E7/10 Sept 29

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Good morning.

We’ll get started at 11.

Today’s agenda

1. Share sentence combining from homework

2. Test #3 - Confessions writing

3. HW Read “Dead Man’s Path”. I emailed this to you a few 

minutes ago.

Let’s share some of our sentence combining work from HW:

Combine each group of sentences into one longer sentence.

1. We talked for a long time.

We were talking on the telephone.

Our telephones were cellular.

Our telephones were new.

a. We talked for a long time on our new cellular telephones. SIMPLE

2. We talked about our plans.

The plans were exciting.

The plans were for a concert.

The concert was at GM Place.

a. We talked about our exciting plans for the concert at GM Place. SIMPLE

a. People were finding their seats, and yelling at noisy, and crowded GM Place.

b. GM Place was noisy and crowded because people were finding their seats and yelling at the same time.

c. GM Place was noisy and crowed. People were finding their seats and yelling.

d. GM Place was noisy and crowded, so the yelling people were finding their seats. , so – the reason why

The yelling people were finding their seats, so GM Place was noisy and crowded.

e. GM place was crowded with noisy noise and yelling because people were finding their seats.

f. GM place was noisy and crowded; meanwhile, people were yelling and finding their seats.

g. People were yelling and finding their seats at noisy and crowded GM place. awk

h. GM place was noisy and crowded so that people were yelling to and finding their seats.

People need to become more familiar with English.

4. We looked for our seats.

Our seats were all in one section.

The section was on the floor.

We stayed together in a group.

a. We looked for our seats that were all in one section on the floor, and we stayed together in a group. COMPOUND COMPLEX

b. We stayed together in a group, and we looked for our seats that were all in one section on the floor.

c. We looked for our seats that was were all in one section that was on the floor and stayed together in a group. SV? too far apart

We looked for our seats that was were all in one section that was on the floor, and we stayed together in a group.

d. We looked for our seats which were all in one section on the floor, so we stayed together in a group.

5. The concert ended at 11.

We were hungry.

We left GM Place.

We went to our favourite restaurant.

 

a. The concert ended at 11, and we were hungry: ; therefore, we left GM place and went to our favourite restaurant. semicolon, not a colon

b. We were hungry when the concert ended at 11; as a result, we went to our favourite restaurant when the concert ended at 11. REP

c. We were hungry when we left GM place where the concert ended at 11, so we went to our favourite restaurant.

d. The concert ended at 11; after that, we were so hungry that we went to our favourite restaurant after we left GM place.

e. We were hungry, so we left GM Place to go to our favourite restaurant. NOT ALL INFORMATION INCLUDED

6. We arrived home.

It was late.

We were tired.

We were happy.

a. When we arrived home, although it was late and we were tired, we were happy.COMPLEX

b. We were tired when we arrived home, but we were happy. Missing ‘late’

c. When we arrived home late, we were tired and happy.

d. Even though it was late and we were tired when we arrived home, but we were happy.

e. It was late when we arrived home tiredly, but we were happy.

f. We arrived home late; we were happy even though we were tired.

g. We were tired and happy when we arrived home late.

h. It was late when we arrived at home, and we were tired and happy.

i. We arrived home late, tired and happy. Nice! Very natural sounding.

j. It was late, but we arrived home tired and happy.

Good work!

SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX, COMPOUND COMPLEX

She was 18. He was 46. Creepy!

He met her when she was 12. They announced their relationship when she was 18.

Music is very important to me.

1. Family

2. What’s for supper?

3. Music

Sometimes people say they cannot sing. I don’t believe it. I think people sometimes try to sound like someone else. If you sing with your own voice, it will sound just fine. There is no mistaking a true, honest voice singing.

Test #3 – paragraph (150-200w)

Email it to me by 12:25

You listened to one of the Confessions stories.

Write a short summary of the story.