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My updated teaching assignment for Quarter 2
(November-January):
P1 (9:15-11:30) EF 5/6
P2 (12-2:15) Writing
567
This could change again.
All of these are full with a waiting list.
November – January
Tuesdays nights- approx 4:30-5:15
Zoom Sentence Tutorial – Q&A about sentence writing
I’ll be set up on Zoom. Anyone can log in and ask questions
about sentence writing.
This is not a structured course. This is just my own thing
that I like to do.
Very cas.
I’ll post the Zoom link this week.
Today’s Agenda
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Attendance
Practice
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Finish verb tense– present perfect
·
Essay work (EF5)
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Introductory paragraphs- grabbers, thesis
statement preview
Tuesday or Wednesday
·
Quiz#5- adjective clauses
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Essay work
Wednesday
·
Essay work
Thursday, Oct.31
·
Optional replacement quiz and/or test (last
hour)
Friday, Nov. 1 – last day
Marks day
See final marks and comments
No instruction
One-on-one meeting
Week off- back to school for Quarter on Tuesday, November 12th.
Monday, November 11th is a holiday, Remembrance
Day
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Continue with adjective Clauses
who- people
that- things, animals
which- unique or special things
Jun’s sister is a nurse. She lives in Burnaby. SIMPLE
Jun’s sister is a nurse, and she lives in Burnaby. COMPOUND
Jun’s sister who is a nurse lives in Burnaby.
COMPLEX- ADJ CL
My sister is a nurse who lives in Burnaby. COMPLEX-
ADJ CL
My sister who lives in Burnaby is a nurse. COMPLEX-
ADJ CL
My sister who lives
in Burnaby is a nurse. COMPLEX- ADJ CL
‘who lives in Burnaby’ is decribing ‘sister’
The blue bottle is hers. adj
The bottle that is blue is hers. adj cl
The orange that he bought is delicious.
The blue bottle that is full of water is hers.
adj adj cl
The blue full of water bottle is hers. NOT
ENGLISH GRAMMAR
This book is from the library. SIMPLE SV
This paperback book is from the South Hill library.
SIMPLE SV
This paperback book that was/is very boring is
from South Hill library.
This paperback book that I read this weekend is
from South Hill library.
This paperback book is from South Hill library
which is close to my house.
This paperback book is from South Hill library
which is on Fraser and 43rd.
HIGHER LEVEL This paperback book that I read this
weekend is from South Hill library which is on Fraser and 43rd.
This paperback book is from South Hill library
which is on Fraser and 43rd. I read it this weekend.
VPL- adult books at intermediate level
-ESL Readers – various levels
Ask the librarian for their ESL readers for adults.
Exercise 5
1. I
would never marry a person who smokes and drinks too much.
2. My
brother bought a dog that
She came to Canada to find personal freedom which is very
important to her.
Juan is very careful about his
health which is a high priority in his life.
Last New Years Eve, which my family came to Canada for, was
very important to me.
Last New Years Eve, which my family came to Canada for, was
very important to me. After four years of being apart, we were able share this
time together. SIMPLE
ALTERNATIVE- HIGHER LEVEL, LONGER
Last New Years Eve, which my family was able to share together
after four years apart, was very important to me.
eve – the night before an event
or holiday
Christmas Eve
New Years Eve
Hallowe’en- All Hallow’s Eve
Hallowe’en-
Leave your outdoor light turned
off.
Put out a few decorations. Leave
your outdoor light on.
Pumpkin- Jack o’ Lantern
Jack of the lantern
Jack- the Devil
Five o’clock- Five of the clock
IDIOM Could you hit the lights? Hit the lights.
Hit the books. study hard
Hit the sack. go to bed immediately
Hit the hay. go to bed
Hit the roof. get very angry quickly
Hit the nail on the head. be correct, exectly right
3. My
brother bought a dog that is black and white.
My brother that/who is black and white
bought a dog. XXX
My brother who wears a black and white jacket bought a
dog.
misplaced modifier
I gave a table to my sister that has three legs. XXX
I gave a table that has three legs to my sister.
The man saw a cat who was riding a bicycle. XXX
The man who was riding a bicycle saw a cat.
The man that was hiding in a tree meowing saw a cat.
XXX
The man saw a cat that was hiding in a tree meowing.
a cat meows
a dog barks
a horse whinnies
a hen clucks
a lion roars
a duck quacks
a crow caws
a monkey ?
a robin/canary sings
a rooster crows cock-a-doodle-do
a chicken clucks
a turkey gobbles
a pig oinks
a frog ribbets/croaks
a pigeon coos
a donkey/mule brays
3.The doctor who treated me was from Pakistan.
4.She will never forget the day which when she got
her promotion. adj cl
5.Rosa fell in love with the man who his whose brother
works in Gino’s restaurant.
Her sister is the parent who her whose
daughter got a scholarship to UBC.
Rosa fell in love with a man; her sister works in Gino’s
restaurant. COMPOUND
6. Elephants eat plants and bushes that are the largest animals
in the world. misplaced modifier
Elephants, which are the largest animals in the world,
eat plants and bushes.
Dogs, which are descended from wolves, are the most
common pet.
My son, who is ten years old, loves soccer.
Pandas, which come from China, are related to raccoons.
All people in the world, who live on th earth, breathe
air.
Elephants, which eat plants and bushes, are the
largest animals in the world.
I saw an elephant that could ride a bicycle.
He has a dog that is black and white.
Quiz tomorrow
who
that
which
Vocab to review:
1. park
The kids play in the park that is next to the school.
The kids play in QE Park, which is next to the school.
2. school
Mary, who is the tallest kid in
the school, is my friend.
3. bicycle
4. store
5. car
6. Hallowe’en
7. pen
8. dog
9. doctor
10.
ring
Stanley Park, which is in Vancouver, is huge.
Stanley Park, which is located downtown, is
huge.
Stanley Park, where we had our picnic, is huge.
downtown, home – no preposition
She went to downtown.
She went to Burnaby.
She went home.
She lives downtown.
She lives in NewWest.
Commas around adjective clauses- Writing567
My country, which is in a strategic location in the Middle East,
is Iran.
Practice for the quiz tomorrow.
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