Topic sentence -paragraph
Thesis statement - multi-paragraph
Body sentences
Body paragraphs
Organized by TIME, SPACE, or IMPORTANCE
Concluding sentence
Concluding paragraph
Quality of the sentence:
SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX
verb tenses, verb forms
punctuation - commas, periods.
comma splices. run-on sentences
Comments:
Great story.
Revise and rewrite sentences, especially verb tense.
The Process:
Planning
Writing
Rewriting
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