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· Attendance
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· NEW SKILL- Sentence
combining
· Verb tense review
Thursday
· Return essay
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· Optional replacement
quiz and/or test (final 90m)
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Friday- Last day
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comments
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student-teacher conferences
Quarter 2 (Nov-Jan)
will begin Thursday, November 12th.
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Simple, compound, complex- adv cl, adj, cl, n cl.
noun clauses
P1
Quiz5
Devices and notes away.
Write a sentence with a noun clause for each.
1. say exercise
She said that exercise is good for us.
2. think practical
I think that practical skills are better than book
learning.
The instructor thinks that her students will do
well in the practical part of the course.
3. wonder decision
We wonder what her decision will be.
4. ask quality
We asked if the quality of the material
is good.
5. tell exit
Can you tell
me where the exit is?
The flight attendant told us where the emergency exits are.
6. remember fantastic
She remembers how fantastic the travel trip/vacation/getaway
was.
I remember that you looked fantastic at our wedding.
Sentence
combining
Learned
sentence types
SIMPLE
COMPOUND
COMPLEX
COMPOUND-COMPLEX-
mix of compound and complex together
e.g. Shira
loves chocolate, but I don’t because I am allergic.
Essential
sentence writing
Daily
practice! Consistency. Slow and steady progress.
Everything
is habit!
NEXT LEVEL
Sentence
combining- take 3-4-5 short sentences, combine into one
GOAL- dense
clear sentences -balance
dense- a lot
of information
clear- easy
to read and understand
balance- density
and clarity
EXAMPLE:
a.
Bill felt hungry.
b.
Bill had no lunch
today.
Two
approaches:
1.coordinate
2.subordinate
+ COORDINATION-
‘co’- together- cooperate, coworker, colleague, collaboration
coordinated
clauses- compound sentence
,SOBA ; ;
TRANS,
a.
Bill felt hungry.
b.
Bill had no lunch
today.
Bill had no
lunch today, so he felt hungry.
Bill had no
lunch today, and he felt hungry. Sounds better?
Bill felt
hungry; he had no lunch today.
Bill had no
lunch today; he felt hungry.
Bill had no
lunch today; therefore, he felt hungry.
Bill had no
lunch today. Therefore, he felt hungry. 2 SIMPLES
You can
decide what kind of sentence you want. It is your decision. You are in charge.
+ SUBORDINATION-
‘sub’- under- subway, subtitle, subsitute, subcutaneous
subordinated
clauses- complex sentences- adverb cl, noun cl, adjective cl
a.
Bill felt hungry.
b.
Bill had no lunch
today.
COMPLEX
SENTENCE
Bill felt
hungry because he had no lunch today. adv cl
Bill felt
hungry since/as he had no lunch today. adv cl
Bill, who
had no lunch today, felt hungry. adj cl
Bill, who
felt hungry, had no lunch today. adj cl
Bill said that
he felt hungry because he had no lunch today. n cl adv cl
Bill felt
hungry because he had no lunch today. no comma
Because
Bill had no lunch today, he felt hungry. comma
Bill thought
that he was hungry because he had no lunch today.
Bill thought
that he was hungry because he didn’t have lunch today.
Coordination
and subordination
Sentence
Combining Exercise
“Neighbourhood
Party”
Neighbourhood
Party
1.
Everyone had to
cook a dish.
The dish was ethnic.
Everyone
had to prepare copies of the recipe.
These
were to be put beside the dish.
This
was done for our neighbourhood party.
EASY WINS
Everyone
had to cook an ethnic dish.
Everyone
had to prepare copies of the recipe to put beside the dish.
This
was done for our neighbourhood party.
COMBINE
For
our neighbourhood party, everyone had
to cook an ethnic dish and prepare
copies of the recipe to put beside it.
SIMPLE
SVV
For
our neighbourhood party, everyone had
to cook an ethnic dish, and they prepared
copies of the recipe to put beside it.
COMPOUND
SV, SOBA SV.
2.
We chose to take
lentil soup.
Our family has German heritage.
SIMPLE?
COMPOUND? COMPLEX?
We chose
to take lentil soup because our family has
German heritage. COMPLEX- ADV CL
Our family
has German heritage, so we chose to take lentil soup.
COMPOUND SV,
SOBA SV.
Our family
has German heritage; therefore, we chose to take lentil soup.
3.
Mom supervised
me.
I chopped the onions.
I cut
the bacon into pieces.
The
pieces were small.
I
made the soup.
POSSIBLE
SOLUTION
While Mom
supervised me, I made the soup by cutting the bacon into small pieces and chopping
the onions. COMPLEX
Mom
supervised me, so I chopped the onions and bacon into pieces; after that, I made
the soup.
My Mom
supervised me to make the soup; I chopped the onions and cut the bacon into small
pieces.
My Mom
supervised me to make the soup, and I chopped the onions and cut the bacon into
small pieces.
While I chopped
the onion, mom supervised me, and I cut the bacon into pieces that were small
because I made the soup.
EDIT
While I chopped
the onion and cut the bacon into small pieces, mom supervised me on how to make
the soup.
My mom
supervised me how to cut the bacon into small pieces and chop the onions
into small pieces while I made the soup.
4.
Then, we had to
compose the recipe.
We really don't have a formal one.
We
couldn't arrive without our stack of recipe cards.
MY WAY
We really
don't have a formal recipe, so we had to compose one because we couldn't arrive
without our stack of recipe cards.
COMPOUND
COMPLEX
Then we had to
compose a recipe, but we didn’t have a formal recipe, so? we couldn't
arrive without our stack of recipe cards.
AVOID SV,
SOBA SV, SOBA SV.
EDIT
Then we had to
compose a recipe, but we didn’t have a formal recipe; we couldn't arrive
without our stack of recipe cards.
PHRASING I
couldn’t go to work without my phone.
He couldn’t go
to Japan without seeing Mount Fuji.
You can’t come
to Vancouver and not see Cypress Lookoff.
potluck- everybody
brings a dish to share
5.
That night we
were treated to a feast of food.
The food was different.
The
feast included a wheat salad.
The
salad was from the Middle East.
That night
we were treated to a feast of many different foods; this included a wheat salad
that was from the Middle East.
This included
a wheat salad that was from the Middle East.
This included
a wheat salad from the Middle East.
This included
a Middle-Eastern wheat salad.
Maple syrup
comes from Canada.
Maple syrup
is a Canadian treat.
6.
The feast
included a potato dish.
This dish was from Switzerland.
The
feast included a lamb dish.
This
dish was from Portugal.
The
feast included a super ice cream.
The
ice cream was Italian.
The feast
included a potato dish from Switzerland, a lamb dish from Portugal, and a super
ice cream from Italy.
The feast
included a Swiss potato dish, a Portuguese lamb dish, and a super Italian ice
cream.
Canada- Canadian
the US- American
Germany- German
France-
French
Iran-
Iranian, Persian
New Zealand-
New Zealand
Holland-
Dutch
the
Netherlands? Holland?
Iceland- Icelandic
Sweden- Swedish
Ireland-
Irish
Scotland-
Scottish
Japan- Japanese
Korea-
Korean
Vietnam-
Vietnamese
Thailand- Thai
the Philippines-
pinoy, filipino, philippino
Sentence combining
books- college level, William Strong- author
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Tomorrow- optional
replacement quiz and/or test.
Replacement
quiz- 6 sentences as usual, mix of simple, compound, and complex
Replacement
test- regular paragraph (150ww)- new everyday topic
