Writing 567 Essay work

essay - multi-paragraph writing

Introductory paragraph
- grabber (optional)
- thesis statement based on the topic, addressed the topic
- preview of the points (optional)

Body paragraphs 2, 3, 4, 5
Para 1
- topic sentence that addresses the thesis statement
- supporting sentences
Para 2
- topic sentence that addresses the thesis statement
- supporting sentences
Para 3
- topic sentence that addresses the thesis statement
- supporting sentences
Para 4
- topic sentence that addresses the thesis statement
- supporting sentences

Concluding paragraph - restatement of thesis statement, points
-end with a clincher


What I was looking for:
-structure, organization 
A disorganized essay won't be a success.
-quality of sentences 
SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX