E7/10 Oct 19

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Today’s agenda:

1. Plagiarism

SHEC Academic Honesty Policy

2. Review test

3. Continue with quotation work

4. Animal Farm Ch 4

5. HW Animal Farm Ch 5, make notes

Animal Farm

Test on Chapters 1-3

These are important words or phrases from Chapters 1-3.  In a sentence or two for each one, explain what each is and why it’s important in the novel:

1. the hoof and horn

What is it? flag of Animal Farm, created by animals

Why is it important? represents their freedom, ownership of farm, symbolic

The flag of Animal Farm consists of a green field with a hoof and a horn. According to the book, the green represents the fields of England, while the hoof and horn represents the Republic of the Animals.

-cheating on the test

-plagiarized this text

-not what I wanted to do

-disappointing

-0/6, write letter

-rather that person wasn’t in my class anymore

-school rule – 2 chances

2. apples and milk

- favourite food for the animals, treat for them

- pigs took it all, pretended it was a hardship, “sacrifice”

- shows that pigs are liars, selfish

3. “FOUR LEGS GOOD, TWO LEGS BAD”

- from 7 Commandments, simplified

-even the least intelligent animal can remember, e.g. sheep

- all the animals can learn the importance of the main ideas of Animalism

4. “I will work harder.”

- “personal motto”(18)Boxer

-shows he is responsible, hardworking, good “comrade“

-he is an example to the other animals, inspiring

-he’s true believer in the rebellion

5. “Beasts of England”

-song, like a national anthem

-comes from Old Major, taught the animals

-rallying cry, unite the animals

6. brainworkers

-term pigs use for themselves

-managers, organizers

-no labour, no hard physical work

-shows the divide between pigs and other animals

-pigs are on top, bosses, higher status

Using Quotations

incorporate text from other sources into our own writing

“ “

- just a few words (1-4,5)

- quotation has to be grammatical

- You write the sentence. The quoted words are inside your sentence. 

Example:

“I will work harder.”

- “personal motto”(18) Boxer

-shows he is responsible, hardworking, good “comrade“

-he is an example to the other animals, inspiring GOOD POINT, NO ROOM

-he’s true believer in the rebellion

The phrase “I will work harder” comes from Boxer, the big horse. It is his “personal motto”(18) which he says to himself when he is facing hard work; this shows that he feels very responsible for the success of the farm, and that he is a true believer in the rebellion.

“personal motto” is incorporated into my sentence

Please write your examples about Benjamin in chat to share:

1. Benjamin is a very strange animal because he always give a "cryptic answer"(27) to all the simple question.

2. Benjamin who could read as well as pig, but he said, there was "nothing worth reading." RW Plagiarized

SIMPLE COMPOUND COMPLEX

Benjamin could read as well as the pigs, but he said there was "nothing worth reading".(p?) Page number (21)

“Benjamin could read as well as any pig” (21)

3. After the rebellion , Benjamin didn’t change his attitude. He just did his job with no “shirking” (12) and no “volunteering”. page number?

4. Benjamin was a "cynical" donkey who was always keep silent and never "laughed". (p?)

5. Benjamin  know knew how to read "as well as any pig."(23)

Benjamin  know knew how to “read as well as any pig."(23)

6. Benjamin the donkey was the "oldest animal" on the farm; also, he had was very bad "tempered."

The cat has a bad temper.

The man was bad-tempered.

7. Benjamin is the oldest one in the farm; he "seldom talked"(p?), "never laughed", and working hard.

The page number tells us where it is.

We are having a party at a restaurant. Please come down.

Where?

-no answer-

He "seldom talked", "never laughed", and working worked hard. parallelism – very important

You have exercises.

8. Benjamin is an the "oldest donkey"(Chapter 1), who can read  the Seven Commandments.

9. Benjamin was an old and self-absorbed donkey; however, he “was devoted to Boxer” (1).

self-absorbed

10. Benjamin is only person who knew new leaders are useless. True, but no quotation “”

11. Benjamin is a very old and "bad-tempered" (1) donkey who is "devoted to Boxer"(1).

12. Benjamin is a donkey who never change and gives a cryptic answer. For instance, “Donkeys live a long time”(19). frag

13. Benjamin had a bad temper and he didn't talk to others; also, he never laughed because he felt there was "nothing to laugh at"(2).

14. Benjamin was the oldest donkey, and he was humourless and had a "slow obstinate"(19) manner.

It is getting better. We’ll keep practicing. In a few weeks, it will be much better. It will feel more natural and easier.

**special treat

Minnie Ripperton “Loving You”

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7MmEVWI8Ieo

incredible voice- whistle range- extremely high notes

• MY LECTURE NOTES

• Chapter 4 notes

 Snowball and Napoleon spread news of rebellion via pigeons

 Foxwood- Mr. Pilkington, “easy-going”

 Pinchfield- Mr. Frederick, “tough” “shrewd”

■ enemies,

■ England and Germany

 Frederick and Pilkington spread propaganda about Manor/Animal Farm

 “Wave of rebelliousness ran through the countryside” (25)

 “Beasts of England” spread

Battle of the Cowshed

 Jones and others attempt recapture of farm

 Snowball, defensive strategist, leader

 Where is Napoleon?

 Men “ignomious” retreat

 Boxer shaken, no desire to kill

 Mollie coward

 medals awarded

 Mr. Jones gun to be fired ceremoniously on anniversary of Battle of the Cowshed and the Rebellion (CAP)

 animals increasing use of symbolism, ritual

 KEY POINT- Snowball is the leader and the brave 

hero

Napoleon is nowhere to be found during this important battle