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Good morning.
We’ll get started at 11.
Good morning.
We’ll get started at 11.
Today’s agenda:
1.
Replacement quiz
or test for next Thursday
Replace
one quiz or test that you missed or got a low mark.
Email
me by Friday, 3PM
Attach
the quiz or test that I corrected so that I know which one you want to replace.
2.
Begin essay work
3.
Animal Farm Ch8
Tuesday - Animal Farm Ch
8
Wednesday - Animal Farm Ch
9
Thursday - Animal Farm Ch
10
Friday – substitute teacher
Monday- essay on Animal
Farm
Sentences – Paragraphs (150-200w)–
Essays (300-350w) – Papers (5-10pp), Thesis (80-120pp), Book (300-500pp)
English 12 Provincial Exam
(changed now)
“In paragraph form and in at least 150
words…”
“In
a multi-paragraph (3 or more paragraphs) expository essay of at least 300
words…”
essay
– multiparagraph writing (3-7 paragraphs)
most
common style of essay – 5-paragraph essay
I
emailed you some essay work about an hour ago.
essay
– 3 parts
1.
Introductory paragraph -opener, introduced the essay,
lets the
reader know what they will be reading about
a.
Grabber
b.
Thesis statement – same job as Topic
Sentence for a paragraph: gives topic, gives the controlling idea
Topic +
Controlling idea = Thesis statement
c.
Preview of the three points
2.
Body paragraphs
1.
Topic sentence
Supporting
sentences
2.
Topic sentence
Supporting
sentences
3.
Topic sentence
Supporting
sentences
3.
Concluding paragraph – restatement – same
ideas,
different
words
Restate the Thesis statement
Restate the three points
End with a Clincher (like a grabber,
comes at the
end)
Grabber – optional attention getting
device at the beginning of
a paragraph or essay
a.
General to
specific-
e.g. There are many ways to get around the city, from
bus to skateboard. However, cycling is the most efficient way.
b.
Fact or statistic
e.g. In Vancouver, about 70% of people drive cars, and
about 15% of people ride bicycles. These numbers should be switched because
cycling is a great means of personal transportation.
New topic: According to
Statistics Canada, 30% of Canadians are newcomers.
c.
Anecdote
e.g. I have riding my bicycle several times a week for
the past 35 years. It is an excellent means of transportation
d.
Historical
e.g. Modern bicycles were invented about
100 years ago. Since then they have become excellent means of personal transportation.
e.
Question?
Can you ride a bicycle?
f.
Adage, idiom,
expression
e.g. ??
g.
Famous quotation
from famous person
Robert Frost said, “There is nothing more pleasurable than riding a
bicycle down a country lane.”
Choose one. Choose the one
that seems to best suit the topic.
That’s a lot of information for one day. We’ll keep working
on it
all week. It will become
clearer day by day. You’ll get it!
HW Review “The
Bare Bones of the Five-Paragraph Essay” and “Bicycle” essay
Good morning.
We’ll get started at 11.
Today’s agenda:
1.
Replacement quiz
or test for next Thursday
Replace
one quiz or test that you missed or got a low mark.
Email
me by Friday, 3PM
Attach
the quiz or test that I corrected so that I know which one you want to replace.
2.
Begin essay work
3.
Animal Farm Ch8
Tuesday - Animal Farm Ch
8
Wednesday - Animal Farm Ch
9
Thursday - Animal Farm Ch
10
Friday – substitute teacher
Monday- essay on Animal
Farm
Sentences – Paragraphs (150-200w)–
Essays (300-350w) – Papers (5-10pp), Thesis (80-120pp), Book (300-500pp)
English 12 Provincial Exam
(changed now)
“In paragraph form and in at least 150
words…”
“In
a multi-paragraph (3 or more paragraphs) expository essay of at least 300
words…”
essay
– multiparagraph writing (3-7 paragraphs)
most
common style of essay – 5-paragraph essay
I
emailed you some essay work about an hour ago.
essay
– 3 parts
1.
Introductory paragraph -opener, introduced the essay,
lets the
reader know what they will be reading about
a.
Grabber
b.
Thesis statement – same job as Topic
Sentence for a paragraph: gives topic, gives the controlling idea
Topic +
Controlling idea = Thesis statement
c.
Preview of the three points
2.
Body paragraphs
1.
Topic sentence
Supporting
sentences
2.
Topic sentence
Supporting
sentences
3.
Topic sentence
Supporting
sentences
3.
Concluding paragraph – restatement – same
ideas,
different
words
Restate the Thesis statement
Restate the three points
End with a Clincher (like a grabber,
comes at the
end)
Grabber – optional attention getting
device at the beginning of
a paragraph or essay
a.
General to
specific-
e.g. There are many ways to get around the city, from
bus to skateboard. However, cycling is the most efficient way.
b.
Fact or statistic
e.g. In Vancouver, about 70% of people drive cars, and
about 15% of people ride bicycles. These numbers should be switched because
cycling is a great means of personal transportation.
New topic: According to
Statistics Canada, 30% of Canadians are newcomers.
c.
Anecdote
e.g. I have riding my bicycle several times a week for
the past 35 years. It is an excellent means of transportation
d.
Historical
e.g. Modern bicycles were invented about
100 years ago. Since then they have become excellent means of personal transportation.
e.
Question?
Can you ride a bicycle?
f.
Adage, idiom,
expression
e.g. ??
g.
Famous quotation
from famous person
Robert Frost said, “There is nothing more pleasurable than riding a
bicycle down a country lane.”
Choose one. Choose the one
that seems to best suit the topic.
That’s a lot of information for one day. We’ll keep working
on it
all week. It will become
clearer day by day. You’ll get it!
HW Review “The
Bare Bones of the Five-Paragraph Essay” and “Bicycle” essay
l Chapter 8 Discussion Notes
6th Commandment changed
“none cared to mention it” (61)
push to finish windmill
Squealer's quota reports, overinflated, lies
animals losing perspective on pre-revolutionary life
Napoleon increasingly withdrawn, elitist (62)
appears
with dogs and rooster
formal
grandiose titles (62)
Napoleon credited with every success
Napoleon song (63)
propaganda Snowball plot to murder Napoleon- guard
dogs, taster
LINK TO STALINIST HONOURIFICS
READ
FROM PHOTOCOPY ABOUT APPLAUSE
N. Korean TV anchor, Ri Chun Hee:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w7J2Nnl7Ano&app=desktop
N. Korean mourners, Kim Jong Il:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ccsNr9UJeVY
Mr. Frederick vilified
more Snowball propaganda, gander false confession,
suicide
MORE FALSE CONFESSIONS
Snowball not received “Animal Hero, First Class”
censured
for cowardice
Squealer remakes animals' memories (65)
windmill finished, Napoleon Mill, foreshadowing
“explosives would lay them low this time” (66)
180 switch from
all confusion blamed on Snowball (67)
wood “carted away at high speed”
counterfeit cash from wood to buy machinery for
windmill-
animals prepare for attack from
guns, animals fall back, Pilkington message “Serves
you right” (69)
Benjamin sees men to blast windmill, destroyed
animals counter-attack, bloody melee, Napoleon in rear
Squealer (absent during fight) spins defeat (71)
Boxer wounded, weary
Napoleon awards to self “Order of Green Banner” (72)
whiskey, pigs drunk, hungover
sow field of barley (73)
Squealer caught changing Fifth Commandment
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