EF56 CW567
Good morning, everyone.
We will get started at 9:15.
Today’s agenda:
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Quiz on noun clauses
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Return Test#3
TS – announcing the topic
using first person
quoting
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Begin quotation module
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HW
Tuesday
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Sentence fragments
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Continue quoting module
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present perfect verb tense
Wednesday
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Run-on sentences
Thursday
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Begin sentence combining
Quiz#6
Write a sentence with a noun clause for each.
Pass it in to me by 9:45.
1.that expert
2.why skill
3.how local
4.that predict
5.why compete
6.how estimate
Test#3 paragraph
CHOICE
Why did Maylin work so hard in the restaurant?
Why did she argue with the governor?
Choose one. Write a 150-250 ww paragraph.
Grabber
TS- topic sentence
Supporting sent
Concluding sentence
PROCESS:
PREWRITING – don’t skip the plan
WRITING
POINTS- FEEDBACK TO REFINE YOUR WRITING
Topic Sentence – Don’t announce the topic
“In this paragraph, I’m going to write about why Maylin argued
with the governor.” HIGH-SCHOOLISH, AVOID
Academic tone- avoid first person, No “I”, not narrative writing
BETTER CHOICE
“Maylin argued with the governor for three reasons.”
“There are three reasons why Maylin felt that she had to
fight with the governor.”
Quoting from the story.
Don’t copy from the story.
plagiarism
Maylin loved to cook for the customers who were lonely and
cold and bone-tired. XXX
Use quotations marks when we borrow text from a story.
Maylin loved to cook for the customers who were “lonely and
cold and bone-tired”.
“warmest praise”
The governor saved his “warmest praise” for Maylin’s dish.
quote borrowed text
Review your paragraph.
Which is your grabber?
Which is your topic sentence?
What is your first point?
What is your second point?
What is your third point?
What is your concluding sentence?
authentic English – English that a native-speaker would use
Maylin was the sole breadwinner. Her family relied on the
money that she earned. adj cl
Her customers would
remember home-cooked meals with their families. active voice
Her customers would be reminded
of home-cooked meals with their families. passive voice
I told my son to
do his homework. active voice
My son was told to
do his homework. passive voice
Three forms of a verb:
BASE PAST PARTICIPLE
tell told told
put put put
drive drove driven
eat ate eaten
write wrote written
The customers ate Maylin’s food and were happy. After the
food had been eaten, they felt nostaligic and homesick.
had been eaten – passive voice, past perfect
passive future perfect continuous
SECRET- English speakers don’t use future perfect. We don;t
even past perfect usually. We only really use present perfect.
All of the chicken will have been eaten by the time
you get home.
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Uses of quotation marks 1.titles
2.reported speech
3.irony, ironic finger quotes
(for talking, casual)
4. borrowed words from a text
1. titles
– short story, chapter in a book, magazine article, newspaper article, part of
a book, not a whole book
“Roses
Sing on New Snow”
In the story “Roses Sing on New Snow”, a main conflict is the person vs person
conflict between Maylin and the governor.
novel,
book by itself, has its own covers
Choice:
Impact OR Impact (Ctrl i)
Animal
Farm
Animal
Farm italics
Ddhdhjdjdfjdf ddjdjdjdj
writing
with a pen Impact
writing
on computer Impact italics
Impact ctrl+i
In
the novel Shanghai Girls, the theme of ….
In
the novel Shanghai Girls, the theme of ….
“The Sniper” “Charles” titles of short stories
<<Impact>> Not English
<<The
Sniper>> NOT ENGLISH “The
Sniper”
Math 5>4 greater than 4<6 lesser than
> alligator’s
mouth The alligator always eats the
bigger number.
“ “ usually double quotation marks, not single
‘ ‘
e.g. The class
really enjoyed reading Animal Farm. The class really enjoyed reading
“Roses Sing on New Snow”.
Luis is reading a
book called Two Pieces of Clothes. computer
Luis is reading a
book called Two Pieces of Clothes. handwriting
Charlotte’s Web is a very popular kids’ book.
“Animal
Farm” XXX, not both, just one or
the other
either belt or
suspenders
IDIOM He is a belt
and suspenders kind of person.
kids’ book - ‘
apostrophe, shows possession
Joe’s new bicycle is
pretty rad/cool.
Joe’s sister’s bike
is also really nice. one sister
Joe’s sisters’ bikes
are also really nice. two sister, three sisters
The student’s
writing is improving. 1 person
The students’ writing
is improving. all of them
Is the noun singular
or plural. Put the apostrophe after the word.
The dogs’ leashes
got tangled.
punctuation – umbrella
term – comma, period, apostrophe, semicolon, colon, exclamation point,
quotation mark, hyphen, dash
Jun read an article
in The Vancouver Sun called “What does Putin Want?”.
Jun read an article
in The Vancouver Sun called “The Future for Ukraine”.
Good Food has
an article called “Old-Fashioned Apple Pie”.
Good Food has
an article called “Old-Fashioned Apple Pie”.
bold- not
necessary, used for visual effects
2. reported
speech, direct speech- exact words that someone says, quote, quotation
Mary
said, “I am going to be late today.”
You
said, “I will pick up the kids.”
indirect
speech
Mary
said that she will be late today. noun clause
You said
that you would pick up the kids. noun clause
She said, “That will
be fine.”
She said that that
would be fine.
FURTHER INSTRUCTION
ON QUOTING DIRECT AND INDIRECT SPEECH:
https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/punctuation/quotation_marks/index.html
CONFUSION
Mary
said that she is going to be late today. indirect speech, noun clause
COMMON ERROR
Mary said that I am
going to be late today.
FIXES
Mary said that
she is going to be late today. noun clause indirect
Mary said, “I am
going to be late today.” direct
ERROR My mother said
that you should do your homework. Who is ‘you’?
FIXED My mother said
to me, “You should do your homework.” direct
FIXED My mother said
that I should do my homework. indirect
My daughter said,
“Let’s go to the pet store.” DIRECT SPEECH
My daughter said
that we should go to the pet store. INDIRECT SPEECH
that we should go
to the pet store - noun clause
let’s – let us
3. irony,
finger quotes- informal, speaking
three
kinds of irony –
1.
verbal irony – say something but mean the opposite,
not hurtful, gentle humour
sarcasm- meant to
hurt someone, rough humour, biting humour
He is a sarcastic
person.
SPOKEN Joan went to
a party last night. She missed work today because she is “sick”. She has the
“party flu.” She is hungover. She has a hangover.
a hangover-
headache, dehydration, and nausea from drinking too much the night before
2.
dramatic irony – you know something that the character
in the book or movie doesn’t know
3.
situational irony- you try to do something to help someone but you wind up
hurting them, you get the opposite result from what you intended
IDIOM wind up – what happens in the end
“Dora
wanted to move to Chicago, but she wound up going to Toronto.”
“Sue is
studying business in college. She will probably wind up being a manager in a
company.”
proposterous
(adj) – ridiculous, outrageous
MOST IMPORTANT FOR US
4.
borrowing words from a story , putting them into
your paragraph,
essay
Borrow words from a text. Incorporate the words into our writing.
Include the words in our sentence.
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