Good morning, everyone.
Today’s agenda:
·
Feedback forms- You each need five.
We can give helpful feedback to our fellow
learners.
-criticism, critical (sounds negative)
-constructive criticism – helpful advice
·
Presentation day
I will gather the scripts first thing, at
the beginning of class. Make sure you have one printed for me.
6 groups to do their thing.
·
Animal Farm Chapter 9
·
Animal Farm Chapter 10
IF TIME
·
Continue parallelism
·
Continue sentence combining
·
Remaining verb exercises – verb tenses,
phrasal verbs
·
Vocab exercise
Tuesday
·
MOSTLY THE FULL CLASS
Final test AF – essay
I will not have much time to mark the essay in
detail- grammar
I’ll read it and give a mark.
·
Collect novels
Wednesday
·
Final class
·
Marks Day
·
Not an instructional day
We can meet one-on-one to discuss your final result. We can
look at your essay together.
If you are absent on Wednesday, email me between 9:15-11:30.
I will email you your final mark. I won’t be able to discuss your term via
email. If you like to discuss anything with me, you have to come to school.
Chapter
9 Discussion Notes
MY
LECTURE NOTES
Boxer
hurt, keeps working, not show pain
Clover
nurse, Benjamin worried
Boxer
looking forward to his retirement- good pension plan
hard
winter, rations reduced except for pigs and dogs (75)
Squealer spins “readjustment” real
meaning ‘reduce’ ‘cut’
EUPHEMISM – polite word, indirect
word, instead of the real word, clear word
‘bathroom’ ‘washroom’
Squealer uses figures to prove
life better
“they
had been slaves and now they were free” (75)
Napoleon
sires many children- educated, play apart
other
animals must stand aside for pigs
pigs
wear green ribbons on Sundays
successful
year, but rations reduced, pigs still fat, comfortable
barley reserved for pigs, beer
ration
life
has “greater dignity” (77) songs, speeches, processions
Spontaneous
Demonstrations (77) appointed time, military-like procession
not ‘spontaneous’, forced
fluttering
flags, empty bellies
Animal
Farm-Republic with president
further
propaganda against Snowball regarding Battle of Cowshed (78), Napoleon wounded
Snowball
Moses
the raven returns (78), outwardly condemned but supported by pigs
Boxer
tiring, weakening, collapses
knacker
van- Benjamin finally speaks up, too late
l knacker
– enders animals into leather, glue
Squealer
spins van/ death, hospital
pigs
bought, got drunk on whiskey
Where
did the money for the whiskey come from?
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Chapter 10 Discussion Notes
MY
LECTURE NOTES
pre-rebellion
life forgotten, all original animals dead except Clover, Benjamin, Moses, some
pigs
No
animals ever retired
Benjamin
more or less the same, more “morose” “taciturn” (?) after Boxer died
VOCAB ‘taciturn’ close-lipped, uncommunicative,
silent
new
horses, stupid, good workers, comrades, accept everything
farm
prosperous, successful- animals not richer, except dogs and pigs
many
dogs and pigs
pigs
write reports, immediately burned (87)
no
memory/ context to compare quality of life
Benjamin
recalls, cynical- not better or worse
Squealer
spins
Animals
feel hope “sense of honour and privilege” (87)
“imperishable
pride” “old heroic days” (88)
patriotic
about Animal Farm
“All
animals were equal”
Squealer
reeducates sheep: “Four legs good, two legs better!”
Pigs
on hind legs, Napoleon with whip
Benjamin
reads aloud single commandment (90)
“All animals are equal, but some are more
equal than others.”
COMMON IDIOM some are more equal than others
pigs
wear clothes, smoke pipe, carry whips
Big
meeting, final scene of book
all
friends, speechifying, toasting
model
farm “did more work and received less food” (92)
common
“labour problems” “you have your lower animals... we have our lower classes”
(92)
Napoleon
not “subversive” or “revolutionary”, just want “normal business relations”
farm
co-op “owned by the pigs jointly” (93)
renamed
“Manor Farm”
big
fight, card cheats, indistinguishable- read final paragraph (95)
What do you think will happen
next on Animal Farm?
Will the animals rebel again?
Essay tomorrow – Focus will be on good essay structure.
I will ask you an easy question.
Organize and write a good paragraph.
e.g. What are three some ways Napoleon goes against Old
Major’s ideas?
How to Get a High Mark on Your Essay
1.
Read the question.
2.
Generate ideas.
3.
Organize your ideas.
4.
Make sure that each sentence is a real sentence.
5.
Check your sentences- proofread, edit
6.
Submit it and forget about it.