Good morning.
We will get started at 8:30.
Butter, 6 years old, boy
Golden Doodle- Groodle
Mother- Golden Retriever
Father- Standard Poodle
Retrieve – get something back, find something
Retriever – hunting dog
Retriever- bring a bird back to you
Swimming, playing fetch
Pointer- hunting dog
Sniffer dogs – airport, security- for explosives,
drugs
Comfort dogs- therapy dogs
Companion dogs-
Seeing-eye dog
Service dog- dog who is working
Therapy dogs – hospital, senior’s homes, Hotel
Vancouver, Vancouver airport YVR
Therapy horses- kids who are nueroatypical,
Work dogs –
Husky- sled dog
Achromatic eyes
Shetland sheepdog -herding dogs, organize
and watch a group of sheep
German shepherd – shepherd, sheep herd,
police dogs
Irish Setter-
Shed – lose hair Huskies shed a lot.
Hypoallergic- does not cause allergies
Butter doesn’t care about food. He only
cares about affection.
Toy dogs- tiny dogs, miniature dogs
needy(adj)
My friend, Sarah, is very needy.
She needs contant validation.
seeking attachment – therapy, psychiatry –
not a strong connection with parent
Today’s Agenda:
· Return paragraph from yesterday.
Edit
and correct.
· Begin complex sentences
· Begin types of paragraphs- narrative,
definition, descriptive, opinion,
Monday
· Continue complex sentences- adverb clauses
Quiz
tomorrow
· Narrative writing
Tuesday
· Quiz#2 adverb clauses
Wednesday
· Test #2? Narrative paragraph
Thursday
· Definition writing
“Correction Codes”
If you want to
be a nurse. You have to
speak English well. fragment
FIX
If you want to
be a nurse, you have to speak English well.
If SV, SV.
You have to speak
English well if you want to be a nurse.
You have to be
able to communicate, so you can help your patients. XXX
You have to be
able to communicate so that you can help your patients.
DIFFERENT ,
so so that
Adverb clauses
REVIEW OF
SENTENCE STYLES
*SIMPLE – 1
main/independent clause
SV SSV
SVV SSVV Imperative
Interrogative
*COMPOUND , SOBA
; ; TRANS,
2 main
clauses/independent clauses joined together
1. FANBOYS SOBA
2. ; semicolon
3. ; TRANS,
*COMPLEX - 1
main clause and 1 subordinate clause
- adverb
clauses
- noun clauses
- adjective
clauses
COMPLEX
SENTENCES= simple sentence +
subordinate clause
main
clause + subordinate clause
COMPLEX
SENTENCE- ADVERB CLAUSES
- because when
if (most commonly used)
Two ways to
make a sentence with an adverb clause
because –
reason
Jun is happy
today. Her son is visiting her. Two main clauses. Two simple sentences.
Turn one of the
main clauses into a subordinate adverb clause.
1. main clause + adverb clause
Jun is happy
today because her son is visiting her.
NOTE: no comma
before because, small detail
2. adverb clause, + main clause
Because Jun’s
son is visiting her, she is happy today.
NOTE: use a
comma
Either way is
good. It is your choice.
**
OLD-FASHIONED RULE- Don’t start your
sentences with ‘because’.
It’s fine. I
do. We can ignore this rule.
Because it’s
snowy today, some people are a little late. OK, my opinion
Some people are
a little late today because it’s snowy. Alternative
Either way is
fine. It’s your choice.
Some people are
a little late, because it’s snowy. NOT THE BEST STYLE
ADVICE: Don’t
put a comma before ‘because’. You will see people do it, but it isn’t the best
choice.
Stylistic
choice, writing style
MY FREE ADVICE-
Be consistent.
Some people are
a little late today. Because it’s snowy. XXX frag
MAIN THING
ABOUT COMMAS:
The baby is
crying because she is tired. NO COMMA
Because the
baby is tired, she is crying. COMMA
Good style.
Works everywhere- school , job, writing
MAIN CLAUSE
(SIMPLE SENTENCE)
ADVERB CLAUSE
MAIN CL +
ADVERB CL = COMPLEX SENTENCE
Do it like
that. Everything will be ok.
* when - time
1. main clause + adverb clause
My dog gets up
when I get up. no comma
2. adverb clause, + main clause
When I get up,
my dog gets up. comma
Call your
sister when you get home.
When you get
home, (you) call your sister.
IMPERATIVE Call
your sister.
IMPERATIVE
(command) Close the window if you feel cold.
If you feel a
chill, close the window.
SAME MEANING-
your choice, try it both ways
When Harim got
up this morning, she was surprised to see snow on the ground.
Harim was
surprised to see snow on the ground when she got up this morning.
when – same
time, pretty much the same time
after, before –
not the same time
Harim was
surprised to see snow on the ground after she got up this morning.
Joan met Steve
when she came to Vancouver.
Joan met Steve
after she came to Vancouver.
We had to
quarantine for 14 days when we came to Canada.
I felt homesick
after I moved to BC.
when – one
time, once
whenever-
everytime, happens many times
Whenever Butter
has to pee, he rings a bell on the door.
My neighbour’s
dog escapes whenever they let it out in the backyard.
Whenever it
rains, I use an umbrella.
I use an
umbrella whenever it rains.
I use an
umbrella when it rains. OK
When she goes
to China, she brings maple syrup for her friends.
Whenever she
goes to China, she brings maple syrup for her friends.
if- maybe yes,
maybe no, don’t know
1. main clause + adverb clause
Maria should
start saving her money if she wants to buy that expensive dress. no comma
2. adverb clause, + main clause
If Maria wants
to buy that expensive dress, she should start saving her money. Comma
If Maria wants
to buy that expensive dress. She should start saving her money. frag
FIXES
If Maria wants
to buy that expensive dress, she should start saving her money.
Maria wants to
buy that expensive dress. She should start saving her money. TWO SIMPLES
Maria wants to
buy that expensive dress, so she should start saving her money. COMPOUND
Maria wants to
buy that expensive dress; therefore, she should start saving her money.
Maria wants to
buy that expensive dress; because of that, she should start saving her money.
‘because’ many
uses
because of that
= therefore
No capital
letter after a ; Only one sentence
Capital letter
after a period, exclamation point, question mark.
She loves dogs.
She wants to get one.
She loves dogs.
Therefore, she wants to get one.
She loves dogs;
therefore, she wants to get one.
She loves dogs,
so she wants to get one.
SIMPLE COMPOUND
COMPLEX
Call me if you
want to go for a hike.
If there is
heavy snow, listen to the radio regarding school cancellations.
Listen to the
radio. imperative (simple sentence)
***
**
Model for
adverb clauses:
Main clause
adverb clause.
Adverb clause, main clause.
**
***
**** YOUR
CHOICE. You should be able to do it both ways. GOAL! ****
* ‘if’ – past,
present, future
My sister would
play with her dolls if she was bored.
Let’s grab some
coffee if you are free now.
I will grab
some milk on the way home.
IDIOM grab but
I will call you
if I need a lift to the airport.
Let’s grab some
lunch. – casual fast lunch
Grab your coat
and hat. Let’s go.
EXAMPLES:
You should call
your sister if you want a ride from the airport.
If you want a
ride from the airport, you should call your sister.
You should call
your sister, if you want a ride from the airport. XXX punc
-small error,
does not impede understanding, still not right
IMPERATIVE:
Call your sister.
Call your
sister if you want to get a ride.
If you want to
get a ride, call your sister.
COMPOUND
2 independent
clauses put together
COMPLEX
1 independent
clause and 1 dependent clause put together
COMPOUND
We are going
camping this weekend, so we have to pack our gear.
COMPLEX
We have to pack
our gear because we are going camping this weekend.
Because we are
going camping this weekend, we have to pack our gear.
Same
information- different sentence styles- compound and complex
GOOD WORDS FOR
ADVERB CLAUSES
* Adverbial
conjunctions (adverb clause words)
Learning these
will expand your ability to express your thoughts more clearly and precisely in
English.
** When you
learn these 24, you will be a star in your English class!
time- after, before, since, ever since,
until, when, whenever,
while
place- wherever
condition - if, even if, provided that, unless
manner- as, as if, though, although, even
though, so ... that
cause- because, since
purpose- in order that, in order to, so
that,
1.
Are most people
under two meters (six feet) tall or over two meters (six feet) tall?
2.
Does the moon
revolve around the earth?
3.
What do you mix
with black to produce the colour grey?
4.
Which continent
lies directly west of Asia?
5.
How many grams
are in a kilogram?
6.
When you
estimate, is your answer exact or approximate?
7.
How many holes do
golfers play in a regular game?
8.
Name two kinds of
precipitation.
Chance of precipitation:
50%
9.
What living
things absorb carbon dioxide from the air and replace it with oxygen?
10.
What is 2/5 of
25?
Fractions
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