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Good morning, everyone.
We’ll get started at 8:30.
Today’s agenda:
1.
Review quiz
2.
Review sentences
3.
Continue essays
Prewriting - planning
4.
JP Ch 14
5.
HW JP Ch 15, make notes
Friday – no school for you,
Pro D for Adult Ed.
Monday- Ch 15
Quiz- email it to me by 9:45
Due at 9:45, a few minutes
grace
Don’t wait for the last
minute. If it’s late. I won’t take it.
Pass it in early or on time
to avoid problems.
Pick three out of the
five.
Write your own sentence which
incorporates the quoted words or phrase.
e.g. Jook Liang – “not ugly”(41)
Although
Poh-poh was very critical of Jook Liang’s appearance, the little girl knew that
she was “not ugly”(41).
Incorporate quoted material
into your sentence:
1.
Wong Bak – “Monkey
Man”(24)
Jook Liang thought of the old
man as a “Monkey Man”(24) because his face was twisted.
2.
Jook Liang – “perfect
make-believe world”(35)
3.
Father – “also
Canadian”(150)
4.
Jung Sum – “not
ordinary”(87)
5.
Old Yuen- “bad
luck”(121)
Write your examples in the
chat to share:
1.
Jung Sum loves to
practice boxing and has many boy friends, but he is a “not
ordinary” boy as Poh Poh said.
has many
boy friends Meaning? male friends, friends who are guys
2.
When Frank was
little, Old Yuen had a “bad luck”(121) with a “red-headed” woman
who stole all of his money that he earned from gambling and was gone.
parallelism RW
… a
“red-headed” woman who stole all of his money that he earned from
gambling and then ran away.
Writing style- good smooth
beautiful style
3.
Although the
Canadian government treated Chinese as “residence alien”(p?), the father
still insisted the children are “also Canadian”(p?) because they grew up
in Canada.
3.
Old
Yuen ruined his winning lottery ticket in an
accident, so his “bad luck”(p?) was legendary. plagiarized
“legendary”(116)
If
you borrow a word, quote it. If you don’t want to quote it, use a synonym.
thesaurus
– gives you synonyms and antonyms for words
build
vocabulary
A
Word a Day (AWAD) – daily email with one new vocab word
4.
Jook Liang and
Wong Bak became built/created/developed/made a "true
friend"(p?) relationship since they had formed a "perfect
make-believe world." (35)
5.
Although Jung
Sum trained in boxing to make him look more masculine, he was afflicted
inside because his identity “not ordinary” kid. phrasing
-because
his identity indicated that he was “not [an] ordinary”(p?) kid.
[ ] square brackets, changing
a quotation slightly
With all these little
mistakes, your mark goes from 10/10 to 5/10. I’m giving the big marks to writing
that is full of errors. This is English 11.
FOCUS: Maintain the quality of the sentences. The quality of
the sentences is dropping.
SIMPLE
COMPOUND
COMPLEX
COMPOUND COMPLEX
If
your sentences are not of a high quality, you will be very limited in the
school work that you can do.
Sentence combining work- must
continue that
HW for Monday “Rock Concert”
High quality sentences are
the absolute foundation of academic success. You owe it to yourself to continue
to improve in your sentence writing.
We are doing good work, and
we have a lot of work left to do. By now in the course, you should have a good idea
of where you are strong and where you are weak.
Work to improve the weak areas.
Don’t be a flamingo!
· MY LECTURE NOTES The Jade Peony
Ch 14
"forbidden
to meet my friends after school" p229
"shame
all the Chinese people on earth"
growing anti-Japanese
sentiment in Vancouver at the time
"Can a
poor man afford a lucky house?" p231
"Never
forget, we together Chinese" p232
"Enemy
cunning" p235
"I was
to spend eternity shelling..." pp235-6
"Mrs.
Lim's lips had not moved"
"Keep
up"
"bad
end of Hastings Street" p241
Powell Street
– used to be the Japanese area in Vancouver
Japan Town
"enemy
territory" p242
"The
news is much worse today, May" p244
"putting
us away"
"the
enemy... one of them was standing too close to Meiying" p245
"reluctantly
thrilled by their baseball skills" p247
Very dangerous
situation for these teenagers – Romeo and Juliet
-tragedy
"Never
betray your own kind"
"Keep
your business in your pants" p247
"She
was a traitor"
"Promise
me..." p248
"I
wondered why we, the Chinese, had not joined the Halloween mob that attacked
Japtown" p248
"The
Japanese tied up people... Chinese soldiers gave away gum" p249
"I
hadn't stopped her" p249
"If she
was a traitor, what was I?" p250
Sek Lung
protects Meiying – keeps her secret, he is implicated on the secret
"Burn
out his lungs" p251
"You
Japs?" p254
"I AM
CHINESE" p254
"Nothing...
was out of the ordinary, except..." p255
"Stepmother
silently embraced her" p256
"The
harsh voice seemed physically to hammer away at the thin figure" p257
Good morning, everyone.
We’ll get started at 8:30.
Today’s agenda:
1.
Review quiz
2.
Review sentences
3.
Continue essays
Prewriting - planning
4.
JP Ch 14
5.
HW JP Ch 15, make notes
Friday – no school for you,
Pro D for Adult Ed.
Monday- Ch 15
Quiz- email it to me by 9:45
Due at 9:45, a few minutes
grace
Don’t wait for the last
minute. If it’s late. I won’t take it.
Pass it in early or on time
to avoid problems.
Pick three out of the
five.
Write your own sentence which
incorporates the quoted words or phrase.
e.g. Jook Liang – “not ugly”(41)
Although
Poh-poh was very critical of Jook Liang’s appearance, the little girl knew that
she was “not ugly”(41).
Incorporate quoted material
into your sentence:
1.
Wong Bak – “Monkey
Man”(24)
Jook Liang thought of the old
man as a “Monkey Man”(24) because his face was twisted.
2.
Jook Liang – “perfect
make-believe world”(35)
3.
Father – “also
Canadian”(150)
4.
Jung Sum – “not
ordinary”(87)
5.
Old Yuen- “bad
luck”(121)
Write your examples in the
chat to share:
1.
Jung Sum loves to
practice boxing and has many boy friends, but he is a “not
ordinary” boy as Poh Poh said.
has many
boy friends Meaning? male friends, friends who are guys
2.
When Frank was
little, Old Yuen had a “bad luck”(121) with a “red-headed” woman
who stole all of his money that he earned from gambling and was gone.
parallelism RW
… a
“red-headed” woman who stole all of his money that he earned from
gambling and then ran away.
Writing style- good smooth
beautiful style
3.
Although the
Canadian government treated Chinese as “residence alien”(p?), the father
still insisted the children are “also Canadian”(p?) because they grew up
in Canada.
3.
Old
Yuen ruined his winning lottery ticket in an
accident, so his “bad luck”(p?) was legendary. plagiarized
“legendary”(116)
If
you borrow a word, quote it. If you don’t want to quote it, use a synonym.
thesaurus
– gives you synonyms and antonyms for words
build
vocabulary
A
Word a Day (AWAD) – daily email with one new vocab word
4.
Jook Liang and
Wong Bak became built/created/developed/made a "true
friend"(p?) relationship since they had formed a "perfect
make-believe world." (35)
5.
Although Jung
Sum trained in boxing to make him look more masculine, he was afflicted
inside because his identity “not ordinary” kid. phrasing
-because
his identity indicated that he was “not [an] ordinary”(p?) kid.
[ ] square brackets, changing
a quotation slightly
With all these little
mistakes, your mark goes from 10/10 to 5/10. I’m giving the big marks to writing
that is full of errors. This is English 11.
FOCUS: Maintain the quality of the sentences. The quality of
the sentences is dropping.
SIMPLE
COMPOUND
COMPLEX
COMPOUND COMPLEX
If
your sentences are not of a high quality, you will be very limited in the
school work that you can do.
Sentence combining work- must
continue that
HW for Monday “Rock Concert”
High quality sentences are
the absolute foundation of academic success. You owe it to yourself to continue
to improve in your sentence writing.
We are doing good work, and
we have a lot of work left to do. By now in the course, you should have a good idea
of where you are strong and where you are weak.
Work to improve the weak areas.
Don’t be a flamingo!
· MY LECTURE NOTES The Jade Peony
Ch 14
"forbidden
to meet my friends after school" p229
"shame
all the Chinese people on earth"
growing anti-Japanese
sentiment in Vancouver at the time
"Can a
poor man afford a lucky house?" p231
"Never
forget, we together Chinese" p232
"Enemy
cunning" p235
"I was
to spend eternity shelling..." pp235-6
"Mrs.
Lim's lips had not moved"
"Keep
up"
"bad
end of Hastings Street" p241
Powell Street
– used to be the Japanese area in Vancouver
Japan Town
"enemy
territory" p242
"The
news is much worse today, May" p244
"putting
us away"
"the
enemy... one of them was standing too close to Meiying" p245
"reluctantly
thrilled by their baseball skills" p247
Very dangerous
situation for these teenagers – Romeo and Juliet
-tragedy
"Never
betray your own kind"
"Keep
your business in your pants" p247
"She
was a traitor"
"Promise
me..." p248
"I
wondered why we, the Chinese, had not joined the Halloween mob that attacked
Japtown" p248
"The
Japanese tied up people... Chinese soldiers gave away gum" p249
"I
hadn't stopped her" p249
"If she
was a traitor, what was I?" p250
Sek Lung
protects Meiying – keeps her secret, he is implicated on the secret
"Burn
out his lungs" p251
"You
Japs?" p254
"I AM
CHINESE" p254
"Nothing...
was out of the ordinary, except..." p255
"Stepmother
silently embraced her" p256
"The
harsh voice seemed physically to hammer away at the thin figure" p257
We’ll get started at 8:30.
Today’s agenda:
1.
Review quiz
2.
Review sentences
3.
Continue essays
Prewriting - planning
4.
JP Ch 14
5.
HW JP Ch 15, make notes
Friday – no school for you,
Pro D for Adult Ed.
Monday- Ch 15
Quiz- email it to me by 9:45
Due at 9:45, a few minutes
grace
Don’t wait for the last
minute. If it’s late. I won’t take it.
Pass it in early or on time
to avoid problems.
Pick three out of the
five.
Write your own sentence which
incorporates the quoted words or phrase.
e.g. Jook Liang – “not ugly”(41)
Although
Poh-poh was very critical of Jook Liang’s appearance, the little girl knew that
she was “not ugly”(41).
Incorporate quoted material
into your sentence:
1.
Wong Bak – “Monkey
Man”(24)
Jook Liang thought of the old
man as a “Monkey Man”(24) because his face was twisted.
2.
Jook Liang – “perfect
make-believe world”(35)
3.
Father – “also
Canadian”(150)
4.
Jung Sum – “not
ordinary”(87)
5.
Old Yuen- “bad
luck”(121)
Write your examples in the
chat to share:
1.
Jung Sum loves to
practice boxing and has many boy friends, but he is a “not
ordinary” boy as Poh Poh said.
has many
boy friends Meaning? male friends, friends who are guys
2.
When Frank was
little, Old Yuen had a “bad luck”(121) with a “red-headed” woman
who stole all of his money that he earned from gambling and was gone.
parallelism RW
… a
“red-headed” woman who stole all of his money that he earned from
gambling and then ran away.
Writing style- good smooth
beautiful style
3.
Although the
Canadian government treated Chinese as “residence alien”(p?), the father
still insisted the children are “also Canadian”(p?) because they grew up
in Canada.
3.
Old
Yuen ruined his winning lottery ticket in an
accident, so his “bad luck”(p?) was legendary. plagiarized
“legendary”(116)
If
you borrow a word, quote it. If you don’t want to quote it, use a synonym.
thesaurus
– gives you synonyms and antonyms for words
build
vocabulary
A
Word a Day (AWAD) – daily email with one new vocab word
4.
Jook Liang and
Wong Bak became built/created/developed/made a "true
friend"(p?) relationship since they had formed a "perfect
make-believe world." (35)
5.
Although Jung
Sum trained in boxing to make him look more masculine, he was afflicted
inside because his identity “not ordinary” kid. phrasing
-because
his identity indicated that he was “not [an] ordinary”(p?) kid.
[ ] square brackets, changing
a quotation slightly
With all these little
mistakes, your mark goes from 10/10 to 5/10. I’m giving the big marks to writing
that is full of errors. This is English 11.
FOCUS: Maintain the quality of the sentences. The quality of
the sentences is dropping.
SIMPLE
COMPOUND
COMPLEX
COMPOUND COMPLEX
If
your sentences are not of a high quality, you will be very limited in the
school work that you can do.
Sentence combining work- must
continue that
HW for Monday “Rock Concert”
High quality sentences are
the absolute foundation of academic success. You owe it to yourself to continue
to improve in your sentence writing.
We are doing good work, and
we have a lot of work left to do. By now in the course, you should have a good idea
of where you are strong and where you are weak.
Work to improve the weak areas.
Don’t be a flamingo!
· MY LECTURE NOTES The Jade Peony
Ch 14
"forbidden
to meet my friends after school" p229
"shame
all the Chinese people on earth"
growing anti-Japanese
sentiment in Vancouver at the time
"Can a
poor man afford a lucky house?" p231
"Never
forget, we together Chinese" p232
"Enemy
cunning" p235
"I was
to spend eternity shelling..." pp235-6
"Mrs.
Lim's lips had not moved"
"Keep
up"
"bad
end of Hastings Street" p241
Powell Street
– used to be the Japanese area in Vancouver
Japan Town
"enemy
territory" p242
"The
news is much worse today, May" p244
"putting
us away"
"the
enemy... one of them was standing too close to Meiying" p245
"reluctantly
thrilled by their baseball skills" p247
Very dangerous
situation for these teenagers – Romeo and Juliet
-tragedy
"Never
betray your own kind"
"Keep
your business in your pants" p247
"She
was a traitor"
"Promise
me..." p248
"I
wondered why we, the Chinese, had not joined the Halloween mob that attacked
Japtown" p248
"The
Japanese tied up people... Chinese soldiers gave away gum" p249
"I
hadn't stopped her" p249
"If she
was a traitor, what was I?" p250
Sek Lung
protects Meiying – keeps her secret, he is implicated on the secret
"Burn
out his lungs" p251
"You
Japs?" p254
"I AM
CHINESE" p254
"Nothing...
was out of the ordinary, except..." p255
"Stepmother
silently embraced her" p256
"The
harsh voice seemed physically to hammer away at the thin figure" p257
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