EF67
Today’s agenda
·
Return Test5
Correct
RW for bonus pt, due by beginning of class
Monday
·
continue noun clauses- share examples from
homework
Choose vocab for the quiz
·
After return Test5
chance to reconsider midterm recommendations –
Midterm rec – cutoff was 60%
-go with the passmark 50%
-Provincial passmark is 50%
-Check your marks
SCENARIO
Midterm- below 60% NO
Now above 50% YES
*NOTE: You still have to pass the class. We have two weeks left to
go.
·
Spoken fun
Monday
·
Quiz- noun clauses
·
Reconsider midterm recs, check marks
·
Begin sentence combining
·
Begin First Nations
-parallelism
-presentation- individual spoken work
-essay writing
Final week -optional replacement quizzes / tests
Test5
Write a paragraph with quoted material on the following
topic.
paragraph – one block of writing, not an essay
-150-200ww – sweetspot
IDIOM – sweetspot- a comfortable middle ground
-Pen
-Doublespace
-Indent
-One block of writing – don’t write an essay
-Name and class in right corner
CONTENT
Grabber
Topic sentence – on topic, focussed on the question
Supporting sentences, with “ “ – on topic, supporting the TS
Concluding sentence
TOPIC: Why does Micheal Obi want to change the school?
Answer the question!! Make sure you are answering the
question.
Follow the Process
A Prewriting
1.Read the question! Read it five times. Read every word.
2.Brainstorm ideas. key words, vocab, phrases, “ “
3.Organize 1 2 3 4
B Writing
4.Write sentence- Grabber TS Support Concluding
Simple Compound Complex
5.Proofread, edit
6.IF TIME Good copy Ok to pass in the legible rough copy
Why does Micheal Obi want to change the school?
NOT
How does Micheal Obi change the school?
What does he do?
What happens in the story? Retell the story
What kind of person is Micheal Obi?
Is Micheal Obi a good headmaster?
These are your examples from homework.
1.
I believe that she is the youngest
kid in her swimming class.
2.
She realized why she is always late
for the class because she needs to drop off her kids at school before the
class starts. LONG
3.
The little boy stuttered that he
wanted to go to the bathroom during class.
4.
I was wondering why people care
about how others view them.
5.
Dave doesn't know why his father
left them.
6.
Mary likes how her daughter plays
guitar.
7.
Allan said that we should submit
our homework before 5 pm.
8.
My sister, Lissa, said that she
would arrive at the airport tonight.
9.
I know why you are always late for
our English class.
10.
I like how you made the cake for
your mother.
11.
Mr. Obi wonders why he received a
"nasty report" about the school.
12.
She is wondered how her friend
could win the race.
13.
He knows that his girlfriend is a
rally driver.
14.
I think that tomorrow the weather
will be good.
15.
We understood why our teacher
didn't come last week.
16.
My mother who worked in the storage
and distribution office retired at the age of 65. adj cl
17.
Vancour, which my cousin traveled
to two years ago, had an airplane accident. adj cl
18.
Father's dog that hunted different
animals is fierce. adj cl
19.
Maya wondered why people still believe
that the earth is flat.
20.
I know why humans existed before
the evolution advent of christianity. Meaning?
21.
Mason definitely knew how the
Philadelphia Sixers basketball team blew their score earlier versus the Cavaliers.
22.
Yuno doesn’t like how his omelet rice
was cooked.
23.
John is wondering how he will get
his phone back from the principal.
24.
Jess realized/s that she needs to
go home early.
25.
My brother knows why my grandmother
hates avocado.
26.
My ancestors who lived in Punjab
are from India. adj cl
27.
I try to imitate who is an
actor.queene Elizabeth who was a queen of England.
28.
The test a standardize test which all
student have to do. The footpath that was a nerrow it
going to the fraser st.
29.
Michael doesn't know what to do
with his life.
30.
I wonder how much Ben pays for his
rent.
31.
I can't remember when is my
father's birthday. XXX
When is my father's birthday?
I can't remember when my father's
birthday is.
32.
I can see that the beautiful flowers
blossom surrounding the yard. Meaning? RW
33.
I wonder why my colleague didn’t
come to the office today.
34.
I don’t know why I have to submit
all the files again to this office.
35.
I find that my little daughter
likes painting more than playing the piano.
36.
Keiko's friends think that she
knows to drive a car.
37.
Kaito believes what Naomi said to
him.
38.
I wonder why it always rains in
Vancouver?.
39.
Yamato thinks that he will get an A
in English 12.
40.
The teacher said that we should
practice writing sentences.
41.
Sarah forgot why she went to the
market shop.
42.
Ali doesn't know when his driving
test will be.
43.
The teacher doesn’t know why Sara
insisted on doing the experiment that way.
44.
The grandma believes that the children
should wear warmer helping their health. RW
The grandma
believes that the children should wear warmer clothes.
45.
Tom considers how he gets along with
his girlfriend in a comfortable way. Meaning?
46.
I think that my brother can pass the exam.
47.
I told my friend that this footpath
is connected to the road.
48.
Sandy realized that she made a
mistake.
49.
My husband thinks that he would buy
a new TV/car this year.
Meaning?
Really good.
Choose vocab for the quiz.
1.
carefully (adv)
2.
modern (adj)
3.
fulfill (v)
4.
downcast (adj)- sad
5.
prescribe (v)
6.
skeptical (adj)
7.
emphasis (n)
8.
quarrel (n,v)
9.
handsome (adj)
10.
regulation (n)
quarrel- small argument
row- big fight, big argument
big fight- broohaha, scrap, punchup
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