Good morning, everyone.
We will get started at 9:15.
Daily class notes: haleyshec.blogspot.com
The end of our third week! 1/3 finished the course.
Today’s agenda:
·
Next
week – first spoken mark x/10
Based
on how much spoken contribution you make in class.
·
Return
Quiz#3- compound sentences, go over
·
Continue
review structure and format of paragraphs
Monday
·
Test#1
Paragraph
·
Begin
complex sentences- adverb clause
Tuesday
·
Continue
adverb clauses
Quiz#3
Write
a compound sentence for each.
1.
so popular
Justin Beiber is a popular singer, so he is
world-famous.
2.
but lunch
I forgot me lunch, but I do have an apple.
3.
for
example vegetarian
Maria is a vegetarian; for example, she never eats,
beef, pork, or chicken
ERROR Maria is a vegetarian, for example, she never eats,
beef, pork, or chicken.
4.
therefore decision
Moving to Cananad was a tough decision; therefore, my
husband and I talked about it for a long time.
5.
as
a result sick
John worked seven day a week for a year; as a result, he got
sick.
John got caught in the rain; as a result, he got
sick.
6.
however
exhausted
I was exhausted; however, I still went to work.
IDIOM
tired of – not interested anymore, bored, not patient with anymore
The
young mother is tired of her husband not helping around the house.
exhausted
– physically or mentally tired
I
can’t talk to you right now; I’m exhausted.
IDIOMS-
worn out, dog-tired, bone-tired, gas tank is empty
She
is worn out after a long week.
IDIOM
burn out – long term tiredness,
Mei
got burned out after working as a nurse for ten years; she changed professions.
COMPOUND
SENTENCES:
,
SOBA
;
;
TRANS.
Biggest
problem - punctuation ; ,
Let’s
do some corrections and rewriting.
IDIOM
in charge of – you’re the boss
Jun
is in charge of hiring and firing at the company.
Stanley
Park is popular with many people, so it is big and beautiful. LOGIC
Stanley
Park is big and beautiful, so it is popular with many people.
She
made a decision about her work.
do
a decision
make
a decision
She
made a decision about working at the factory.
exhausted
(adj) – very tired
exhausting
(adj) – tiring
Sina
is exhausted; he went to school and then worked 12 hours yesterday.
Talking
to my mother can be exhausting.
Sarah’s
job is exhausting, but she likes the money.
John
forgot to bring his phone. He left it at home.
I forgot
to turn off my stove today.
My
son needs me to babysit; therfore, I will help them.
STRONG
IMPERATIVE, NOT REALLY ASK need PERSON
to V
I
need you to drive me to the airport.
Your
sister needs you to made some lunch for her kids.
I need
you to clean up your pigsty.
VOCAB
– funny pigsty
This
place is a pigsty!
This
place looks like a bomb hit it.
**
Paragraph format
-
150-250 words, Goldilocks Zone
-
one block of writing
-
doublespace
-
pen
-
indent the first word (SPACE KEY OR TAB KEY,
width of little finger)
Paragraph structure
-
topic sentence
-
supporting sentences (POINT and SUBPOINTS)
-
concluding sentence
Dia – day
Buenos dias! Good
day!
muerto – dead
similar to Hallowe’en
Great little paragraph. Really well organized. Really good
sentences.
Monday
– paragraph on the articles from The Universal Declaration of Human Rights (UDHR)
I
will ask you a straightforward question. It will be an opinion question. You
can give your opinion. Bring your articles on Monday.
sentence
fragments -a piece of a sentence, not a full sentence
She
likes to play sports. For example, soccer, basketball and volleyball.
FRAG
FIX
For
example, SV soccer, basketball and volleyball.
For
example, she enjoys soccer, basketball and volleyball.
Because
of the rain. FRAG
FIX
We
cancelled the picnic because of the rain.
flowery
words – too many adjective, too much description, rep, too much
She
was beautiful.
She
was as beautiful as field of rose in the morning dew.
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