? eastern US, New York City, downtown Manhattan, in a law firm

setting when? modern times, present day

 

“Zootopia”

setting where- country of animals

setting when – modern

 

“Game of Thrones” HBO

setting where – medeival Europe, fantasy,

setting when- approx.. 1400s

 

setting- where and when

 

“What Happened During the Ice Storm” What is the setting?

 

2.       A character is a person, animal or thing presented as an identity in the story. A character may be characterized by the author through physical appearance, action, thoughts or words, interaction or response of other characters, and direct commentary by the author.

a.       A major character is a character that is essential to the story. If a major character were removed from the story, the story could not develop the same way.

b.       A minor character is a less important character who adds colour to the story but is not essential to the plot.

c.       A protagonist is the central or primary character in a literary work. The plot of the story revolves mainly around this character. The reader is meant to sympathize most with the protagonist.

d.       An antagonist is a character, group of characters, or an institution that works against the protagonist.

Movie “The Shawshank Redemption”

e.       Round Characters are characters who are multi-dimensional. They tend to be developed physically, mentally, and emotionally and are detailed enough to seem real. A round character demonstrates varied and sometimes contradictory traits. 

f.        Flat Characters are characters who are one-sided and less developed. They reveal very few personality traits.

g.       Stock Characters are special kinds of flat characters who are instantly recognizable to most readers. Possible examples include “the businessman”, “the movie star” or “the policeman”. They are mainly backdrop in a story and are not developed.

stock(n)- simple soup, chicken stock

 

background actors- extras- long days, 12 or 14-hour days

spoken lines – more $$

 

h.       Dynamic Characters are characters who go through a significant change during the course of the story. Changes include ones of insight, understanding, commitment, or values.

i.        Static Characters are characters who do not change through the course of the story. Events in the story do not alter a static character’s outlook, personality, motivation, perception, habits, etc., in any fundamental way.

 

3.       Personification is the attribution of human traits and characteristics to inanimate objects, phenomena and animals.

 

4.       Plot is the sequence of related events or actions in a story. A plot can usually be broken down into a traditional five-part plot structure. These parts are as follows:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

a.       exposition - an introduction to the main characters, settings, and situations of the plot

expose(v)- to show

b.       rising action - the events and complications that lead to an important and dramatic point in the plot

c.       climax - the point of greatest interest and emotional involvement in the plot

d.       falling action - the events that develop from the climax and lead to the conclusion

e.       resolution or denouement - the final outcome which ties up any loose ends left in the story

This structure can be depicted as a lopsided pyramid, with two base lines.

 

MORE TOMORROW

 

 

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19.     The students and the teacher solved/resolved/worked on the problem together.

20.     The box of old letters keeps / holds / contains /has/ kept / held/ contained / had / is filled with important memories.

 

 

 

 

 

Exercise 2

Choose an appropriate verb for each. Use a variety of verb tenses.

 

HIGHER LEVEL VOCAB

1.       Neither the list of applicants nor the committee members were/are satisfied with the final decision.

Are you satisfied with your new phone.

 

2.       The rapid expansion of digital platforms changes/has changed how information is consumed.

3.       What the critics admire most about the novel is / was its unconventional narrative voice.

 

4.       A series of unexpected events ___ led to the cancellation of the conference.

5.       The responsibility for managing international relations ___ with the executive branch.

6.       More important than the final outcome were the lessons learned during the process.

 

7.       The number of students enrolling in advanced courses has increased / has decreased / is changing dramatically.

She enrolled/registered in a yoga class.

She registered/signed up for a yoga class.

 

He enrolled in an exercise class, but he didn’t go.

She enrolled in UBC.

 

The number of Canadians travelling to the US has decreased dramatically over the past two years.

 

8.       The diversity of opinions within the organization is / creates / generates its greatest strength.

 

9.       A detailed analysis of the data must be done / needs to completed / is needed before any conclusions can be drawn.

 

I need to go home. I must go home. I have to go home.

I should go home. not as strong

 

Absolutely! For sure!

Most definitely!

COOL SLANG Mosdef!

COOLER SLANG Say less!

 

 

10.     What remains unresolved after the negotiations ___ the   issue of funding.

11.     The collection of historical manuscripts ___ in a climate-

controlled vault.

12.     Not only the teachers but also the principal is held accountable for the decision.

As adults, we are held accountable for our actions.

Children are not held accountable for their actions.

 

HIGHER LEVEL

Not only the teachers but also the principal is held accountable for the decision.

Not only the principal but also the teachers are held accountable for the decision.

Friday, 6 February 2026

P2 EF710 Class 5

 

Today’s Agenda

·         Attendance

·         “Self-Assessment Reflection” Week 1

·      Continue “Ice Storm” module- poem ‘trees in ice”

·      Start “Literary Terms”

·      ONGOING Continue “Verbs in Simple Sentences”

·      Test 1 - paragraph to pass in (last 50 minutes of class)

 

Monday Agenda

·      Continue “Ice Storm” module

·      Continue “Literary Terms”

·      ONGOING Continue “Verbs in Simple Sentences”

 

Tuesday

 

 

 

“Self-Assessment Reflection”

Take out the PLOs, please.

 

We will do one every Friday.

 

Don’t write on it yet.

 

 

 

VOCAB

 

-self- myself, yourself, personal, not teacher

reflexive, looking inward

 

-assessment(n)- assess(v)- evaluation, how good, level, examination, check, mark, estimate

 

-reflection(n)  reflect(v)- thinking, inner-check, consider, mirror, deep thinking, internal process

 

 

BC education – student-centred

Students can make their own education goals.

 

 

Focus: Your work in this class this week.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Strengths- power, ability, mentality, skills, achievement, development, improvement, success

 

Challenges- difficulties, problems, negatives, going wrong, tricky, obstacles, areas for improvement

 

Goals- target, aims, dream, approach, future dream, the things you want, hopes, reach

 

Plans- project, program, schedule, practice regime, organized, step-by-step, commitment, solution

 

Goal-setting- powerful way to make improvements

 

 

 

Fill out Week 1

Pass it in to me by the end of the class today.

 

 

**

“trees in ice”

precipitation(n)- rain, snow, sleet, hail, freezing rain(super-chilled rain)

 

VOCAB

gaunt(adj) very thin, unhealthily thin

She had a gaunt face after Covid19.

 

prong-

 

parts of a tree- trunk- branches(limbs)- twigs

 

two kinds of trees:

deciduous- oak, maple, apple, cherry, fruit tree-apple,plum,pear

evergreen- pine, spruce, cedar, fir

 

flame – fire

 

barren- no life, lifeless, nothing growing

The moon is barren.

 

pierce- poke a hole

 

O degrees Celsius is the freezing point.

100 degrees Celsius is the boiling point.

 

Fahrenheit- US 32 degrees is the freezing point.

Vancouver Special- style of house

change the façade- the outer look

 

glitter(n)- tiny shiny pieces of reflective material

sparkle(v)

SLANG bling(n)- gold, diamonds, jewelry

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

**

Test 1 (50m)

Dividers.

Phones, devices put away.

Take out a few pieces of paper.

Full name, period, class, date in top right corner.

Double space, write between margins.

Write a well-organized paragraph of at least 150 words. Choose one topic:

1.    How do you feel about winter?

2.    Describe a winter activity you’d like to try.

3.    Write about your favorite winter experience.

 

P1 EF71011 Class 5

 

Superbowl- NFL National Football League final

 

 

football- soccer

American football – football

 

Today’s Agenda

·         Attendance

·         “Self-Assessment Reflection” Week 1

·      Continue “Ice Storm” module- poems

·      Start “Literary Terms”

·      ONGOING Continue “Verbs in Simple Sentences”

·      Test 1 - paragraph to pass in (last 50 minutes of class)

 

Monday Agenda

·      Continue “Ice Storm” module

·      Continue “Literary Terms”

·      ONGOING Continue “Verbs in Simple Sentences”

 

Tuesday

 

**

trees in ice

 

precipitation(n)- rain, snow, sleet-half rain, half snow, hail- frozen balls of ice, freezing rain

There is a 30% chance of precipitation today.

 

VOCAB

gaunt(adj) – very thin, sickly thin

prongs- thin branches

 

roots- trunk- limbs/branches- twig

 

IDIOM put down roots  She put/is putting down roots in Canada.

 

barren(adj)- nothing growing, no life

 

deciduous trees- lose their leaves- cherry, apple, oak, maple

evergreen trees- keep their needles- pine, fir, cedar, spruce

 

0 Celcius is the freezing point.

100 Celcius is the boiling point.

 

US Fahrenheit 32 is the freezing point.

 

black ice – thin layer of ice on a highway that you cannot see

 

glitter(v)- shine like a diamond

Her eyes glittered.

She put glitter on her eyelids.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

**

Test 1 (50m)

Dividers.

Phones, devices put away.

Take out a few pieces of paper.

Full name, period, class, date in top right corner.

Double space, write between margins.

Write a well-organized paragraph of at least 150 words. Choose one topic:

1.    How do you feel about winter?

2.    What activities do you like to do in winter?

Thursday, 5 February 2026

P2 EF710 Class 4

 

Today’s Agenda

·         Attendance

·         “Prescribed Learning Outcomes module” (PLOs). Go over Oral and Written.

·      Begin paragraph work- pass-in paragraph tomorrow, Test1

Easy topic

Should be review

“Structure of a Paragraph – full teaching EF67”

Talk about “Gold” paragraph

Structure and format

 

·      Begin “Ice Storm” module- poems

·      IF TIME Start “Literary Terms”

·      ONGOING Continue “Verbs in Simple Sentences”

 

Friday Agenda

·      “Self-Assessment Reflection” Week 1

·      Continue “Ice Storm” module

·      Test 1 - paragraph to pass in (last 50 minutes of class)

 

Monday Agenda

·      Continue “Ice Storm” module

·       

 

 

IDIOM I made it by the skin of my teeth. It was almost late, but just got there on time. I got my flight by the skin of my teeth.

 

 

 

 

 

FROM LAST CLASS

The list (of instructions) is written on the wall. (prepositional phrase)

The instructions are written on the wall.

 

The class is very hardworking.

The class members are very hardworking.

 

class, team, committee, group, family – collective nouns

 

GRAMMAR simple subject vs complete subject

The kids who are playing by the school next door to my house is/are noisy.

 

simple subject- one word

complete subject – subject plus any modifers

 

Mary (with her sister) makes cupcakes for seniors. UNUSUAL

 

Mary and her sister make cupcakes for seniors. MORE AUTHENTIC

SIMPLE SENTENCE SSV

 

Either Mary or Sam is/are a good student. VERY UNUSUAL

Mary and Sam are both good students. AUTHENTIC

 

-Common error in phrasing

Other countries people live in Vancouver.  XXX

People (from many other countries) live in Vancouver.

 

 

TO COME:

Paragraph writing: Topic sentences, Grabbers

Sentence writing- compound sentences

 

 

 

**

English Foundations 7, Prescribed Learning Outcomes

 

 

Ministry of Education in BC

from www.bced.gov.bc.ca

 

EF7 and CompLitStud10- same classes

 

EF7

 

PLOs “Prescribed Learning Outcomes”

Every Foundations course has PLOs.

 

-guidelines for what I have to teach

-areas of focus

-areas to explore in the course

 

Explore vocabulary

 

Prescribed Learning Outcomes

-prescribed(adj)- like an order, mandatory, not an option

-prescription(noun)

A doctor prescribes(v) some medicine. – need to take, tells you

You got a prescription from your doctor.

 

Some teachers teach prescriptive grammar. –hard grammar rules

who/whom

past perfect verb tense

 

 

Some teachers teach descriptive grammar. –soft grammar guidelines

 

 

-learning(verb,adj,noun) – synonyms- knowledge(n), study(v), understanding(n), discover(v), researching, educating, developing, growing, getting better, explore, improve, increase, comprehension

 

-outcome(n)- result, find, discovery, as a result, finish, end, conclude, completed, complete, therefore, final, sum up, at the end, what you got, aftermath, summation, summative 

 

PLOs (Prescribed Learning Outcomes) – the things that we should be able to do by the end of the course.

 

Setting goals- plan, target, aim, trajectory, path, vision, purpose, dream?, destination, ambition, project, aspiration(n), aspire(v)

“I want/aspire to be an immigration lawyer.”

“My aspiration is to run my own business.”

“My plan/aspiration/ambition is to be an interior designer.”

Stretch your comfort zone.

IDIOM your comfort zone – just doing what does not challenge you, used to it already, comfortable, no risk, no pressure

 

The PLOs will encourage us to grow.

 

IDIOM our comfort zone – no pressure, feel comfortable, feel confident

 

take risks in order to grow

challenge ourselves

 

Do you challenge yourself?

-learning a new/ different/ additional language

-make more money

-talking with kids

-communicate with other people

-immigrating/emigrating

VOCAB immigrate- come into a country permently    emigrate-leave a country permanently

She emigrated from China. She immigrated to Canada.

immigrate(v) immigration(n) immigrant(n, person)

 

-getting PR

 

 

 

Levels of mastery: EMERGING   DEVELOPING   PROFICIENT   EXTENDING

 

 

 

 

Going outside our comfort zone is challenging, frightening, destabilizing, stressful, etc.

On the other hand, this is where growth comes from.

-personal growth, professional growth, confidence, mastery, become expert, gain expertise

 

professional – get paid

semi-professional –

amateur- no money

I am a serious amateur musician.

 

 

-explore, grow

 

MY MOTTO: I have to say ‘yes’ to new good experiences, especially for music.

motto- special words you can tell yourself

 

 

 

The PLOS are opportunities for growth.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Our PLOS- goals for the course.

HOMEWORK Looked over for homework

A.ORAL LANGUAGE

B.READING AND VIEWING

C.WRITING AND REPRESENTING

D.EVIDENCE OF THINKING

 

ORAL

A1 – engage with others in sustained conversation

contribute ideas and support the ideas

 

IDIOM I lost my train of thought.

 

C1- enhance meaning …  by using conventions, forms, and structures of writing

MEANING – you already should know- EF6 -simple, compound, and complex sentence structures

MEANING – you already should know-EF6 -past, present, and future verb tenses, including simple, progressive, present perfect

 

C3 - clear, well-constructed sentences with a range of sentence lengths

and patterns

 

C5- generate, develop, and organize ideas for writing

          setting a purpose

          limiting the topic

          brainstorming ideas

          organizing ideas

 

 

 

 

Opportunities to talk in English:

-at work

-roommates

-friends

-classes in the library

-chatting with daughters

-chat with ChatGPT- follows your level

-volunteering e.g. seniors centre

-in class with classmates

-My wife- playing sports, hiking group, walking group, dance class

 

 

 

 

Listening for pronunciation and phrasing

-watching TV, movies

-Duolingo

-radio, e.g. CBC, 690am- excellent pronunciation

Canadian Broadcasting Corporation- national radio and TV

-podcasts- radio but internet-based, not live

genres- history, news, music, story-telling, sports, fashion, politics, etc.

SUBSCRIBE / UNSUBSCRIBE

 

 

 

**

BIG QUESTIONS to think about when you read through them

1.    Which PLOs feel most important to you? Which ones resonate with you? Which ones stand out to you as being relevant to your life?

resonate(v)- vibrate, shake, has deep meaning, feel deeply

relevant- related, connected to, important, meaningful

 

2.    Which of the PLOs do you already do well? Which ones are your strengths. Which one are you already good at?

-PROFICIENT/EXTENDING

 

3.    Which of the PLOs do you want to improve upon? Which ones reveal some weakness that could strengthen? Which ones do feel would be worthwhile working on?

-         EMERGING, DEVELOPING

 

Every Friday, we will do a “Self-Assessment Reflection”.

I will talk about this tomorrow. The reflection will be based on the PLOs. What were your strengths and challenges over the past week. What will be your areas for improvement for next week.

 

**

Marking- based on PLOs

 

EF7 and CompLit10- marked the same, in SHEC- treated the same

Comp11- marked a bit harder

 

 

**

“Gold” paragraph

How does it look on the page?

-one block of writing

-double spaced

-left-justified  - justified

-first word is indented  -computer keyboard TAB key, width of your finger or thumb approx.

-Title: Test1, Quiz 2, Test 2, Quiz 3

-top right corner- full name, class, period, date   Joe Ahmed, EF7, P2, Feb 6, 2026

 

-write within the margins, red lines on the sides of your paper

-write in blue or black ink

 

 

Write at least 150 words, 150-250 max

 

IDIOM Good things come in small packages.

IDIOM Less is more.

 

**

I will often give a choice of two topics. You can choose one.

 

                     Test1

Write down the topic.

 

 

 

**

Content of a paragraph – review from EF4,5,6

 

1.Topic sentence- usually first sentence, aside from a Grabber/Hook

tells the reader what the paragraph is about, gives your take on the topic

-         topic and controlling idea- how you are choosing to address the topic, your take on it

 

2.Supporting sentences- points, evidence, examples, details of what you want to talk about (3 is the magic number)  

 

3.Concluding sentence

 

NOTE: The topic sentence and the concluding sentence are often very

  similar.

 

A paragraph is like a sandwich. Let’s write a tasty paragraph.

 

ADVICE:

Before you start writing a paragraph:

1.    Read the question several times. Make sure you know what the question is asking you to do.

2.    Make a plan. Choose 3-4 ideas that you want to write about in the paragraph. Stick to that plan.

3.    Generate some vocabulary to use- synonyms, antonyms,

 

last a long time- eternal(adj) eternity(n)

 

passive vocabulary, active vocabulary

 

Write those words down. Writing down the words helps new words to bubble up.

 

gold golden gilt

a gold ring

golden hair, golden days, the golden years, golden era, Golden Retriever.

heart of gold, song “Heart of Gold”

 

goal

 

New friend for vocabulary: thesaurus.com

 

 

SLANGY cute, cutie-pie, sweety-pie

She is as sweet as candy.

He is a sweetheart.

He is my sweetheart.

 

Pet names (does not mean names for animals) cute names for your husband, wife, children: pumpkin, honey, sweetie, babe, sugar,

honey-bunny, etc.

 

 

 

P1 EF71011 Class 4

 

Today’s Agenda

·         Attendance

·         “Prescribed Learning Outcomes module” (PLOs). Go over Oral and Written.

·      Begin paragraph work- pass-in paragraph tomorrow, Test1

Easy topic

Should be review

“Structure of a Paragraph teaching EF67”

Talk about “Gold” paragraph

Structure and format

 

·      TOMORROW Start “Literary Terms”

·      Begin “Ice Storm” module- poems

·      ONGOING Continue “Verbs in Simple Sentences”

 

Friday Agenda

·      “Self-Assessment Reflection” Week 1

·      Continue “Ice Storm” module

·      Test 1 - paragraph to pass in (last 50m of class)

 

Monday Agenda

·      Continue “Ice Storm” module

·       

 

TO COME:

Paragraph writing: Topic sentences, Grabbers

Sentence writing- compound sentences

 

 

 

**

Ministry of Education in BC

from www.bced.gov.bc.ca

 

EF7 and CompLitStud10- same classes

 

EF7

 

PLOs “Prescribed Learning Outcomes”

Every Foundations course has PLOs.

 

-guidelines for what I have to teach

-areas of focus

-areas to explore in the course

 

Explore vocabulary

 

Prescribed Learning Outcomes

-prescribed(adj)- like an order, mandatory, not an option

-prescription(noun)

A doctor prescribes(v) some medicine. – need to take, tells you

 

Some teachers teach prescriptive grammar. –hard grammar rules

who/whom

past perfect verb tense

 

Some teachers teach descriptive grammar. –soft grammar guidelines

 

 

-learning(verb,adj,noun) – synonyms- knowledge(n), study(v), understanding(n), discover(v), research, educating, developing, growing, getting better, explore, improve, increase, comprehension

 

-outcome(n)- result, find, discovery, as a result, finish, end, conclude, completed, complete, therefore, final, sum up, at the end, what you got, aftermath, summation, summative 

 

PLOs (Prescribed Learning Outcomes) – the things that we should be able to do by the end of the course.

 

Setting goals- plan, target, aim, trajectory, path, vision, purpose, dream?, destination, ambition, project, aspiration(n), aspire(v)

“I want/aspire to be an immigration lawyer.”

“My aspiration is to run my own business.”

“My plan/aspiration/ambition is to be an interior designer.”

Stretch your comfort zone.

IDIOM your comfort zone – just doing what does not challenge you, used to it already, comfortable, no risk, no pressure

 

The PLOs will encourage us to grow.

 

IDIOM our comfort zone – no pressure, feel comfortable, feel confident

 

take risks in order to grow

challenge ourselves

 

Do you challenge yourself?

-learning a new/ different/ additional language

-make more money

-talking with kids

-communicate with other people

-immigrating/emigrating

VOCAB immigrate- come into a country permently    emigrate-leave a country permanently

She emigrated from China. She immigrated to Canada.

immigrate(v) immigration(n) immigrant(n, person)

 

-getting PR

 

Levels of mastery: EMERGING   DEVELOPING   PROFICIENT   EXTENDING

 

 

 

 

Going outside our comfort zone is challenging, frightening, destabilizing, stressful, etc.

On the other hand, this is where growth comes from.

-personal growth, professional growth, confidence, mastery, become expert, gain expertise

 

professional – get paid

semi-professional –

amateur- no money

I am a serious amateur musician.

 

 

-explore, grow

 

MY MOTTO: I have to say ‘yes’ to new good experiences, especially for music.

motto- special words you can tell yourself

 

 

The PLOS are opportunities for growth.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Our PLOS- goals for the course.

HOMEWORK Looked over for homework

A.ORAL LANGUAGE

B.READING AND VIEWING

C.WRITING AND REPRESENTING

D.EVIDENCE OF THINKING

 

 

A1 – engage with others in sustained conversation

communicate ideas on a variety of topics

describe diverse points of view

 

C1- enhance meaning …  using conventions, forms, and structures of writing

MEANING – you already should know- simple, compound, and complex sentence structures

MEANING – you already should know- -past, present, and future verb tenses, including simple, progressive, present perfect

 

C5- generate, develop, and organize ideas for writing

          setting the topic

          limiting the topic

          brainstorming ideas

          organizing ideas

 

 

 

 

Opportunities to talk in English:

-at work

-roommates

-friends

-classes in the library

-chatting with daughters

-chat with ChatGPT- follows your level

-volunteering e.g. seniors centre

-in class with classmates

-My wife- playing sports, hiking group, walking group, dance class

 

Listening for pronunciation and phrasing

-watching TV

-Duolingo

-radio, e.g. CBC- excellent pronunciation

-podcasts

 

BIG QUESTIONS to think about when you read through them

1.    Which PLOs feel most important to you? Which ones resonate with you? Which ones stand out to you as being relevant to your life?

resonate(v)- vibrate, shake, has deep meaning, feel deeply

relevant- related, connected to, important, meaningful

 

2.    Which of the PLOs do you already do well? Which ones are your strengths. Which one are you already good at?

-PROFICIENT/EXTENDING

 

3.    Which of the PLOs do you want to improve upon? Which ones reveal some weakness that could strengthen? Which ones do feel would be worthwhile working on?

-         EMERGING, DEVELOPING

 

 

Every Friday, we will do a “Self-Assessment Reflection”.

I will talk about this tomorrow. The reflection will be based on the PLOs what you are strengths and what are your areas for improvement.

 

Marking

EF7 and CompLit10- marked the same

Comp11- marked a bit harder

 

 

 

 

“Gold” paragraph

How does it look on the page?

-one block of writing

-doublespaced

-left-justified  - justified

-first word is indented  -computer keyboard TAB key, width of your finger or thumb approx.

-Title: Test1, Quiz 2, Test 2, Quiz 3

-top right corner- full name, class, date   e.g. Comp11, EF7, CompLit10

 

-write within the margins, red lines on the sides of your paper

-write in blue or black ink

 

 

Write at least 150 words, 150-250 max

 

 

 

 

**

I will often give a choice of two topics. You can choose one.

 

                     Test1

Write down the topic.

 

 

**

Content of a paragraph

1.Topic sentence- usually first sentence

tells the reader what the paragraph is about, gives your take on the topic

-         topic and controlling idea

 

2.Supporting sentences- points, evidence, examples

3.Concluding sentence

 

ADVICE:

Before you start writing a paragraph:

1.    Read the question several times. Make sure you know what the question is asking you to do.

2.    Make a plan. Choose 3-4 ideas that you want to write about in the paragraph. Stick to that plan.

3.    Generate some vocabulary to use- synonyms, antonyms,

 

passive vocabulary, active vocabulary

 

Write those words down. Writing down the words helps new words to bubble up.