Monday, 18 September 2023

EF45 Class 10 grabbers/hooks

 

English Foundations 45

 

Today’s agenda

·      Return Quiz#1 on Monday

Go over

RW for Bonus pt

·      Continue paragraph work from last week. We will write out Test#1 paragraph tomorrow.

·      Hook/Grabber

 

Tuesday

·      Introduce new activity: Question of the Day

Bonus pt talk

·      Test#1 paragraph

·      Do a few phrasal verbs

·      Continue with compound sentences

·      Do Wordlist 1.2 speaking and listening

 

Quiz #1

Write a simple sentence for each.

1.    learn           SSVV

Jamie and Shira go to school and learn about math.

Jamie and Shira want to learn about math.

 

2.    favourite    SVV

3.    picture       Imperative(command)

Take a picture of me, please.

Take a picture for me, please.

 

 

4.    like              SSV

 

5.    excited       SV

Two forms of the adjective:

excited(adj) – your feeling, emotion

exciting(adj)- describing the thing outside of you

e.g.    She was excited about the party.

          The party was exciting.

bored- He was bored in the math class.

boring- The math class was boring.

amazed- The mother was amazed by her child’s drawing skills.

amazing- Her daughter’s drawing skills were amazing.

interested- feeling, emotion

interesting- describing thing itself

 

6.    exercise     Interrogative(question)

 

Optional RW for Bonus pt as usual. Pass it in today or first thing tomorrow.

Quiz #1

Write a simple sentence for each.

1.    learn           SSVV

2.    favourite    SVV

3.    picture       Imperative(command)

4.    like              SSV

5.    excited       SV

6.    exercise     Interrogative(question)

 

Examples:

Where do you play do exercise?

play competitive team sports

do activities

-play

She plays volleyball. hockey baseball football soccer badminton tennis

-do

She does yoga. exercise meditation   mountain biking   rock climbing

-go – leave your home and go to a special place to do an activity

She goes skiing. hiking kyaking canoeing swimming shopping dancing clubbing

 

SVV and She learned to swim. SV

She took a class and learned to swim.

 

Phrasal verbs- verb + preposition – the heart of English

talk + prepositions

talk + to

talk with

talk about – discuss a subject, gossip

talk over- The man started talking over the woman.

talk under- Two students were talking under the teacher while she explaining the math.

talk for-

 

Appositives:

I love visiting my favourite city, Tehran.

She was talking to her sister, Mei.

I Skyped with my sister, Kathy.

I was taking with my teacher, Allan.

a.Kathy, my sister, lives in Nova Scotia.

b.My sister, Kathy, lives in Nova Scotia.

 

My teacher, Allan, was sick on Friday.

a.My home country, China, is very developed.

b.China, my home country, is very developed.

 

capital letters-

1.    the first letter of a sentence

2.    any proper nouns- names of people, countries, languages, days, months, companies, “I”

 

 

Brief look at compound sentences:

I will talk more about this tomorrow.

SIMPLE SV She loves to read books.

 

COMPOUND SV  , SOBA  SV

, FANBOYS

, so   , or   , but   , and

She loves to read books, and he loves to watch movies.

 

SIMPLE She loves to read books.

COMPOUND She loves to read books, and he loves to watch movies.

It is sunny today, so let’s go to the beach.

We can go to the beach, or we can go to the park.

We could go to the beach, but it will be crowded.

I will bring some sandwiches, and you bring some drinks.

 

FANBOYS – too grammar booky

SOBA  more authentic usage, real usage

 

 

 

Paragraph- Test#1

 

Write a paragraph on a simple topic that I will give you tomorrow.

e.g. Why did you come to Canada?

Organize and write a paragraph of at least 150 words.

 

 

STRUCTURE

Begin with a Hook/Grabber

Topic sentence

Supporting sentences

Concluding sentence

 

Hook/Grabber

Structure of a Paragraph:

Grabber

Topic sentence – topic, controlling idea

Supporting sentences

Concluding sentence

 

 

 

Grabber- hook

OPTIONAL – HIGHLY RECOMMENDED

MY ADVICE: When you are writing a paragraph or essay, begin your paragraph or essay with a grabber/hook.

 

Grabbers/Hooks

-usually first sentence, before the Topic Sentence

-grabs the reader’s attention, hooks your reader attention

-makes them pay attention, makes them want to read your writing

-effective attention-getting device for writing, highly recommended

 

MY ADVICE: Use a grabber. It will make your writing way more interesting.

 

PARAGRAPH STRUCTURE

Grabber

Topic sentence

Supporting sentences

Concluding sentence

 

Good for paragraphs, for essays, for speeches

 

Seven different kinds of grabbers top choose from:

 

1.    -general to specific statement, a funnel

-say something big and general, then narrow it down to specific topic

funnel

 

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                     Everybody wants to have success in their lives. Everybody wants to achieve their goals. Using goalsetting techniques can help us to accomplish the objectives we want to accomplish. Grabbers. Topic Sentence

goalsetting techniques- making specific, realistic, measureable, time-bound plans

 

2.    -write a short anecdote- short personal story, very short (1-2 short sentences)

personalizes your writing, establishes a connection to your reader,

establishes empathy- same feeling
sympathy – feel sorry about someone’s situation

anecdote is told first-person “I”

first person is very personal, friendly-sounding, close

 

                     When I was younger, I always had trouble realizing the goals that I dreamed about for myself. Then I learned about Goalsetting. This changed everything for me! Now, I will teach you.

 

3.    -historical reference- knowledge about history

                     Throughout history, women have usually been in less powerful positions than men. These days, women have been claiming their rights to equality.

 

4.    -fact or statistic- numbers

                     80%, four out of five, 2/3 of ..., 37,000,000 people...

  *Often used in advertising*

   People who use Goalsetting techniques to help them achieve their goals have a 65% higher chance of achieving their goals than people who do not. (bbc.com)

 

5.    -ask a question (answered by the topic sentence or thesis statement) PROBABLY THE EASIEST WAY

                     How do you keep yourself on track? What steps do you take when you want to achieve something new in your life? Goalsetting works for many people. It might work for you, too.

 

 

6.    -relevant quotation by a famous/important person

Dr. Jordan Peterson says, “Make a plan. A plan is not a prison. It is a guide.”

“Make a plan. A plan is not a prison. It is a guide.” This was said by Dr. Jordan Peterson.

 

Barack Obama once said, “Blah blah blah.”

My mother always used to say, “Blah blah blah.”

The Buddha said, “Life is suffering. We must have empathy for all living creatures.”

Mao Zhe Dong said, “Women hold up half the sky.”

 

***PRO TIP: Books of quotations.- Have some quotations in your memory. It is very helpful to reference when you are writing.

Look up quotations organized by theme.

 

7.                 -relevant idiom from any language, proverb, saying

                     -don’t translate well, have a lot of meaning

                     -these can be really fun and colourful

In Chinese, we say that a good job is a ‘golden rice bowl.’

In Farsi, we say that a person who is making good money has their “bread in the oil.”

There is a saying in Japanese: ‘Even monkeys fall from trees.’ It means everyone makes mistakes. It’s important to keep going after you did something wrong.

 

IDIOM         The apple doesn’t fall far from the tree. (English)

                     Christmas cake. (Japanese)

                     Playing piano/violin (music) to a cow. (Chinese)

                     Pearls before swine. (English) -showing beautiful pearls to a

                                                                        pig

 

 

REVIEW of ways to do grabbers/hooks:

1.    funnel

2.    anecdote

3.    history

4.    fact/statistic

5.    question

6.    quotation

7.    idiom/saying

 

Choose one. Start your paragraph off with it. It will make your paragraph, essay, or presentation more lively and engaging.

 

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