Thursday, 22 September 2022

EF56 Class 12- paragraph format and structure

 Good morning, everyone.

We will get started at 9:15.

ahaley@vsb.bc.ca

Daily class notes: haleyshec.blogspot.com

 

Today’s agenda:

·      Return Quiz#3, go over

·      Begin adverb clauses

·      Continue review structure and format of paragraphs

 

Monday

·      Test#1 Paragraph

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Quiz#3

Write a compound sentence for each.

Submit it to me by 9:45


1.    so                                     popular

2.    but                                   lunch

3.    for example                   vegetarian

4.    therefore                       decision

5.    as a result                      sick

6.    however                         exhausted



Review of the structure of a paragraph

 

*6-8 sentences

*150-200-250 words, Goldilocks Zone- not too much, not too little 

  English 12

*one block of writing

*Indent the first word of the paragraph- space bar, TAB key

*Double space

*Pen and paper

 

What goes into a paragraph?

1.    Topic sentence – usually the first sentence of your pargagraph, gives the topic and the controlling idea (your take on the topic)

2.    Supporting sentences-

3. Concluding sentence- wrap up, end the paragraph

 

e.g. What is the most important thing about raising children?

topic – most important, raising children

controlling idea- unconditional love tempered with high standards

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics. First of all, gold has a lustrous beauty that is resistant to corrosion. Therefore, it is suitable for jewelry, coins, and ornamental purposes. Gold never needs to be polished and will remain beautiful forever. For example, a Macedonian coin remains as untarnished today as the day it was made 25 centuries ago. Another important characteristic of gold is its usefulness to industry and science. For many years, it has been used in hundreds of industrial applications, such as photography and dentistry. The most recent use of gold is in astronauts' suits. Astronauts wear gold-plated heat shields for protection when they go outside spaceships in space. In conclusion, gold is treasured not only for its beauty but also for its utility.

 

Don’t stress about the vocabulary.

This is all about structure.

 

Topic sentence

Supporting sentences

Concluding sentence

 

 

“Golden Week” Paragraph Work

Topic sentence- topic ‘golden week’

controlling idea ‘four holidays’

 

*Paragraph that explains the meaning of something: definition writing

Supporting sentences:

 

1.    POINT April 29- birthday Emperor Showa

SUBPOINT (DETAIL) remember period history

2.    POINT May 3 Constit. Memorial Day

SUBPOINT (DETAIL) estab. constitution

3.    POINT May 4 Midorino-hi

SUBPOINT enjoy outdoors

4.    POINT May 5 Children’s Day

SUBPOINT 1 health, happiness children

SUBPOINT 2 used to be Boys’ Day

SUBPOINT 3 carp flags

Why so much more detail in #4?

 

Concluding sentence- restate, summary

 

 

A topic sentence gives the topic and then opens a door that you will take us though.

 

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