Writing567 Friday October 4 2019

Pho is eat with vegetables. XXX
Pho is eaten with vegetables.
Pho has to be eaten with rice noodles. 
has to be eaten modal + passive voice

Chinese rice has to be eaten with chopsticks.

The work has to be finished by tomorrow.
modal + passive voice



Imperative - command , tell someone to do 
something

TGIF - Thank God it's Friday!


Frisbee Afternoon

Frisbee - brand name
flying disc - generic name

iphone - brand name
smart phone- generic name

frisbee sport - Ultimate

1. Rob's motion is quick.
His motion is snakelike.
Avoid repetition
Rob's motion is quick as a snakelike.
Rob's motion is quick and snakelike.
Rob's quick motion is snakelike.

2. His underhand and sidearm flick sends the Frisbee into flight.

throw underhand
throw overhand

You bowl underhand.
In cricket, you bowl overhand

3. It spins clockwise.
It rides a puddle of air.
counter-clockwise
It spins clockwise, and it rides a puddle of air.
It spins clockwise and rides a puddle of air.
It spins clockwise as/while it rides a puddle of air.
It spins clockwise, riding a puddle of air.
, cccing
Spinning clockwise, it rides a puddle of air.

4. It slices through sunlight and shadows; it glides across a grassy clearing.
Slicing through sunlight and shadows, it glides across a grassy clearing.
It slices through sunlight and shadows, gliding across a grassy clearing.

VERBing style

5. Then a breeze catches the disc, making it climb and dip.
Then a breeze catches the disc, and/so it makes it climb and dip. COMPOUND
Then a breeze which catches the disc makes it climb and dip. adj cl

SIMPLE
COMPOUND
COMPLEX

VERBing style

5. Catching the disc, the breeze makes it climb and dip.
6. The frisbee hovers, following the surface currents. Beautiful sentence.

current - flow of air, water, electricity

120V
220V/240V - clothes washer, stove

Hovering, the frisbee follows the surface currents.
Beautiful.
Swimming, Sarah feels relaxed.
Sarah is relaxing, soaking in the onsen.

7. It whirls soundlessly, drops lower and lower, and settles onto my outstretched index finger.

frozen yogurt
Earnest Ice Cream -
ice cream cake - Dulce Amore, Commercial Drive
Dairy Queen

It whirls soundlessly, drops lower and lower,  settling onto my outstretched index finger.
Whirling soundlessly, drops lower and lower, and settles onto my outstretched index finger.
It whirls soundlessly, dropping lower and lower, and settles onto my outstretched index finger.
It whirls soundlessly, dropping lower and lower, and settling onto my outstretched index finger.

thumb
index/pointer finger
middle finger
ring finger
baby finger/pinky