Monday, 19 June 2023

EF 7 11 Class 37 Essay, presentation

 

Good morning, everyone.

 

Today’s agenda:

·      Begin essay work

·      Begin presentation work

·      Animal Farm Chapter 8

 

IF TIME

·      Continue parallelism

·      Continue sentence combining

·      Remaining verb exercises – verb tenses, phrasal verbs

·      HW   Don’t forget to email me about the optional replacement

test or quiz

 

Tuesday

·      Continue essay work

·      Animal Farm Chapter 8

·      Presentation work

IF TIME

·      Continue parallelism

·      Continue sentence combining

·      Remaining verb exercises – verb tenses, phrasal verbs

 

Wednesday

·      Continue essay work

·      Animal Farm Chapter 9

·      Presentation work

IF TIME

·      Continue parallelism

·      Continue sentence combining

·      Remaining verb exercises – verb tenses, phrasal verbs

 

·      Optional Replacement test or quiz (last 55m of class)

 

 

Thursday

·      Continue essay work

·      Animal Farm Chapter 9

·      Presentation work

IF TIME

·      Continue parallelism

·      Continue sentence combining

·      Remaining verb exercises – verb tenses, phrasal verbs

 

 

Friday

·      Continue essay work

·      Animal Farm Chapter 10

·      Finish presentation work

 

IF TIME

·      Continue parallelism

·      Continue sentence combining

·      Remaining verb exercises – verb tenses, phrasal verbs

 

 

Monday

·      Presentation day

·      Animal Farm Chapter 10

 

Tuesday

·      Final test AF Ch 7-10 – essay

I will not have much time to mark the essay in detail- grammar

I’ll read it and give a mark.

 

Wednesday

·      Marks Day

·      Final class

·      Not an instructional day

We can meet one-on-one to discuss your final result.

 

 

 

Essay work

 

sentences—paragraphs—essays – papers (college,university: 5,10, 20 pages) – thesis- graduating from degree (80-120 pages) – book (300-600 pages)

 

** sentences- sentence types: simple, compound, complex, compound-complex

FOUNDATION OF ALL WRITING

 

** paragraphs – structure   Grabber

Topic sentence

Supporting sentences,

Concluding sentence

(150-200 words)

 

- format                - font size, doublespace, indent, paper orientation

 

** essay -multi-paragraph writing, 3-5,6,7 paragraphs on a topic

 

EXAM Writing prompt: “in essay form” “in paragraphs” “multi-paragraph” – means write an essay

“at least 300 words”  sweetspot, the Goldilocks zone (300-400)

 

We will focus on the five-paragraph essay – basic model, our focus

 

essay- French “to try” , try to explain something in full, attempt to describe a subject completely, endeavour to explicate an idea

 

essay – an attempt to write a longer piece that covers a topic well

 

Writing to Communicate p50

From a paragraph to an essay- expand the paragraph in to the essay.

Distribute photocopy

“Expanding the Paragraph"

 

Model Paragraph #1 “Man’s Best Friend”

Model Essay #1 “Man’s Best Friend”

 

Structure of this paragraph

-Grabber(optional, highly suggested)

-Topic sentence

-Body- supporting points

Supporting idea 1  

-point

            -subpoint 1

            -subpoint 2

Supporting idea 2

            -point

            -subpoint 1 & subpoint 2

Supporting idea 3

            -point

            -subpoint 1

            -subpoint 2

-Concluding sentence- restate the topic sentence

(150-200ww)

 

*The writer chose to not start with a grabber. Starting with a grabber is a good idea.

Possible grabbers: ask a question, short anecdote, fact or statistic, history, etc.

 

 

Model Essay 1- same topic “Man’s Best Friend”

-almost three times as long, not five times, not 10 pp

-divided into paragraphs, five paragraphs

*The five-paragraph is the basic essay model

 

 

**

An essay has three sections (five paragraphs):

**

1.    Introductory paragraph – usually one paragraph, introduces the topic, thesis statement, and main points of the essay

2.    Body paragraphs– usually several paragraphs- 2,3,4,5 paragraphs (3 is the magic number for a standard five-paragraph), discussion, explanation, description of the main points of the essay

3.    Concluding paragraph- usually one paragraph, restatement of the introduction, restates the topic, thesis and main points, ends with a clincher (like a grabber only at the end of the piece)

 

Length -300-350 words, not too long, short compact paragraphs, more than twice, almost three times as long as one paragraph, not a book

 

 

Read for HW “THE BARE BONES OF THE FIVE-PARAGRAPH ESSAY”

 

 

 

Animal Farm  presentation

acting- performing- theatre

 

cosplay- costume play

 

 

Imagine you are a character in Animal Farm. What would you think as the character? What would you say to the other characters? What would the other characters think and say? What would you all talk about? What would you do?

 

Create a short scene based on your understanding of the characters in Animal Farm. Imagine a scene in which the characters interact. This can be based on a scene from the novel or from a scene from your imagination.

 

Scenario- scene, setting, place and time, plot

 

Write a script in which characters speak with each other about the situation.

 

narrator? An outside person who is explaining the story

 

The scene should between 3-5 minutes long.

 

Next Monday, your group will perform the script for the class.

 

You can have the scripts to refer to, but please, no boring reading out loud. Put some energy into it.

Pass in a written copy of the script to me on Friday.

 

 

 

STEP 1

Get into groups of 4-6. In a group, imagine a scene in which characters from Animal Farm interact.

Assign a character to each member of your group.

 

STEP 2

Make a plot.

Write a script.

Divide up the work evenly.

 

STEP 3

Practice blocking and dialogue.

 

STEP 4

Perform it for us. Have fun!

 

VALUE: Easy 10 pts

Class work: 4 pts

Script: 4 pts

Presentation 2pts

 

What is a plot?

Let’s talk about that!

 

 

 

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