Wednesday, 27 July 2022

Eng 10 11 SUMMER 18 class- adj cl, business letter

 

Good morning.

We will get started at 8:30.

Hump Day- Wednesday

 

Today’s Agenda:

·      Quiz#5- adjective clauses

·      Begin noun clause (final kind of clause)

·      Begin business letters

·      CHOICE

Continue career module – time to finish the work

Multi-paragraph writing will be due Friday at the start of class:

on paper or via email, same as usual

Presentations will be Friday as well

OR

How to talk into a microphone, public speaking tips-

 

Thursday

·      Continue noun clause

·      Continue career module – time to finish

·      Multi-paragraph writing will be due tomorrow at the start of class:

on paper or via email, same as usual

Presentations will be tomorrow as well

·      How to talk into a microphone, public speaking tips-

·      Continue business letters

 

Friday

·      Multi-paragraph writing due at or by the start of class:

on paper or via email, same as usual

No lates

·      Quiz#6- noun clauses

·      Talk about optional replacement quiz and test for next week

·      Career presentations

 

FINAL WEEK

Monday

HOLIDAY BC Day

 – No school

 

Tuesday

·      Return quiz- noun clause

·       

 

Wednesday

·      Replacement quiz

 

Thursday

·      Final essay

 

Friday

·      Replacement test

·      One-on-one meetings, chats if you want

·      Final marks

·      Final reports in by 12 noon

 

 

 

Quiz#5

Write a sentence with an adjective clause for each.

Submit to my by 9:10

1.    trembling             who

2.    settle                    that

3.    invitation             which

4.    salary                    that

5.    bitter                    who

6.    timid                     that

 

Hopefully you are doing a few minutes of practice every day on your sentences. Daily practice is the best/most effective/only way to learn a new skill.

If you are, I’m sure you are seeing incremental improvements.

SIMPLE   COMPOUND   COMPLEX

 

If you are doing daily practice, than there will little change.

 

** You can start any day.**

 

 

NOUN CLAUSES- final type of clause

 

 

Noun Clauses

 

Noun clauses are used with verbs that have to do with the brain and cognition (thinking): think, feel, believe, know, understand, forget, remember, recall, realize, recognize, worry, wonder,etc.

 

Also verbs about speaking: say, yell, whisper, shout, suggest, speak, advise, holler, murmur, stutter, call out, cry out, mention, etc

 

We most often connect these verbs with these words: that, what, why, how

 

A.      think, feel, believe, know, understand, forget, remember, recall, realize, recognize, worry,think, feel, believe, know, understand, forget, remember, realize, say, yell, whisper, shout, suggest, find, speak, advise, holler, murmur, stutter, call out, cry out, mention, wonder

B.       that, what, why, how

 

Choose an A word and put it with a B word.

Mix and match A+B.

 

Examples of complex sentences with noun clauses:

 

*think + that

Joanne thinks that her son is very tall for his age. noun clause

I think that it will rain today.

Jun doesn’t think that Marta is telling the truth.

I think that you forgot your key.

I don’t think that I should stay out too late tonight.

I don’t think that you should go to the party.

Mei’s sister thinks that Mei should get a Covid test.

DIFFERENT STYLE: I think that studying English will give me new opportunities. gerund

 

You can OMIT ‘that’

Joanne thinks that her son is very tall for his age. noun clause

I think that it will rain today.

Joanne thinks her son is very tall for his age. noun clause

I think it will rain today.

 

think + that

I think that would be nice. – possibly will happen

I think that will be nice. – definitely will happen

 

We could go for a hike tomorrow. I think that would be nice.

We are going for a hike tomorrow. I think that will be nice.

 

 

*realize + that

I realize that I gave you the wrong answer.

I realized that he cheated me.

I got to school and realized that I forgot my phone at home.

I realize that you don’t like school, but you have to do your best.

She just realized that she left her stove on and her door unlocked.

 

**You can omit ‘that’ if you wish. It’s pefectly ok to leave it in.

Joe realized that he was wrong.

Joe realized he was wrong.

 

DIFFERENT MEANINGS

Joe realized how he was wrong.

Joe realized why he was wrong.

 

 

*find out + that

I found out that my daughter lied to me.

I found out from my classmate that we have a test today.

 

* find + that

She finds that Vancouver is very expensive.

May finds that the room is warm.  May finds the room warm.

I found the movie boring. Doris finds him strange.

 

*NOTES ‘that’ is a tricky word in English

that – many uses

noun clauses and adjective clauses, confusing

          ‘that book’

 

* wonder + why

I was wondering why you are always late.

I wonder why my dog stares at me.

She wonders why her son is not doing well in math.

 

* wonder + how – to do something, how something happens

I wonder how I can fix this computer.

I wonder how the mouse got into my apartment.

 

*know + why

Jun doesn’t know why Keiko is angry at/with him.

Jun didn’t know why Keiko was angry at/with him.

 

          Jacob knows why Sarah quit her job.

Jacob doesn’t know why Sarah quit her job.

          I don’t know why she is not feeling well.

          Sarah knows why her sister is smiling, but she doesn’t want to tell me. COMPOUND COMPLEX

          Mei doesn’t know why her husband is always forgetting his keys in the door.

 

 

Why is Mei late today? question

I don’t know why Mei is late today. answer, with a noun clause

I don’t know. SIMPLE

 

I don’t know why I can’t remember the words that I learned yesterday. noun clause adjective clause

          I don’t know why my car engine light is on. natural-sounding

          I don’t know why my car’s engine light is on. also ok

 

book smart- lots of knowledge but can’t use it in a practical way

 

I don’t know why my son was working so hard yesterday.

I don’t know why you like to climb mountains in the rain.

 

 

* like how (less common)

I like how you always listen to me. pays attention to your words

Sarah doesn’t like how her husband loses his temper easily.

Sarah doesn’t know why her husband loses his temper easily.

lose your temper- get very angry

Sarah doesn’t like how it rains so much in Vancouver.

Sarah doesn’t like that it rains so much in Vancouver.

 

I like how you sang that song.

I like how you were showing her some guitar chords.

She likes how he tells funny stories.

I like how you treated me when I was sick.

Sarah likes how her mother makes her favourite comfort food.

 

IDIOM comfort food- the food that you like to eat, for example, when you are feeling sick, food that reminds you of your childhood, nostalgia

 

* say that

Michelle said that she would come early today.

The teacher said that we will do a quiz on Friday.

The little boy said that there was a monster under his bed.

Sahara said that there will be a party on Saturday.

I said that I would pick up some milk on the way home.

My mother said that the recipe is easy to make.

I didn’t say that I would do that.

My son said that he will treat me to lunch/ to dimsum next Sunday.

treat someone to lunch- you invite someone and pay

My treat! It’s on me! I will treat you.

I insist.

We’ll split the bill.

 

 

* forget why

Sharin forgot why she came into the kitchen.

I forget why I called you.

 

 

REMINDER:

A.      think, feel, believe, know, understand, forget, remember, realize, etc.

B.       that, what, why, how

 

Knowing which A goes with which B is the tricky part. That will take a lot of listening to English speakers, reading, etc.

 

* believe how

I couldn’t believe how hard it was to immigrate to Canada.

I don’t believe how much I miss my dog.

IDIOM can’t/don’t believe – am very surprised

May doesn’t believe how much it rains in Vancouver.

I can’t believe how expensive a purebred puppy is.

 

shed(v)- a dog loses hair

Her dogs sheds a lot.

non-shedding

hypo-allergenic – will not bother people with allergies

 

* understand + why

I understand why you want to stay in English Foundation 5.

Jun’s mother understood why she wanted to marry Taka.

I don’t understand why my brother won’t forgive me.

Mary didn’t understand why her son could not make it to school on time.

 

* understand how

I understand how hard it is to learn a new language.

I understand how challenging it is to ...

I don’t understand how you could say that to me.

I don’t understand how to do this math problem.

I don’t understand how to make you happy.

Mohamed didn’t understand how the teaching method could be so different in Canada than it was back in his home country.

 

* understand why

I don’t understand why my tomatoes are not growing.

The little boy could not understand why he was not allowed to stay up late.

I don’t understand why people came up with segregation laws/rules.

Joan understands why she did not pass.

 

 

You probably know a lot of these already. To get comfortable with these, you really need to use them in your daily life. It’s really important for you to engage with authentic English daily.

 

FOR HOMEWORK:

Please write some sentences that have noun clauses on your own. Email a few to me by 3pm. We can share them tomorrow.

 

Mix and match A with B.

 

A.      think, feel, believe, know, understand, forget, remember, recall, realize, recognize, worry,think, feel, believe, know, understand, forget, remember, realize, say, yell, whisper, shout, suggest, find, speak, advise, holler, murmur, stutter, call out, cry out, mention, wonder

B.       that, what, why, how, when, where

 

e.g. when

I remember when I first went to university.

I don’t know when SV she will be finished.

 

recommend + that

The doctor recommend me to quit smoking. XXX

The doctor recommended that I quit smoking.

The doctor recommended to me that I quit smoking.

My sister recommended a restaurant to me. SIMPLE

My sister recommended that we try this restaurant. N CL

 

I recommend that you practice sentence writing everyday.

Scotiabank recommends that you change your password to something secure.

If you want to buy a good guitar, I recommend that you keep an eye on Craigslist and Facebook Marketplace. Avoid Ebay.

 

Last week, he recommended that we use credit cards instead of debt cards.

credit cards   a credit card

 

 

 

 

Business letters – practical writing skills, not academic, not school writing

different modes of writing, different purposes, different intentions

school/academic writing – writing a paragraph or essay, writing about a short story, poem, novel, narrative, definition, descriptive, process, opinion (persuasive)

living in Canada, everyday useful writing - practical writing for work, writing for business, writing for government issues, writing for immigration, writing for tax, writing for job applications (cover letters), writing for complaints

 

 

Education/training is the golden ticket.

Communication skills were key for me.

- writing skills-

- speaking skills- I practiced soooo much. – singing, drama, plays, listening and watching good speakers- copying them

 

 

-official writing, more formal, not casual writing

 

Reasons to write Business-style letters:

(Even emails can benefit from using the more formal style of a business letter –sets a professional, serious, courteous, respectful, mature tone)

e.g. Student emails to teachers.-

“What!!!????”

“what day the class end”

“im gonna miss class today what u gonna do in class?”

Very unprofessional looking.

We can do better.

A more professional and more formal tone and structure is advised. I tend to err on the side of formality.

-polite, not too casual

-sets a good tone

-respectful

 

REASONS TO WRITE A BUSINESS-TYPE LETTER

1. interdepartmental letters (within a company)

2. cover letter for a resume (special style)

3. application letters to colleges and universities

In the Fall and Spring, many of our Grade 12 students are frantic about getting applications in to colleges and universities. The letters that they write are very important. I remember spending about two hours cowriting a letter with an English 12 student for her application to UBC.

4. letter to a government agency, Canadian government or the government of another country (e.g. Canada Revenue Agency, Immigration Canada, Canada Pension, City Hall)

NOTE: Communicating with Canada Revenue Agency (CRA) is really difficult.

5. employer/manager/boss (e.g. promotion, transfer, raise, personal leave, quit)

6. business person

7. court (e.g. jury duty)

8. lawyer

9. writing to your child’s teacher

10. report to a supervisor

11. incident report (e.g to police or insurance, ICBC)

12. getting airline tickets refunded

13. refund from Amazon

 

Have you ever written a letter like that?

 

 

FORMAL, not casual like a personal letter

Formal – organized (clear structure), official-looking, appropriate tone, appropriate language, unemotional, a little bit of emotion can be effective (less is more)

·      Distribute “Business Correspondence” p.c.

Use A4 paper, 8 ½ X 11 unlined paper

 

WRITE YOUR NAME AND ADDRESS

AT THE TOP OF THE PAGE

 

Mei Zhou

Mei (Sarah) Zhou

Mei “Sarah” Zhou     “ABC” not legal name, the name that you prefer

Allan Haley

GIVEN NAME/FIRST NAME  FAMILY NAME/LAST NAME

 

Zhou, Mei “Sarah”

Haley, Allan

Zhou, Ming

FAMILY NAME, GIVEN NAME – I would not do it this way in a letter

 

Allan, Haley XXX

Haley, Allan

 

Allan Haley

Apt#23, 666 Maple Street

Vancouver, BC

Canada

V5P 2B6

 

Keiko Nishizawa

123 Hizume

Nagano-shi

Japan

12345

 

SKIP A LINE

 

June 6, 2022

 

SKIP A LINE

 

THE NAME, TITLE AND ADDRESS OF THE PERSON YOU ARE WRITING TO

Mary Williamson

Director, Shaw Communications

123 Cordova Street

Vancouver, BC

V5R 2D2

 

 

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