Writing567 Sentence combining "Skiing"

2. She stopped at the bottom of the hill; then she turned around to look back up. COMPOUND
She stopped at the bottom of the hill; then she turned around and looked back up.
; however,
; therefore,
;then
After she stopped at the bottom of the hill, she turned around and looked back up. COMPLEX - adv cl
She stopped at the bottom of the hill and then turned around and looked back up. SIMPLE

3. She watched the skiers that were coming down the hill, watching/looking for a red jacket that was her sister's.
She watched the skiers coming down the hill, watching for her sister's red jacket. CONDENSED

WRITING STYLE - beautiful writing

She watched the skiers that were coming down the hill; she was watching for her sister's red jacket. COMPOUND - not fancy
She watched the skiers who were coming down the hill; also, she was watching for her sister's red jacket.
She was watching for her sister's red jacket as she watched the skiers who were coming down the hill. COMPLEX - adv cl

4. Sarah lifted up her ski goggles off her eyes, and she blinked.
Sarah blinked as she lifted the ski goggles off her eyes.
Blinking, Sarah lifted the ski goggles off her eyes.

5. The bright white snow was reflecting the sun into her eyes. SIMPLE
 Reflecting the bright white snow into her eyes. frag
The sun reflected off the bright white snow into her eyes. SIMPLE

Learning new sentence styles that we can write with confidence.

6. Finally, Sarah saw her sister who was skiing slowly back and forth down the hill. COMPLEX
Finally, Sarah saw her sister skiing slowly back and forth down the hill. SIMPLE

GOAL: To be able to write a variety of sentences.
To be able to write them with confidence.



HOMEWORK
1. George asked for help from his instructor.
She set up an appointment after class.

Gut reaction- SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX
What is the impulse?
George asked for help from his instructor; therefore, she set up an appointment after class.

George asked for help from his instructor, so she set up an appointment after class.

George asked for help from his instructor, and then she set up an appointment after class.

She set up an appointment for after class for George who asked for help. COMPLEX

Becoming more sophisticated writers. Becoming expert. Right on the edge of good-quality writers.


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