Good morning, everyone.
We’ll get started at 11:00.
Today’s agenda- end 12:45
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Sentence combining- student
examples from homework
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IF TIME Continue essay work
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Optional replacement test, last
hour of class
Monday
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finish essay prep
Tuesday
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Final essay, whole class
I will mark all
the essay and finish all of your final grades/reports. I won’t be able to give
feedback or put comments on the essay. I will read them and put a mark on them.
If you want feedback on the essay, I’d be happy to do that. Hit me up in the
summer. Find me and ask for your essay. I will give it to you the day in
school.
Deadline: July
18th.
Wednesday – June 29th- final day
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NO TEACHING, NO INSTRUCTION
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Marks day, final reports
If you are here, we can talk about how the
term for you. If not, send me an email and I will send you your final mark
back. ahaley@vsb.bc.ca
Deadline: Wednesday, 1PM.
I will be teaching Eng10/EF7/Eng 11 at
8:30-12.
Sentence Combining Sheet #1
1.
The object looks long and thin;
also, it measures about eight inches in length.
The object which looks long
and thin measures about eight inches in length.
The object, which measures
about eight inches in length, looks long and thin.
YOU ARE LIMITED ONLY BY YOUR IMAGINATION
AND YOUR SKILLS
2.
The object, which has a
diameter that measures about 1/8 inch, has
many flat sides but appears rounded.
The object has many flat sides but appears
rounded. SIMPLE
The object has many flat sides, but it appears
rounded. COMPOUND
When ‘but’. When ‘, but’.
The object has a diameter
that measures about 1/8 inch and has many flat sides; however, it appears
rounded. COMPOUND COMPLEX
3.
It often comes in many colours;
the outside is usually yellow while the inside is usually greyish black.
It often comes in many colours
outside and inside inside and out: greyish black and yellow, respectively.
I cleaned my car inside and out.
salt and pepper
peanut butter and jam
respectively- in order
She has a son and a daughter: six and nine,
respectively.
She two sons and a daughter: six, nine, and
eleven, respectively.
with respect to= regarding
I want to talk to you with respect to your
work in the office.
I want to meet with my boss with respect to
my salary.
With respect to my salary, I want to meet
with my boss.
prepositional phrases ‘to the store’ ‘ with
my boss’ ‘about our order’
I am writing with respect to the order we placed
with you.
with respect to = regarding, about
DIFFERENT MEANING respectful- polite
Closing of a letter:
With deep respect, TOO STRONG
Respectfully,
: colon
- give further information
Donna is taking two classes: Math 12 and
Chem 11.
Mei has lived in many countries: China, Japan,
Italy, Iran, Mongolia, India, Jordan, Brazil, Pakistan, Vietnam, Lithuania, The
Philippines, Canada, Palestine, Thailand, Myanmar (Burma), Denmark, United Arab Emirates, etc.
Filipino – nationality
Chinese, Indian, Mongolian, Iranian,
Persian, Jordanian, Italian, Pakistani, Afghani, Ukranian, Canadian, French,
German, Spanish, American, Greek, Palestinian, Brazilian, Dutch, Polish, Finnish,
Swedish, Scottish, Irish, English, Russian, Lithuanian, Thai, Burmese, Danish, Egyptian,
New Zealander and so on.
Nicknames: Kiwi, Canuck, Yankee, Aussie, Limey
city people: New Yorker, Vancouverite, Haligonian,
Calgarian, Edmontonian, Torontonian, Seattleite, Portlander
5. The top of the object is made of rubber with
an aluminum band around it, and the bottom comes to a sharp point.
4.
There is writing and a number
that is often a 2 or a 3 along the outside of the object.
7. The longer you use the object, the shorter and
duller it gets.
8. The object is often used by students, artists,
and office workers.
We want a nice mix
of sentence styles.
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