English Foundations
5/6
Good morning, everyone.
We will get started at 8:30
Today’s agenda
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Reminder about email subject line Name, Class,
Time
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Review Quiz on adj cl
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Using qoated material, Your examples from HW
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Continue with “The Wise Woman of Cordoba”
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Sentence combining
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Literary terms
Friday
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“The Wise Woman of Cordoba”
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Choose words for replacement quiz on Monday
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Test#5 Paragraph on a general topic. No “”
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Deadline for repl. quiz is 3pm Friday
NEXT WEEK
Monday
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You can check your marks on Monday if you wish. Bring
in your quiizzes and tests to verify your marks.
7 quizzes
4 tests
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Replacement quiz at the end of class for the
people who signed up for it.
Tuesday
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Letter writing, business letter?
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Wednesday
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Optional replacement test on “Wise Woman of
Corboba”
Thursday
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Final test- paragraph
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Friday
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Review
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Marks day
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I can give your final mark.
Email protocol
Subject line of your email:
Name, Class
Write a sentence with an adjective clause for each.
Submit to me by 9:05.
1.
woman who
The woman who lives next door is
very friendly.
2.
famous which
The Eiffel Tower, which is in Paris,
is a famous tourist attraction.
3.
amazing that
It was amazing that I passed the test.
noun clause
We watched a ballet performance that was
amazing. adjectice clause
I saw a sunrise that was amazing. adjective
clause
amazed/amazing
4.
pay that
I have to pay the debt that I owe.
He refused to pay the bill that somebody
charged him in the wrong way. RW
He refused to pay the bill that somebody
charged him incorrectly.
He refused to pay the bill that somebody
charged him without authorization.
He refused to pay the bill that somebody
charged him by mistake.
5.
money which
The money that I invested is doing
well.
I am saving the birthday money which my
mother gave me.
I have been saving my money for a long
time. SIMPLE
The millionaire paid a lot of money for the
antique vase which came from Japan.
In China, children are very happy to get
money which package in red letter.
In China, children are very happy to get
money which comes in a red envelope.
6.
open who
My aunt who is very open-minded is
very close to me.
She is a woman who rarely opens her
mouth. She is taciturn.
She is as quiet as a mouse.
He is a man who rarely shuts his mouth.
He is a motormouth. He is always flapping his gums. He is a big mouth. (2
meanings- talk a lot / tell secrets, gossip)
My dad’s expression: When he dies, they
will have to beat his mouth to death with a stick.
You can get lost in your sentence if you get too
complicated. Sometimes we think too much.
Keep practicing. Email some more examples to me if you want.
We can look at them together anytime.
Misplaced modifiers-
The woman who lives next door is very friendly.
The woman is very friendly who lives next door. wrong
place
adj cl comes right next to the noun
My sister bought an old table. SIMPLE
My sister bought an old table who is a nurse. misplaced
My sister who is a nurse bought an old table.
The man saw a cat who was riding a bicycle.
The man who was riding a bicycle saw a cat.
Sentence review
SIMPLE
COMPOUND
COMPLEX
For the final week of our class, we will be using all of
these together.
These are
the example of sentences that have quoted words/material/text in them.
1. Some of the people in the city of
Cordoba said that the Wise Woman had “contact with the devil”.
2. Surprisingly, when the Wise Woman
was imprisoned, “the witch had escaped” according to the news.
3. The people of Cordoba said that the
Wise Woman was “married to the devil” for she never had any relationship with
any men.
4.
The Wise woman should be "burned
to death", although she escaped in the end.
5.
The judge saw “an enormous ship” which looked like a
real ship.
6.
The Wise Woman
was very rich because the authorities found
“
ten barrels of gold” at her home.
7.
The Wise Woman
who can “travel across the wall” on a drawing of a ship must be a witch.
8.
The
wise woman was a good person who helped people in different ways in the city
“always helped those in difficulty” XXX
Not a
sentence. RW
The
wise woman was a good person who “always helped those in difficulty” in the
city. LONG
9.
“was
married to the devil”
People
said that the wise woman would fly above the rooftops. XXX
People
said that the wise woman would fly “above the rooftops”.
People
said that the wise woman would fly in the sky by herself.
** If
you write just with your own words, you do not use quoation marks. Quotation marks
are only for the words that you take/borrow from the book/story/text.
Keep your quotations to just
a few words- 2,3,4 words
You have to make a judgement
call. Why are using these words? Are they your own words or are they words from
the story?
“contact with the devil”
people
the
Only quote special words or
phrases that you are borrowing from the story.
When you are writing your
paragraph, you can borrow/quote/take a few words from the story and quiote them
in your sentences.
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