Friday, 1 May 2020

EF5/6 1:30 pm class Link, class notes and homework

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See you at 1:30




Today’s agenda:
1. Correction Codes
I emailed these to you earlier today. You can check for them. If you didn’t get the email, email me and I will send them to you.

2. Literary Terms
I emailed these to you yesterday. You can check for them. If you didn’t get the email, email me and I will send them to you.

3. Homework 
Read the short story “Penny in the Dust”
I also emailed this to you yesterday.



It is nice weather today.

Everybody
Anybody
Nobody
Somebody

Everyone is happy to be learning more English
Anyone
Noone is coming to the park today.
Someone

Everything is so expensive in Canada.
Anything
Nothing
Something is burning.

All singular

Use ‘do’ for emphasis-  more for speaking
Do you play volleyball?
Yes, I play volleyball.
You don’t?
No, I do play volleyball.

Do you like this class?
I do like the class even though it’s hard sometimes.







Correction Codes

These are the correction codes most instructors use at SHEC,.
When I make your papers, I will use these correction codes.

Symbol
Meaning
Example Error
Example Correction
art
Article
a, an, the
Helen visited United States.
I live in the Vancouver.
I have son.
Helen visited the United States.
I live in Vancouver.
I have a son.
awk
Awkward- not natural-sounding, sounds like translation,
Phrasing
Writing is causing me struggles.
Writing is difficult for me.
cap
Capitalizationproper nouns
i speak english and spanish.
I speak English and Spanish.
cs
comma splice

I studied very hard, I passed.
I studied very hard, so I passed.
I studied very hard. Therefore, I passed.
frag
fragment
Because I exercise.

I like animals. For example, dogs and cats.

I am healthy because I exercise.
I like animals. For example, I like dogs and cats.




prep
preposition
I was born on July.
I was born in July.
I was born on July 11th.
pron
pronoun agreement
My daughter is eating his dinner.
My daughter is eating her dinner.
punc
Punctuation
, ; : ’ ! ?
Canadas population is growing
Canada’s population is growing.
rep
repetition


ro
run-on sentence
I studied very hard I passed.
I studied very hard, so I passed. SV SV Compound
sp
Spelling
Canadians elect their goverment.
Canadians elect their government.


Agr
#1 error

subject-verb agreement


Everybody have strengths and weaknesses.
Jon have a new car.




Everybody has strengths and weaknesses.

Jon has a new car.
tr
transition needed
I like cats.  I hate dogs.
I like cats.  However, I hate dogs.
vt
verb tense
I study English for ten years.
I play with my friends when I am six years old.
I have studied English for ten years.
I played with my friends when I was six years old.
vf
verb form
I am be studying at South Hill.
I am live in Richmond.
I living in Richmond.
I am studying at South Hill.
I live in Richmond.
I am living in Richmond.

wf
word form
noun verb adjective

I want to be health.
Health (n)
Canada is a freedom country.
I want to be healthy.

Canada is a free country.
wo
word order
It’s a broken easily bone.    
It’s an easily broken bone.
ww
wrong word
We very enjoyed the movie.
We really enjoyed the movie.
The movie was ok.
We kind of enjoyed it.

#
singular/
plural
I like to eat apple.
I like to eat apples.
Art or plural
He has dog.
He has a dog.
He has three dogs.


^
insert missing word
Helen visited United States.
Helen visited the United States.
paragraph
BEGIN NEW PARAGRAPH

move word(s)
Sanjit won the contest, who practiced for many hours.
Sanjit, who practiced for many hours, won the contest.
?
unclear
It’s like which that you went.

b
nice sentence
The early bird catches the worm.


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