EF 3/4 June 22

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Good morning.

Today’s agenda:

1. Sentence combining from homework “At the Beach”

2. Mr. Isaac sold ice cream. 

It was packed in ice. 

He was considered part of the beach. 

The truck was small. 

The truck was in the parking lot.

Mr. Isaac was considered part of the beach because he sold ice cream that was packed in ice in the small truck that was in the parking lot. COMPLEX- 

adv cl adj cl adj cl

3. Narrative writing

* Email me your sentence combining “At the Beach” work by 

12:30 today. One homework point.

Narrative writing – telling a story

break a simple story down into 4-5 parts.

Topic sentence- introduces the idea of the paragraph

- supporting sentences

- events of the story

- in order of time

- tell the story, narrative

Concluding sentence

EASY TOPIC: What did you do yesterday?

Topic Sentence – fun day, relaxing, family

NOTES, KEY WORDS

1. woke up early, played music

DETAILS -6am, mandolin, scales

2. family woke up, had breakfast together

DETAILS – 10am, pancakes

3. went to beach with dog

DETAILS – Tsawwassen, Boundary Bay, walked in the sand, looked for shells, dog running and swimming

4. had supper

DETAILS – lots of leftevers, simple supper

5. everybody relaxed, did their own thing

DETAILS – played video games, watched movie, read

ROUGH COPY:

Yesterday was a fun, relaxing day for me which I spent with my family. I got up at the crack of dawn and practiced some new scales on mandolin. When my family woke up at 10, we all had homemade pancakes together. They were tasty. Then we went to Tsawwassen to Boundary Bay where we walked in the sand and looked for shells, especially sand dollars. My dog, Butter, went nuts running and swimming. After a few hours of enjoying the beach, we came home and had a simple supper. At night, everybody relaxed and did their own thing, like playing video games, watching a movie, and reading. All in all, it was a very pleasant Sunday.

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Topic Sentence

- supporting sentences

Concluding Sentence

All the sentences are simple, compound and complex.

marsh, swamp – water, wet land,

Begin to get some ideas together for a narrative paragraph

1. Read the topic.

2. Think of 4-5 events. Make notes (2-3 key words). No sentences yet.

3. After you have notes and key word, then write the sentences for the paragraph.

PLAN – WRITE

“What did you do yesterday?”

Do not begin by writing sentences. Make a plan/outline first.

Email me that today. Homework.