EF56 Sentence correction - Daily practice is the key to success

Lesson 3
1. Egyptians made candy over 4000 years ago, and they used dates and honey.
Egyptians who made candy over 4000 years ago used dates and honey.
Egyptians made candy over 4000 years ago using dates and honey.

Egyptians made candy using dates and honey over 4000 years ago.
Over 4000 years old, Egyptians made candy, and they used dates and honey.

Which style do you prefer?

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2. England and France fought the longest war. It lasted from 1337 to 1453 and was called the Hundred Years' War.

England and France fought the longest war, which lasted from 1337 to 1453, and was called the Hundred Years' War.

England and France fought the longest war, which was called the Hundred Years' War. It lasted from 1337 to 1453.

England and France fought the longest war, which was called the Hundred Years' War which lasted from 1337 to 1453. two adj cl

Daily practice - 15m, 2-3 sentences.

You will improve with daily practice.

If you want, really desire, to get better, then daily practice is the only way.

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As long as you're in this school  I can give you lots of exercises.

Daily practice is the only way.

Playing music- I play mandolin and pedal steel guitar. I practice every day- not long but every day.

Feel positive about it. Don't criticize yourself too harshly.