Thursday, 21 September 2023

EF45 Class 13 grabbers/hooks Overview of verb tenses

 

English Foundations 4/5

 

Today’s agenda

·      REMINDER: Optional opportunity to replace Quiz#1 tomorrow

Same vocab

learn   favourite   picture   like   excited   exercise

 

·      Quiz#2 compound sentences

·      Hooks/grabbers

·      Begin review of seven or 12 verb tenses – simple present verb tense

·      Finish Wordlist 1.2 speaking and listening

 

Friday

·      Question of the Day

·      Hooks/grabbers- from homework

·      Talk about goalsetting

·      Begin complex sentences

·      Continue review of verb tenses

·      Listening – song lyrics

·      Option to replace Quiz#1 (last 25m)

 

Begin review of verb tenses- seven most useful ones

-simple present, simple past, simple future

-pesent continuous(progressive), past continuous

-present perfect

-present perfect continuous

 

 

Monday

·      Continue review of verb tenses

 

Hooks and grabbers

Paragraphs

 

Grabber/hook – at the very beginning of your paragraph

Topic sentence

Supporting sentences

Concluding sentence

 

 

Structure of a Paragraph:

Grabber/Hook

Topic sentence – topic, controlling idea

Supporting sentences

Concluding sentence

 

 

 

Grabber- hook

OPTIONAL – HIGHLY RECOMMENDED

MY ADVICE: When you are writing a paragraph or essay, begin your paragraph or essay with a grabber/hook.

 

Grabbers/Hooks

-usually first sentence, before the Topic Sentence

-grabs the reader’s attention, hooks your reader attention

-makes them pay attention, makes them want to read your writing

-effective attention-getting device for writing, highly recommended

 

MY ADVICE: Use a grabber. It will make your writing way more interesting.

 

PARAGRAPH STRUCTURE

Grabber

Topic sentence

Supporting sentences

Concluding sentence

 

Good for paragraphs, for essays, for speeches

 

Seven different kinds of grabbers/hooks top choose from:

 

1.    -general to specific statement, a funnel

-say something big and general, then narrow it down to you specific topic funnel

 

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                     Most immigrants have fond memories of their home country. So do I.         

                    

                     It is normal for people to feel nostalgic about the past. I have very good memories of my life in my home country.

 

                     Everybody wants to have success in their lives. Everybody wants to achieve their goals. Using goalsetting techniques can help us to accomplish the objectives we want to accomplish. Grabbers. Topic Sentence

goalsetting techniques- making specific, realistic, measureable, time-bound plans

 

2.    -write a short anecdote- short personal story, very short (1-2 short sentences)

personalizes your writing, establishes a connection to your reader,

establishes empathy- same feeling
sympathy – feel sorry about someone’s situation

anecdote is told first-person “I”

first person is very personal, friendly-sounding, close

 

                     When I was younger, I always had trouble realizing the goals that I dreamed about for myself. Then I learned about Goalsetting. This changed everything for me! Now, I will teach you.

 

 

 

 

3.    -historical reference- knowledge about history

                     Throughout history, women have usually been in less powerful positions than men. These days, women have been claiming their rights to equality.

 

4.    -fact or statistic- numbers

                     80%, four out of five, 2/3 of ..., 37,000,000 people...

  *Often used in advertising*

   People who use Goalsetting techniques to help them achieve their goals have a 65% higher chance of achieving their goals than people who do not. (bbc.com)

 

5.    -ask a question (answered by the topic sentence or thesis statement) PROBABLY THE EASIEST WAY

                     How do you keep yourself on track? What steps do you take when you want to achieve something new in your life? Goalsetting works for many people. It might work for you, too.

 

                     What was your life like in the past? Has it changed much? My life in my homecountry was a mix of happinees and sadness. It was bittersweet.

 

6.    -relevant quotation by a famous/important person

Dr. Jordan Peterson says, “Make a plan. A plan is not a prison. It is a guide.”

“Make a plan. A plan is not a prison. It is a guide.” This was said by Dr. Jordan Peterson.

Barack Obama once said, “Blah blah blah.”

My mother always used to say, “Blah blah blah.”

The Buddha said, “Life is suffering. We must have empathy for all living creatures.”

Mao Zhe Dong said, “Women hold up half the sky.”

 

***PRO TIP: Books of quotations.- Have some quotations in your memory. It is very helpful to reference when you are writing.

Look up quotations organized by theme.

Debating teams- technique to begin with a relevant quotation

 

7.                 -relevant idiom from any language, proverb, saying

                     -don’t translate well, have a lot of meaning

                     -these can be really fun and colourful

In Chinese, we say that a good job is a ‘golden rice bowl.’

In Farsi, we say that a person who is making good money has their “bread in the oil.”

There is a saying in Japanese: ‘Even monkeys fall from trees.’ It means everyone makes mistakes. It’s important to keep going after you did something wrong.

 

IDIOM         The apple doesn’t fall far from the tree. (English)

                     Christmas cake. (Japanese)

                     Playing piano/violin (music) to a cow. (Chinese)

                     Pearls before swine. (English) -showing beautiful pearls to a

                                                                        pig

In one ear and out the other. – a person won’t listen to you

 

 

 

 

 

REVIEW of ways to do grabbers/hooks:

1.    funnel

2.    anecdote

3.    history

4.    fact/statistic

5.    question EASIEST

6.    quotation

7.    idiom/saying

Choose one. Start your paragraph off with it. It will make your paragraph, essay, or presentation more lively and engaging.

 

PRO ADVICE: When writing a paragraph or essay, write the grabber last. You can mull it over (think about it, roll it around in your mind) as you are writing the rough draft. A good grabber might jump out at you. If not, if you can’t think of anything for a grabber, just ask a question. The question is the easiest way to do a grabber.

 

ACTION:

Think of a good grabber that you put on top of your home country paragraph (Test#1).

Decide on what kind of grabber would work best. Write it down.

Later, maybe tomorrow, we’ll read some out loud.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Quiz#2

Write a compound sentence for each.

 

1.    fix                          so

2.    weather               but

3.    eat                         or

4.    opinion                 so

5.    answer                 and

6.    talking                   or

 

 

 

Examples of sentences:

I had a lot of good times in my home country. So, I really miss my motherland. ww  - Avoid starting sentences with so or but and

FIX

I had a lot of good times in my home country. Therefore, I really miss my motherland. For this reason, I really miss my motherland.

HIGHER LEVEL- I wiil teach this soon. ; semicolon

I had a lot of good times in my home country; therefore, I really miss my motherland.

 

I had a lot of good times in my home country, so I really miss my motherland.

 

REVIEW- compound sentences

, SOBA

NEXT LEVEL ;

; TRANS,

Marta wanted to fix her door, so she got a hammer.

Marta wanted to fix her door; she got a hammer.

Marta wanted to fix her door; therefore, she got a hammer.

 

Joe answered the teacher’s question, and he was right.

Joe answered the teacher’s question; he was right.

Joe answered the teacher’s question; happily, he was right.

 

The weather is nice today, but I have to work all day.

The weather is nice today; I have to work all day.

The weather is nice today; however, I have to work all day.

The weather is nice today; sadly, I have to work all day.

The weather is nice today; unfortunately, I have to work all day.

 

These are all compound sentences:

SV, SOBA SV.

SV; SV.

SV; TRANS, SV.

trans- transitional term ‘however’ ‘therefore’ ‘also’

 

She loved skiing, and she loves hiking.

She loved skiing; she loves hiking.

She loved skiing; also, she loves hiking.

She loved skiing; in addition, she loves hiking.

 

I will make a list of 10 or 15 transitional terms for tomorrow. We can practice them tomorrow.

 

 

 

Overview of verb tenses:

SIMPLE PRESENT

SIMPLE PAST

SIMPLE FUTURE

PRESENT PROGRESSIVE

PAST PROGRESSIVE

FUTURE PROGRESSIVE Not an everyday verb tense. Use simple future instead.

PRESENT PERFECT

PAST PERFECT Not commonly used. Use simple past instead.

FUTURE PERFECT Very uncommon, not important. Use simple future.

PRESENT PERFECT PROGRESSIVE

PAST PERFECT PROGRESSIVE Use past progressive instead.

FUTURE PERFECT PROGRESSIVE Use future progressive instead.

 

 

 

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