Monday, 29 June 2020

A note for my English Foundations 5/6 summer students- course changed from EF 5/6 split to stand-alone EF 6

Good morning everyone,

My summer class was originally supposed to be an English Foundations 5/6 split.

Due to overwhelming popularity, my class has been changed to just an EF 6.

The EF 5 will be taught by a different teacher. That teacher will email the EF 5 students in the next few days.

Enjoy a few days off and see you Thursday,

Thanks,

Al


Thursday, 25 June 2020

EF 5/6 June 25

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Good morning.

Today’s agenda:

1. Review of sentences, grammar
2. Final paragraph on “Totem”

* Friday- There will be no class for you on Friday. I will be doing 
final marks. Email me after 2PM on Friday, and I will email you back your final mark.
I might not email you back your final paragraphs.


Review of sentences:

SIMPLE
SV “Vancouver is a beautiful city.”
SSV
SVV

COMPOUND
SV SV “Vancouver is a beautiful city, but it is expensive.”
, SOBA
; “Vancouver is a beautiful city; it is expensive.”
“Vancouver is a beautiful city; however, it is expensive.”

Common errors
“Vancouver is a beautiful city; but, it is expensive.” XXX
Don’t begin a sentence “with, and, but, or, so”. It is too casual for school writing.
Much better to use TRANS words : “however, therefore, moveover, to tell the truth” I gave you a list of many of those.



COMPLEX
- adverb clause
when, if, because, since, even though, as, while, so…that

SV because SV.
The kid is happy because it is the last day of school.
Because SV, SV.
Because it is the last day of school, the kid is happy.

- adjective clauses
who - My sister who is a nurse lives in Halifax.
that - She bought a car that is falling apart.
which - She has a ring which her grandmother gave her.

-noun clauses
think feel believe say
that why how
I think that the weather will be nice tomorrow.
Michele doesn’t know how to train her dog.
I am happy (that) you have finally found your soulmate.


When you are writing, your sentences always have to be either simple, compound, or complex.


Verbs 
- modals- can, could, should, will, etc.
- infinitives and gerunds -like to go, like going
Lots of other things.

They are all on the blog. You can use the blog as much as you like in the future.

“It couldn’t hurt to give that a try.”
“It couldn’t hurt to …”  Let’s try it. It won’t make things worse, and it might make them better.”
“You have stomach problems. It wouldn’t hurt to change your diet. Maybe it will help.”



Thank you for being such a lovely class. I enjoyed having you in class. I had a good time. I hope you had a good time, too.”



 





Test -Write a paragraph (about 250w) with material quoted from “Totem” on the following topic. Email it to me as an attachment by 3pm

Topic: How is the story “Totem” symbolic of the relationship 
between Canadian society and First Nations peoples?

EF 3/4 June 25

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See you at 11.

Good morning.

Today’s agenda:

1. End of term, September registration – check the blog from yesterday
2. Review sentence and grammar
3. Test - Final pass-in persuasive paragraph


There will be no class for you on Friday. I will be doing final marks. Email me after noon on Friday, and I will email you back your final mark.

Today’s picture is of Meat Cove, Cape Breton Island, Nova Scotia.


Review of sentences:
focus of the course
SIMPLE
subject and verb SV – The park is very busy today.
SSV - The park and the pool are both very busy today.
SVV – The park has a playground but does not have a soccer field.

Remember: You need to begin a sentence with a capital letter and end a sentence with a period.


COMPOUND
SV SV       , SOBA   so or but and
The park has a playground, but it does not have a soccer field.
You need a comma before SOBA

SIMPLE Sarah loves dogs but doesn’t like cats.
COMPOUND Sarah loves dogs, but she doesn’t like cats.
Do you see the difference?


COMPLEX
-adverb clauses
because if when
SV because SV. Vancouver is beautiful because it is 
surrounded by mountains. no comma
Because SV, SV. Because Vancouver is surrounded by 
mountains, it is beautiful. comma

if We can go if you want.
If you want, we can go.

when Sarah goes home when the class is over.
When the class is over, Sarah goes home.


-adjective clauses
who – people My sister who is a nurse lives in Halifax.
that – things She bought a car that doesn’t run well.
which – special things, unique things

She has a ring which her mother gave her.


-noun clauses
feel think believe know understand say
that why how
You think that it will rain all day. She thinks that it will clear up.
Sarah doesn’t know how to bake a cake.
We know why the little kid is so happy today. It’s his birthday.


Every sentence that you write should one of these styles for it to be authentic English: SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX

Sentence combining exercises will really help us get better at writing English sentences. You can locate some online if you look hard. They are not easy to find, but you can find some that are appropriate for your level of English. You can find harder ones as you get better at writing English. The sky is the limit.



Thank you for being such a lovely class. I enjoyed meeting you online. Hope to see you in real life soon at our school.
Feel free to use my blog as much as you like.
Good luck in your future plans.



Test – persuasive paragraph
Write a plan and a paragraph on the following topic. Email it to me as an attachment by 12:30.

Topic: Should people wear masks in public?

Plan (key words) and paragraph

Wednesday, 24 June 2020

EF 5/6 June 24

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See you at 1:30

Good morning.

Today’s agenda:

1. Final marks, registration for September
2. Discuss “Totem”
3. Homework If I were you, I would reread “Totem” carefully 
and look for possible words and phrases that could be used for quoting.


* Thursday – Final test- Write about “Totem” with “ “

* Friday- There will be no class for you on Friday. I will be doing 
final marks. Email me after 2PM on Friday, and I will email you back your final mark.
I might not email you back your final paragraphs.

Summer school begins Thursday, July 2.
I’ll be teaching EF5/6, same as this class but with different stories.

End of term, marks and report cards
You can get your official report card from the school.
Email Helena hgalic@vsb.bc.ca or Nancy at nsanghera@vsb.bc.ca
They will send you a scan of your report card by email.
I will put my marks in to the office on Monday, so maybe email them on Tuesday and see if they are ready.
Do you need your report card right away or can it wait?

Registration for September
Registration for September begins July 8. There will be more information to come, but I’m sure it will be similar to registration for April term- register online by email. There will be an email from the school explaining how to register. I don’t know who you should contact yet.

I do not know what I will be teaching in September. I should find out next week, maybe June 30th. When I find out, I will post it on our blog. Feel free to email me if you prefer.


For people who are registered for Eng 10, you have to pass this class EF 6 first. If you are not passing EF 6, you have no business going in to Eng 10.
When you move up to quickly, you can’t go back. Many students wind up in a high-level class like Eng. 10 or 11, and then they are stuck.
I caution people to be honest with themselves about their ability.


In summer I am teaching the morning EF5/6. That class is full with a 10-person waitlist.



“Totem” Hopefully, you read it carefully a couple of times. It will be our final test. A good paragraph with “ “ quoted text.
MY ROUGH SPEAKING NOTES

“Totem” module

Read aloud
look for words and phrases that you think might be important for quoting
keep a list of quotable words and phrases “  “

Reading a story for school – read it twice
1. First read - relaxed reading, looking for setting, characters, plot, conflict - the basics
2. Second read – looking deeper, symbolism, meaning, language, special words and phrases, figure out what the story is about, figure our why the writer wrote the story, figure out what they are trying to say to you as a reader– keep notes


Look at the title of the story? meaning
“Totem”
A totem is a spirit being, sacred object, or symbol that serves as an emblem of a group of people, such as a family, clan, lineage, or tribe.
Totem pole

http://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/british-columbia/jasper-totem-pole-provokes-first-nations-concerns-1.1086266

genre –, type of writing
genres of non-fiction
-history
-biography
-self-help
-sports
-politics
-cooking

genres of fiction 
- mystery
- crime
- romance
- sci-fi, science fiction
- horror
- magic realism

Talk about magic realism
-a kind of fiction, mix of realistic setting, things happen in the story that couldn’t happen in real life
- not realistic story 
- mix of realistic element and fantastic elements
-e.g. novels A Hundred Years of Solitude Gabriel Garcia Marquez
movies Birdman, Life of Pi

Try a magic realist movie and see if you like it.

Symbolic (a)– symbol, one thing represents something else
Symbolism (n) symbolize (v)


Work from “Totem lit essay”

Irony – the museum people don’t regard the totem as being historic
Don’t respect it
Don’t understand it
Don’t value it
It is a problem to be solved, not something to be embraced

Humour, funny , ridiculous, black humour, cynical humour


NOTES

Setting- Southwest Alberta, home of Blood and Piikani tribes
(http://bloodtribe.org/)
(http://piikanination.wixsite.com/piikanination)

no totem poles from Alberta, they are West Coast- symbolizes disregard for diversity of cultures and traditions of FN peoples

Southwest Alberta Art Gallery and Prairie Museum, temporary shows, 
“The current show… featured contemporary Canadian art from the Atlantic provinces… It’s called ‘Seaviews,”
outside geographical context

“show on Northwest Coast carving” out of place

“gargling” sounds of the body

“chuckling”- first hint of unreality

“do something about the problem”

“It would be a fine world, she pointed out, if paintings or photographs or abstract sculptures began carrying on like that.”
First Nations should be exhibited as static history, not as inconvenient reality

“The problem… is that the totem pole is not part of the show, and we need to move it someplace else.”(1)- metaphor for place of FN in Canada

“Find some temporary place”- metaphor for Reservations

Signs, symbols

“bothering some of the patrons” paying supporters of an institution
patrons demand director do something about the ‘problem’
take no responsibility to learn or see, tolerate, embrace, or do anything 
-Canadians look to the government to solve these problems

“sortof like a chant. Maybe it’s Druidic.” 
“this movie about Druids on a flight from England to New York” interpreting FN through European lens

- try to remove the totem pole
- “It’s really stuck” 
- “It appears… that it goes right through the floor”
- First Nations peoples - deep roots in the land, always been here

“Do what you have to do, but do it quietly” (2)
- symbolic of government action in Canada toward First nations people
Residential schools – lack of public knowledge, students didn’t learn about this, education

cut pole down “screaming”, pain, anguish
wood chips damaging displayed art


-next day “grunting” (121)
“Those grunts were pretty disgusting”- of the body, FN stories
distasteful to upper class



“cut the pole down and then cover the
stump with pruning paste. That way it won’t grow back.” Final solution to get rid of First Nations for good,
reminds me of The Final Solution – Nazi program to remove/kill all Jews in Germany
OR reminds me of China today with Muslim minority, Tibet

”you can’t hear it much from the basement”
Idiom “Out of sight, out of mind.”
Settlers, White people

singing “a high, wailing, nasal sound and then fell back into a patient, rhythmic drone that gave Walter a huge headache just above his eyes and made him sweat.”

Who will take responsibility for this problem?
government solution “Provincial” or “more serious than that”

Jimmy – leave it there

“We can’t just leave it there,” said the director. “We need the space for our other shows, and we can’t have it singing all the time, either.”

***
READ TO END
“Maybe if we ignore it, it will stop singing,” said Jimmy. “It might even go away or disappear or something. Besides, we don’t have any place to put it. Maybe, after awhile, you wouldn’t even notice it ... like living next to the train tracks or by a highway.”
“Sure,” said Larue, who was tired of cutting down totem poles and trying to find space for them. “Couldn’t hurt to give that a try.”
The totem pole stayed in the corner, but Jimmy and Larue were right. After the first week, the singing didn’t bother Walter nearly as much, and, by the end of the month, he hardly noticed it at all.
Nonetheless, Walter remained mildly annoyed that the totem pole continued to take up space and inexplicably irritated by the low, measured pulse that rose out of thebasement and settled like fine dust on the floor.
***

patrons, director, workers only chara

EF 3/4 June 24

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See you at 11.

Good morning.

Today’s agenda:

1. End of term, September registration
2. Sentence combining from homework “Moving Day”.
3. Process/Expository Persuasive writing
4. Tomorrow- Review sentence and grammar
Final pass-in paragraph



End of term, marks, and report cards
There will be no class for you on Friday. I will be doing marking and final marks on Friday. Email me after noon on Friday, and I will email you back your final mark.
You can get your official report card from the school.
Email Helena hgalic@vsb.bc.ca or Nancy at nsanghera@vsb.bc.ca
They will send you a scan of your report card by email.
I will put my marks in to the office on Monday, so maybe email them on Tuesday and see if they are ready.
Do you need your report card right away or can it wait?

Registration for September
Registration for September begins July 8. There will be more information to come, but I’m sure it will be similar to registration for April term-  online by email. There will be an email form the school explaining how to register.


I do not know what I will be teaching in September. I should find out next week. When I find out, I will post it on our blog. Feel free to email me if you prefer.



MOVING DAY

1. We had not been looking forward to the move. 
It was the smoothest in memory.
a. We had not been looking forward to the move. 
b. It was the smoothest in memory.
but however even though
We had not been looking forward to the move, but it was the smoothest in memory.
We had not been looking forward to the move; however, it was the smoothest in memory. EF5/6 level
We had not been looking forward to the move. However, it was the smoothest in memory.
Even though we had not been looking forward to the move, 
It was the smoothest in memory.

2. We picked up the truck. 
The truck was rented. 
It was eight o'clock. 
We drove to the apartment.
SIMPLE We picked up the rented truck at eight o'clock and drove to the apartment.

At eight o clock, we picked up the truck that we rented last week, and we drove to the apartment. COMPOUND COMPLEX

We picked up the rented truck at eight o’clock and drove to the apartment. SIMPLE
We picked up the rented truck at eight o’clock, and we drove to the apartment. COMPOUND
The truck was rented, and we picked it up at eight o’clock . Then we drove to the apartment. COMPOUND & SIMPLE

3. Our timing was perfect.
No one else was moving. 
This meant something. 
The elevator was free.
4. Our timing was perfect.
No one else was moving. 
Our timing was perfect because no one else was moving. 

This meant something. 
The elevator was free.
This meant that the elevator was free.

Our timing was perfect because no one else was moving which meant that the elevator was free.

These examples are a bit more challenging.

Our moving time was perfect. When we arrived to the building, no one else was moving, so the elevator was free.

5. Four of us carried the furniture. 
Four of us positioned the furniture. 
Four of us tied the furniture into the truck. 
We did this in less than an hour.

List of actions – a series of actions
Four of us carried, positioned, and tied the furniture into the truck in less than an hour. SIMPLE

We carried the furniture in less than an hour because four of us positioned and tied the furniture into the truck.

I am happy because it is my birthday. NO COMMA
Because it is my birthday, I am happy. COMMA


6. Even the plants did well. 
The move was fast enough. 
They didn't go into shock.
Even the plants did well because the move was fast enough that they didn't go into shock.
Even the plants did well and didn't go into shock because the move was fast enough.

7. We were at the house. 
It was ten o'clock. 
People really flew into action.
We were at the house at ten o'clock, and people really flew into action.
People really flew into action when we were at the house at ten o'clock.

SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX

8. The truck was empty. 
We were sitting on the deck. 
We were eating lunch. 
We were turning moving day into a party. 
It was a housewarming. 
We did this within two hours.

Within two hours, we were sitting on the deck of the empty truck eating lunch. We were turning moving day into a housewarming party. 2 SIMPLE SENTENCES

I think it’s really important to keep practice this type of exercise. It will make you a better writer. 
I wonder if it will help with speaking? Probably, although the focus is definitely on writing.

Where can we find sentence combining exercises?
Search for “sentence combining exercises”
https://grammar.yourdictionary.com/worksheets/sentence-combining-worksheets.html

It is not the easiest work to find.
You have find exercises that are an appropriate level for you. You don’t want them to easy or too hard. Dig! You can find them if you look.



Persuasive writing – persuade, convince, argue a point

You have an opinion, and write something to make the reader understand your opinion. They can agree or disagree. 

TOPIC: Should people wear masks in public to prevent the spread of Covid19?

Decide on your opinion. YES/ NO
Brainstorm 4-5 reasons to support your opinion.

My opinion – YES
1. puts elderly people at ease, ill people at ease, feel less afraid
2. example to other people, maybe they will think about it and also wear one
3. obviously it slows down the spead of Covid19, science
4. helps me stay safe, helps you stay safe

Put the reasons in order – order of importance, most important last
PLAN
FIRST puts elderly people at ease, ill people at ease, feel less afraid
SECOND example to other people, maybe they will think about it and also wear one

FINAL POINTobviously it slows down the spead of Covid19, science
CONC SENT helps me stay safe, helps you stay safe

ROUGH COPY
TOPIC: Should people wear masks in public to prevent the spread of Covid19?

I think that people should wear masks in public to prevent the spread of Covid19 for several reasons. First, wearing a mask helps puts elderly and sick people at ease. They will feel less afraid about going out if they see others wearing masks. Secondly, me wearing a mask might act as an example to other people. They might think about it and also decide to wear one. The most important reason is that wearing a mask slows down the spread of Covid19. This has been proven by science. In conclusion, wearing a mask helps me stay safe and helps you stay safe. It is a good idea, and we all should do it.


Topic sentence
- supporting sentences
-
-
Concluding sentence

Persuasive writing

Tomorrow I will give you an easy question. I want you to write a short persuasive paragraph giving you opinion on the topic.
Plan and paragraph – just like yesterday

Tuesday, 23 June 2020

EF 5/6 June 23

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Good morning.

Today’s agenda:

1. Continue First Nations lecture

2. Homework Read “Totem” for Wednesday. I emailed 
this to you earlier today.
Sentence combining “Sheet 4”. I emailed this to you earlier today.


This is the final week for the course.
* Wednesday – Discuss “Totem”
Sentence combining Sheet #4
* Thursday – Final test- Write about “Totem” with “ “
* Friday- There will be no class for you on Friday. I will be doing 
final marks. Email me after noon on Friday, and I will email you back your final mark.

Summer school begins Thursday, July 2.




***
Archaeological theories about origins of First Nations
archeology – archeo “old” ology “study”
hominids – Neanderthal, Australopithicus, Cro Magnum
homo sapiens- Man sapien – “wise” , about 100 000- 250 000 yrs

migration – humans or animal moving or travelling
Birds migrate south every winter.

immigration- move to a new country, with a passport
emigrate – leave a country to go to a new country for good
“Yuko emigrated from Japan. She immigrated to Canada.”

nomadic people – always on the move

200 000 years ago, Homo Sapiens in Africa
60 000 years ago, humans leave Africa
50 000 years ago reach Australia
Second wave
35 000 years ago reach Middle East and Central Asia
40 000 years ago into Europe
25 000 years ago- Ice Age, ice bridge between Russia and Alaska
15 000 years ago humans cross The Bering Strait into North America

Show video “Map Shows How Humans Migrated Across the Globe” (2m30s)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CJdT6QcSbQ0&list=RDCJdT6QcSbQ0&start_radio=1

Explore website, LCD http://firstpeoplesofcanada.com/fp_groups/fp_groups_origins.html
talk about land bridge

MAYBE VIDEO https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M43TYldfqzc (4m-13m)

Atlantic migration theory
Talk about

First Nations reactions to these scientific theories
http://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/british-columbia/bc-indigenous-communities-react-to-the-resurfacing-of-two-migration-theories-1.4479632
Put like on Blog
Listen to audio (9m) EXCELLENT
Describe and summarize controversies, competing theories for students

Another article about Salutrian/Ice Bridge debate
http://www.cbc.ca/news/technology/ancient-toddler-s-remains-re-ignite-native-origins-debate-1.2534423


CONTACT – 1500s First European came to North America

cooperation between settlers and First Nations- settlers dying of scurvy, lack of Vitamin C
long-standing problem for sailors
limey, pine needle tea

Work through timeline
https://aboriginalconnections.wordpress.com/teacher-resources/bc-first-nations-historical-timeline/

FLESH OUT Treatment of FN- blanket ceremony information


More Europeans came to North America
Government decision to put First Nations on Reservations, Reserves
all over Canada
Even today, Reservations – big problems such as clean water, youth suicide 3X national rate, poverty, despair, drug and alcohol abuse

Residential School system
Talk about 
Between the 1860s and 1996 (23 years ago) more than 150,000 First Nations, Inuit, and Métis children were required to attend Indian Residential Schools, institutions operated by religious organizations funded by the Federal Government.
The Canadian government removed First Nation children from their families and communities and placed them in these institutions.
Many children were inadequately fed, clothed and housed, and many were abused, physically, emotionally, and sexually. Their languages and cultural practices were prohibited.



TEACHERRESOURCES
http://www.fnesc.ca/learningfirstpeoples/
https://www.ece.gov.nt.ca/files/Early-Childhood/ns_-_residential_schools_resource_-_second_edition.pdf
http://www.fnesc.ca/wp/wp-content/uploads/2015/07/PUB-LFP-IRSR-11-12-Pt1-2015-07-WEB.pdf
http://www.fnesc.ca/wp/wp-content/uploads/2015/07/PUB-LFP-IRSR11-12-DE-Pt2-2015-07-WEB.pdf
http://www.fnesc.ca/grade-11-12-indian-residential-schools-and-reconciliation/



VIDEO “Where Are the Children? Healing the Legacy of the Residential Schools”
https://vimeo.com/27172950 (25m)

* Excellent website http://wherearethechildren.ca/en/

GO OVER THIS WEBSITE ON LCD
http://www.anishinabek.ca/wp-content/uploads/2016/07/An-Overview-of-the-IRS-System-Booklet.pdf

Introduction to Truth and Reconciliation Commission, Residential Schools
reconcile – to become friends again, to rebuild a broken relationship
 modeled after the South African Truth and Reconciliation Commission
- Apartheid – separation of white and black, from 1948

When the South African government was starting up the Apartheid system in the 1940s, they came to Canada to see the Residential School system

National Centre for Truth and Reconciliation
Opening ceremony:
http://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/manitoba/national-centre-truth-reconciliation-winnipeg-1.3301305

EXPLORE Website:
http://umanitoba.ca/nctr/

http://wherearethechildren.ca/en
Explore together
Walk through Timeline

Choose one of the stories. Listen or read the transcript, make notes.

Indian Horse Ch 11-12? photocopy and read together



***
LOTS OF RESOURCES
SURVIVOR TESTIMONY:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wjrZpCJtNYk
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vn6jbkPgTzM

Distribute “ConnieWalkerQuestions”, p.c.

LISTEN (13m56s)
http://www.cbc.ca/radio/backstory/connie-walker-and-the-first-hand-legacy-of-residential-schools-1.3359153
OR
http://www.cbc.ca/player/play/2680244159/
OR
“ConnieWalker.mp3”

Students listen and make notes

Afterward, get into small groups and compare notes.
Discuss as a class.

LISTEN to poem “MONSTER”, p.c. (3m,16s)
https://soundcloud.com/cbc-radio-one/i-hate-you-residential-school
OR
http://www.cbc.ca/radio/thecurrent/apr-3-2014-1.2908353/monster-by-poet-dennis-saddleman-i-hate-you-residential-school-i-hate-you-1.2908356


Highlights from TRC:
http://www.huffingtonpost.ca/2015/12/15/highlights-from-the-report-of-the-truth-and-reconciliation-commission-report_n_8812426.html

“MyLittleResidentialSchoolSuitcase”, p.c.
Read aloud, discuss

Explain Gord Downey
The Sacred Path
https://www.downiewenjack.ca/


“colonialism”, p.c.


“’Totem’ Module”

DON’T TEACH Rita Joe “I Lost My Talk”


“Two-Spirit” “Chrytos”

“Unentitled” from here:
http://www.sfu.ca/lovemotherearth/02poetry/tea_and_bannock.pdf


Appropriation of First Nations culture
Explain meaning of ‘cultural appropriation’
Gucci turban

Talk about 2015 Miss Canada dress
https://natalieast.com/miss-universe-canadas-national-costume-cultural-appropriation/
Show pics “Miss Canada 1,2”

Other examples of a appropriation of First Nations culture- music festivals
Show pics “Headdress1,2,3” “Costume1”

Show video “Headdress- A filmmaker recreates her great-grandfather’s portrait” (5m,43s)

http://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/british-columbia/bc-women-searches-for-stolen-regalia-prince-george-1.4692057



The future of FN

https://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/manitoba/youth-incarcerated-indigenous-half-1.4720019


“ForthisArcticstudent”, p.c. “JasmineKegel”pic


http://www.cbc.ca/radio/nowornever/out-with-the-old-1.4470167/indigenous-releasing-ceremony-treats-trauma-and-mental-health-issues-1.4475378

http://www.cbc.ca/radio/thesundayedition/the-sunday-edition-january-7-2018-1.4474395/meet-the-brave-women-patrolling-regina-s-toughest-neighbourhood-1.4474407

https://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/british-columbia/haida-gwaii-indigenous-language-podcast-1.5185671

“My Moccasins Have Not Walked” work and student poem

EF5/6 June 23

Hi everyone,
I have a big teacher's meeting at 1. I don't know how long it will take. Busy time of year.
I'll post the Zoom link when I finish.
Read "Totem" for tomorrow.
You will write about it on Thursday.
Best,
Al

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Good morning.

Today’s agenda:

1. Sentence combining from homework “At the Beach”

2. Narrative writing from yesterday’s homework

3. Pass-in writing

4. Homework Sentence combining “Moving Day”. I 
emailed this to you earlier this morning. We can work on these together tomorrow. Try some of them for homework.

Tomorrow – Process/Expository writing


Friday will be our final class. Summer school will begin the following Thursday, July 2.



From yesterday’s homework:

1. A group of clowns juggled. KERNEL- centre of the sentence
They played with children. FIND NEW INFORMATION
The children were laughing. FIND NEW INFORMATION
The clowns gave out balloons. FIND NEW INFORMATION
The balloons were filled with helium. FIND NEW INFORMATION

2. COMBINE THESE ELEMENTS
A group of clowns juggled. KERNEL- centre of the sentence
played with children
were laughing
gave out balloons
were filled with helium
What kind of sentence do we want? simple compound complex?
FIRST TRY
A group of clowns juggled and played with children who were laughing, and they gave out balloons that were filled with helium. adj cl
COMPOUND COMPLEX
SECOND TRY
A group of clowns juggled and played with laughing children, and they gave out helium balloons. COMPOUND

Always write either simple, compound, or complex.

3. The sand was white. KERNEL
The white was glaring. FIND NEW INFORMATION
The sand emitted waves of heat. FIND NEW INFORMATION
The waves of heat blurred the water. FIND NEW INFORMATION
The water was beyond the beach. FIND NEW INFORMATION
The water was blue. FIND NEW INFORMATION
The blue was vibrant. FIND NEW INFORMATION

4. The sand was white. KERNEL
glaring
emitted waves of heat
blurred the water
The water was beyond the beach
blue
vibrant
FIRST TRY -SIMPLE COMPLEX
The glaring white sand emitted waves of heat that blurred the blue vibrant water that was beyond the beach. adj cl

We are learning to write great sentences in a variety of styles. This is our goal.

beyond  - past
The Ikea is just beyond the car dealer.


Narrative writing – telling a story
Yesterday’ homework:
1. Make a plan
2. Write a paragraph
I wanted both, but you got the extra point anyway.


For today, I want both, please. The plan does not have to beautiful. Just rough notes, key words.
I am mostly interested in the sentences in the paragraph.
Test – narrative paragraph
Email it to me as an attachment by 1:00.

Choose one:
Topic 1: What was the scariest thing that ever happened to you? 
Topic 2: What was the funniest thing that ever happened to you?

Monday, 22 June 2020

EF 5/6 The Beginning of the Haida Gwaii World


The Beginning of the Haida Gwaii World
 


In the beginning, before the creation of the world, the earth was completely covered by a vast ocean and the sky was all grey clouds. The cloud kingdom was ruled by the great Sha-lana. Sha-lana's Chief servant was Raven.
One day Raven enraged his master and was cast out into the ocean world. He flew over the ocean for a long period of time until he became weary. Unable to find a place to rest, Raven became angry. He began to beat his wings upon the water until the water rose up and touched the clouds around him.
When the water receded back into the ocean there appeared rocks upon which Raven rested. These rocks grew and stretched across the ocean. The rocks turned into sand and after a short period of time trees began to grow on the sand. After many moons the sand had turned into beautiful islands, which we know today as the Queen Charlotte Islands (Haida Gwaii).
Raven enjoyed his kingdom, yet he became bored and lonely. He decided he needed someone to help him. So one day he gathered two large piles of clam shells upon the beach and transformed them into two human females. These two women complained saying that they should not have both been created as women. So to make them happy Raven threw limpet shells at one and turned her into a man, creating the Haida Gwaii people."

Clark, E., Indian Legends of Canada, McClelland and Stewart: Toronto, 1991.
https://royalbcmuseum.bc.ca/exhibits/bc-archives-time-machine/galler07/frames/oralhist.htm

EF 5/6 June 22

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First Nations -Who they are?
Small groups
“What do you know about First Nations people in Canada?”
Generate ideas on LCD 

First Nations, Inuit, and Métis peoples constitute Indigenous peoples in Canada, also called First Peoples. First Nations came into common usage in the 1980s to replace the term Indians
Aboriginal, Indigenous
First Nations- Indigenous people in the South (below Arctic Circle). Half of all First Nations bands are in Ontario and BC.
Inuit are the Indigenous people who live in the North. Used to be called ‘Eskimo’- disparaging term from French Esquimaux, from Montagnais ayas̆kimew ‘person who laces a snowshoe’. Montagnais, or Innu, are the Indigenous inhabitants of an area they refer to as Nitassinan, which comprises most of the northeastern portion of the present-day province of Quebec and some eastern portions of Labrador.
Discredited etymology ‘raw fish eater’
Website: https://www.itk.ca/about-canadian-inuit/#nunangat
Show map: “Inuit Map”
Metis a person of mixed Indigenous and European-American ancestry, in particular one of a group of such people who in the 19th century constituted the so-called Metis nation in the areas around the Red and Saskatchewan rivers. Metis comes from the French word ‘métis’, which means ‘mixed’.
1600s Thousands of French men hunting, trapping beaver
The Hudson’s Bay Company, “The Bay”


Where did First Nations people come from?
Every group/country/people/religion has a creation story
Christian – The Bible – creation story – Adam and Eve, The Garden of 
Eden

First Nations Creation Stories / Creation Myths
myth – legend, fiction, story, has a lot of meaning to the culture
Greek myths – Ancient Greece
Myth of Echo, Echo - nymph
Echo was in love with a boy, Narcissus, narcissist, narcissism
Narcissus fell into the water and drowned
Echo was so heartbroken, that she disappeared. The only thing that is left is her voice.


Read “The Beginning of the HaidiGwaii World” on LCD

Talk about Raven
- prominent role in the mythologies of the Indigenous peoples of the Pacific Northwest Coast, including the Tsimishians, Haidas, Heiltsuks, Tlingits, Kwakwaka'wakw, Coast Salish, Koyukons, and Inuit. The raven in these indigenous peoples' mythology is the Creator of the world, but it is also considered a trickster god.
-two different raven characters:
-the creator raven, responsible for bringing the world into being and who is sometimes considered to be the individual who brought light to the darkness
-the childish raven, always selfish, sly, conniving, and hungry

Show pictures “Raven1” “Raven2” “Raven and the First Men”
“Spirit of Haida Gwaii”
Haida jewelry

bear raven orca fox wolf eagle salmon
Bill Reid – popular Haida artist

archaeology –study of human history
Terra Cotta warriors – China

XXX

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Good morning.

Today’s agenda:

1. Sentence combining from homework “At the Beach”

2. Mr. Isaac sold ice cream. 
It was packed in ice. 
He was considered part of the beach. 
The truck was small. 
The truck was in the parking lot.

Mr. Isaac was considered part of the beach because he sold ice cream that was packed in ice in the small truck that was in the parking lot. COMPLEX- 
adv cl adj cl adj cl

3. Narrative writing


* Email me your sentence combining “At the Beach” work by 
12:30 today. One homework point.


Narrative writing – telling a story
break a simple story down into 4-5 parts.

Topic sentence- introduces the idea of the paragraph
- supporting sentences
- events of the story
- in order of time
- tell the story, narrative
Concluding sentence


EASY TOPIC: What did you do yesterday?
Topic Sentence – fun day, relaxing, family
NOTES, KEY WORDS
1. woke up early, played music
DETAILS -6am, mandolin, scales
2. family woke up, had breakfast together
DETAILS – 10am, pancakes
3. went to beach with dog
DETAILS – Tsawwassen, Boundary Bay, walked in the sand, looked for shells, dog running and swimming
4. had supper
DETAILS – lots of leftevers, simple supper
5. everybody relaxed, did their own thing
DETAILS – played video games, watched movie, read


ROUGH COPY:

Yesterday was a fun, relaxing day for me which I spent with my family. I got up at the crack of dawn and practiced some new scales on mandolin. When my family woke up at 10, we all had homemade pancakes together. They were tasty. Then we went to Tsawwassen to Boundary Bay where we walked in the sand and looked for shells, especially sand dollars. My dog, Butter, went nuts running and swimming. After a few hours of enjoying the beach, we came home and had a simple supper. At night, everybody relaxed and did their own thing, like playing video games, watching a movie, and reading. All in all, it was a very pleasant Sunday.

6/6

Topic Sentence
- supporting sentences
Concluding Sentence

All the sentences are simple, compound and complex.


marsh, swamp – water, wet land,



Begin to get some ideas together for a narrative paragraph
1. Read the topic.
2. Think of 4-5 events. Make notes (2-3 key words). No sentences yet.
3. After you have notes and key word, then write the sentences for the paragraph.

PLAN – WRITE

“What did you do yesterday?”
Do not begin by writing sentences. Make a plan/outline first.

Email me that today. Homework.

Friday, 19 June 2020

EF 5/6 June 19

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First Nations – original people in a land 
Aboriginal
Aboriginal peoples are under threat, in trouble, around the world, experience violence: Cuba, Australia, Finland, Canada, United States, Japan
Canada – First Nations 12,000-20,000 yrs
Australia- Aboriginals 60,000-80,000yrs
Their land and way of life is being taken away
Brazil – Amazon jungle – fires- some of the tribes have never been contacted

Archeology – studying ancient human structure, buildings, town, villages

United Nations Declaration on the Rights of Indigenous Peoples

Focus of BC new curriculum- First Nations
Curriculum – what we study in school

First Nations ways of knowing, culture, history in Canada
My school experiences- none of the history, social studies, literature, 
BC curriculum
-English 12
-First People’s English 12

science focused on First Nations
The focus was on Europeans, settlers, White men in Canada
male-centred, Euro-centred
Government controls education and what kids learn

What history did you study in school?

Words that people use – 
- Native,
-Aboriginal
(etymology- word history, ab – original   word origin Latin ‘ab’ – beginning)
-First Nations – many groups, the ‘s’ is important
-Indian – not used now, older term
Talk about origin of the word ‘Indian’ due to geographical misunderstanding
Cuba, - West Indies
Christopher Columbus 1492

“Red Indian” – don’t use that name anymore
“East Indian” – don’t use that name anymore



racism towards First Nations people “Indians”
dismissive, belittling, negative
when I was young, people talked badly about First Nations people

lots of First Nations kids in my school, segregated
At the time, it seemed normal.


Tell this story
policy at my university – have to finish your degree in seven years

student/ professor –led initiative to change it to 10 yrs

racism against First Nations – BCTF AGM story
700 teachers
“equity-seeking groups” wanted representation

First Contact Canada
* http://aptn.ca/firstcontact/

First Contact of Europeans with First Nations

EF 3/4 June 19

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Good morning.

Today’s agenda:

1. Go over descriptive writing from yesterday
2. Sentence combining from homework “At the Beach”.
3. Narrative writing
Surprise test- sentence combining test

Next week is our final week. We have quizzes and tests, as usual. I don’t do a big final test. We will review the work we have done over the past nine weeks.


-descriptive writing – descriptive paragraph

ballet dancer
blue dress
beautiful
graceful
dancing shoes
elegant hands
arms raised
jumping high
long black hair
face raised to the sky, looking up

crowd
taking pictures
watching
in awe
bored man walking in front
young and old in the audience

buildings
stone
grey
old looking

Excellent vocabulary, excellent descriptive elements (words and phrases)

Topic sentence
- supporting sentences (description)
-
-
-
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Concluding sentence

Remember:
Indent
Doublespace
14-16 point font (size of the letters)

I use 18-point font for Zoom teaching. For writing, I use 14-point font.


Font is too small.
Singlespaced
A ballet dancer in the street

A photograph capturing a ballerina dancing on the street with a crowed of people surrounding her. The ballerina is wearing a beautiful blue dress, jumping high in the air with her arms and legs wide open. The crowed are watching her in shock and open eyes. Taking a closer look at the crowed, we can see people of all ages and backgrounds who seem like tourists, holding their cameras and capturing the moment. There are two historical buildings in the background, with the one on the right covered in beautiful blue, white and yellow ceramic. Also, we can see beautiful hand crafted sculptures on the front and sides of the building. 



Much better
16-point font
Doublespaced
A ballet dancer in the street

The photograph captures a ballerina dancing on the street with a crowd of people surrounding her. The ballerina is wearing a beautiful blue dress, jumping high in the air with her arms and legs wide open. The crowd is watching her in shock and with wide open eyes. Taking a closer look at the crowd, we can see people of all ages and backgrounds who seem like tourists, holding their cameras and capturing the moment. There are two historical buildings in the background, with the one on the right covered in beautiful blue, white and yellow ceramic. Also, we can see beautiful handcrafted sculptures on the front and sides of the building.

From homework:
Put your solutions in Chat
At the Beach

1. The group met at the beach.
They met at 10:00 a.m.
They met every day.
The beach was public.
The group met if it was sunny.

Every sunny day, the group met at 10:00 am at the public beach. SIMPLE
The group met at the public beach at 10am every day if it was sunny. COMPLEX – adv cl

2. The beach was hot. 
The beach was crowded. 
The beach was exciting. 
There were children. 
There were adults.
There were clowns.
There were lifeguards.

When there were children, adults, clowns and lifeguards, the beach was crowded, hot, and exciting.
The beach which was hot and exciting was crowded with children, adult, clowns and lifeguards.

You didn’t do any homework. I’m not going to do your work.

3. Mr. Isaac sold ice cream. 
It was packed in ice. 
He was considered part of the beach. 
The truck was small. 
The truck was in the parking lot. 
4. The teenagers lay in the sun. 
They played volleyball. 
The children swam.
The children waded. 
The children ran in the sand. 
They ran for the joy of running. 
5. A group of clowns juggled. 
They played with children.
The children were laughing.
The clowns gave out balloons. 
The balloons were filled with helium. 
6. The sand was while. 
The white was glaring.
The sand emitted waves of heat.
The waves of heat blurred the water. 
The water was beyond the beach. 
The water was blue.
The blue was vibrant.




Narrative writing-  narrate (V) to tell a story
narrator (n) – a person who tells a story
narrative tells a story

TS – introduces the story
- supporting sentences
- events of the story
- step by step
- in order of time
CS

What did you do last night?
TS – quiet normal evening
- had supper, cleaned up
- did some homework
- watched a movie
- went to bed at 11pm
CS – routine, nothing special


What was the scariest thing that ever happened to you?

TS – walking home along through a graveyard last year
- midnight, wind was blowing, scary sounds
- a ghost came up behind you, chased you
- you ran to your car, but the ghost got in too
- now ghost lived in your house, doesn’t do any chores
CS – scariest thing that ever happened


Modes of Writing – writing for different purposes
We will talk about these four:
descriptive
narrative
process, expository
persuasive
Other kind for higher classes:
illustration
literary
compare or contrast
definition




Test – Surprise!
Combine each exercise in two different ways, for a total of eight sentences:
Email them to me by 12:15
e.g. The cat is sleeping.
The cat is tired.

The cat is sleeping because it is tired.
The tired cat is sleeping.

1. The children stay for a week.
They stay at the camp.
They stay without their parents.

2. They sleep in cabins.
The cabins are big.
The cabins are made of logs.

3. The leaders are teenagers.
The leaders are responsible.
The leaders are fun.

4. The leaders like the job.
The job is hard sometimes.

Thursday, 18 June 2020

EF 5/6 June 18

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Good afternoon.

Today’s agenda:

1. Review yesterday’s sentence combining test
2. “Residential Schools” I sent this to you a few days ago.

I might have to start the class late today. I have a meeting at 1-1:30, but teachers like to talk, so we may go late.


Sentence Combining Quiz possible solutions:

1.      a. I have never understood a certain proverb.
b. The proverb says, "You cannot have your cake and eat it, too."

I have never understood a certain proverb that says, "You cannot have your cake and eat it, too."
Expression, proverb: "You cannot have your cake and eat it, too."

2. a. My mother once interpreted it for me.
b. She told me that it meant you cannot have everything.

My mother once interpreted it for me, and she told me that it meant you cannot have everything.
NATURAL-SOUNDING - My mother once interpreted it for me, telling me that it meant you cannot have everything.
My mother once interpreted it for me as meaning that I cannot have everything.

3. a. For example, it is impossible to find a job that pays well.
b. It is impossible to find a job that interests you all the time.
c. It is impossible to find a job that challenges you every day.

For example, it is impossible to find a job that pays well, interests you all the time, and challenges you every day.
parallel list AAA, BBB, and CCC. optional comma, The Oxford Comma, a little old-fashioned sounding, your choice, I use it.
AAA, BBB and CCC.
COMMON ERROR : AAA, BBB. no and   XXX Incorrect
Sarah likes skiing, hiking. XXX
Sarah likes skiing and hiking.
Sarah likes skiing, hiking, and cycling.

 
4. a. That may be true.
b. I have often wondered why it has to be that way.

That may be true, but I have often wondered why it has to be that way.
That may be true; however, I have often wondered why it has to be that way.


5. a. Why is it impossible to have everything?
b. ·Why is it impossible to be completely satisfied?

Why is it impossible to have everything and be completely satisfied?

6. a. You think about the illustration of the cake.
b. It does not make sense.

AWKWARD
You think about the illustration of the cake, but it does not make sense. 
You think about the illustration of the cake because it does not make sense.
AUTHENTIC
When you think about it, …
The illustration of the cake does not make sense when you think about. it. meaning – When you contemplate it, you can see it is confused.

7. a. Who would make a cake?
b. Who would not enjoy eating it afterwards?

Who would make a cake and not enjoy eating it afterwards?
Who would make a cake but not enjoy eating it afterwards?

8. a. There is definitely something wrong with the illustration.
b. You consider it carefully.
#6 and #8 are almost the same, the same meaning
The illustration of the cake does not make sense when/if you think about.
There is definitely something wrong with the illustration when/if you consider it carefully.



Tomorrow we will finish “Residential Schools”
I will get you to write a short paragraph using quoted material from the story. I will give you the topic tomorrow.

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morning.

Today’s agenda:

1. Go over descriptive writing from yesterday
2. Sentence combining from homework “At the Beach”.
3. Descriptive writing – paragraph


Tomorrow – narrative writing


Descriptive writing - Describing a picture
 we need descriptive language – adjectives

colour , shape, size

Describe what we see.
Don’t tell a story. Don’t explain about where Adams Lake is.
Just describe what you see.

Paragraph –
Topic sentence
4-5 supporting sentences
Concluding sentence


Brainstorm some ideas:

1. trees in front, in the foreground, bottom of the picture
tall, green, evergreen, pine, spruce, thick, bushy, many trees
On the bottom of the picture are many tall green trees. They are bushy and look like pine trees.
  
2. lake and water
blue, still, look cold, like a mirror, reflecting the clouds

3. hills and grass, in the middle of the picture 
low hills, smooth, covered in grass,  green and brown, tan

4. sky
light blue, cloudy, sunny, kind of clear, fluffy clouds


Topic sentence:
The photograph of Adams Lake is very beautiful. 
1. trees
2. lake
3. hills
4. sky


Process for writing a descriptive paragraph-
1. Look at the picture.
2. Brainstorm descriptive vocabulary.
3. Write a short paragraph describing what you see.
4. Make sure that all of your writing is simple, compound and complex sentences.

We are going to try this again today. I will give you a picture to describe and email to me today.


balloon – hot air balloon, brightly-coloured, round, floating in the sky, red, pale blue, yellow, green, nine balloons





Write a descriptive paragraph about the picture on the screen.
(150 w)
Be sure that your writing is in sentences.
Email that to me as an attachment by 12:15.

Wednesday, 17 June 2020

EF 5/6 June 17

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Good afternoon.

Today’s agenda:

1. Quotation homework “Roses Sing on New Snow”
2. “Residential Schools” I sent this to you a few days ago.
3. Test – sentence combining test, 8 sentences

I might have to start the class late tomorrow. I have a meeting at 1-1:30, but teachers like to talk, so we may go late.

Today’s picture is of Adams Lake, Saskatchewan.



Quoting:
quote a few words  “   “

Do you have some examples to share?
Write them in Chat.

1. When the governor came to Chinatown, every restaurant would show their “best dish” for him.
2. There are many “bone-tired” men among Maylin’s customers.
3. Maylin was asked to “spare no expense” on a dish for the banquet.
4. When Maylin’s father told a lie to the governor, the governor was angry and “pounded his fist on the Chair.”
5. When the truth was revealed, Maylin’s father “hung his head in shame.”
6. Maylin’s father brought the “New World dish” to the Governor when he came to the party.
7. President Trump on Monday said, "If we stop testing, we will have few cases."
8. Maylin used the “best ingredients” to create the dish which her father brought to the Governor.
9. The governor was "mesmerized" by Maylin's brave response to him.
“mesmerized” not a quotation, not in the story
The governor was mesmerized by Maylin's brave response to him.

10. To ingratiate himself to the governor, Maylin’s father asks Maylin to create a new dish and “spare no expense”; therefore, they can get appreciation and a reward from the governor.
11. After the governor tried each dish, he gave Maylin's dish the “warmest praise”.
12. The governor who became angry because Maylin refused “the emperor a chance” that  the dish can not took the dish to China. XXX
The governor became angry because Maylin refused “the emperor a chance” to try the dish in China.
13. Maylin is a “wise person” when she proved that the Governor could not cook that dish like her.

Excellent work. We will start putting quoted text in our writing starting tomorrow. A little bit goes a long way – just do a few quotations in each paragraph. Don’t overdo it. Don’t go nuts with it. One or two small squirts of perfume is enough.


Sentence combining is  the best way to get good at writing simple, compound and complex sentences.
Our goal: to be able to write a variety of sentences with confidence and skill.




Test
Combine each exercise into a sentence, for a total of eight sentences. Use a variety of sentence types.
Email them to me as an attachment by 2:45.

e.g. I like cats.
Cats are cute.

I like cute cats.

1.      a. I have never understood a certain proverb.
b. The proverb says, "You cannot have your cake and eat it, too."

2. a. My mother once interpreted it for me.
b. She told me that it meant you cannot have everything.

3. a. For example, it is impossible to find a job that pays well.
b. It is impossible to find a job that interests you all the time.
c. It is impossible to find a job that challenges you every day.

4. a. That may be true.
b. I have often wondered why it has to be that way.

5. a. Why is it impossible to have everything?
b. ·Why is it impossible to be completely satisfied?

6. a. You think about the illustration of the cake.
b. It does not make sense.

7. a. Who would make a cake?
b. Who would not enjoy eating it afterwards?

8. a. There is definitely something wrong with the illustration.
b. You consider it carefully. 

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See you at 11.

Good morning.

Today’s agenda:

1. Sentence combining work, sentence review
2. Test Descriptive writing pass-in paragraph (5-6 sentences)
3. Homework Sentence combining “At the Beach”. I will 
email this to you today. Try some for homework. we will work on it together tomorrow.


Our picture today is of Adam’s Lake, Saskatchewan 



Sentence combining work
Goal: To learn to write a variety of sentence types in English.

Developing learners sometimes use English words, but not English sentence types. – translate from their home language

We are learning how to put our rich thoughts into English.

Everything you write in English, you have to put into these sentence types: simple, compound, complex

If you forget about simple, compound, and complex, then your writing will not be English. It will be something else – your made-up language, mix between your first language and English.

**** The tools that we must know how to use. ****

SIMPLE
SV

COMPOUND
SV SV  , SOBA

COMPLEX
-adverb clause
-adjective clause
-noun clause

****     *****

This is most important. We can never get away from it.

We are going to keep working these for the last week and a half.

Sentence combining is, in my mind, the best way to improve sentence writing.
I think you will find it useful and challenging.

Our goal is to be able to write a variety of sentence types with confidence and skill.
Test – descriptive paragraph
Write a description of the picture of Adams Lake, Saskatchewan. 
It should be about 150 words.
Use descriptive words to describe the picture.
descriptive words – opinion, colour, size, shape, etc.
Don’t tell a story. Just describe what you see.
Email it to me as an attachment by 12:15.

Tuesday, 16 June 2020

EF 5/6 June 16

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Good afternoon.

Today’s agenda:

1. Continue with sentence combining
2. Quoting “Roses Sing on New Snow”
3. Homework Read “Residential Schools” I sent this to you 
a few days ago.

Test tomorrow – sentence combining test


Time flies!
Time flies like an arrow.
Tempus fugit. tempus - time (Latin) fugit – runs, flees (Latin)
fugitive -  a person who runs away from the police


Quoting – quotation marks “  “
Usages of quotation marks:
1.titles
title of a book, novel, movie, something is self-contained
Manhattan Transfer writing by hand
Manhatten Transfer writing on computer, italics
Titanic
Titanic
“Titanic” XXX

title of a short story, or an article from a newspaper or magazine, part of a book, a chapter
“Roses Sing on New Snow” short story
“Nine Days’ Wonder” chapter of a novel
“CERB payments to be extended for 2 more months” article from a newspaper, or online newspaper, cbc.ca

2. finger quotes (informal speaking), shows irony, “scare quotes”
verbal irony – say the opposite of what we mean
Trump is the greatest president since Lincoln. – you would think that this is my opinion
Trump is the “greatest” president since Lincoln. – you know that I feel this way, likely feel the opposite way

3. reported speech -direct speech
John said, “Come over at 9 o’clock.”
My mother told me, “Always be nice to your sisters.”

indirect speech
John said to come over at 9 c’clock. – not his exact words, just his meaning
My mother told me to always be nice to my sisters. – not exact words, the import of her meaning

Your examples:
Once my mother said, "If you can't respect yourself, you should not expect it from others." That hit me hard.
hit me hard – meant a lot to me, affected me
When her grandmother died, it hit her hard.

Al said, "Sentences are the essentials."

4. quoting from a text
incorporating text (words) from a outside source into our own writing


USING QUOTATIONS

Here are some key points to remember when using quotations:

1) Incorporate quotations into your sentences. We can’t just copy from a story.

2) Keep quotations to a few words (1-4 words, approx.).  Quotations are like salt in food: a little bit gives flavour; too much ruins the dish.

3) Use quoted material to support your points.

4) Don’t use too many quotations.  Pick two or three quotations to support your brainstormed points and leave the rest.

5) Make sure the quoted material is exactly as written in the story.  Use … and [] to make minor grammatical or stylistic changes.

6) Avoid repeating quotations.

7) After quoting material, go on to explain why the quotation is relevant.

8) Avoid ending paragraphs with quotations.



Why does Maylin love to cook?

“make them smile”
“worked to renew their spirits”

Maylin loved to cook for a few reasons. First, her customers were people who had difficult lives; therefore, she loved to “make them smile” after they finished their hard day of work.

I incorporated a few words into my own sentence.

She wanted to “renew their spirits” though her delicious cooking.

I incorporated a few words into my own sentence.

That’s what we’re doing.

If it was from a long story or a book, then you could add page numbers.
She loved to “make them smile” (1) after they finished their hard day of work. She wanted to “renew their spirits” though her delicious cooking.

Using quotations – not copying sentences from a book, more precise work than that


Practice: Create a few (3-4) sentences of your own that incorporate a few quoted words from “Roses”. Don’t write a paragraph – these are separate one-off sentence.

For example:
“special banquet”
To celebrate the governor’s arrival, Maylin cooked a dish for the “special banquet” that was to be help in the governor’s honour.
“best clothes”
All of Maylin’s family members dressed in their “best clothes” when they went to see the governor.

Email those to me today. An extra HW point.

EF 3/4 June 16

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See you at 11.

Good morning.

Today’s agenda:

1. Continue with sentence combining work
2. continue with adjective work – Order of Adjectives
3. Pass-in writing - descriptive writing from homework


The cute little brown dog was running in the park.
brown cute little dog XXX wrong order of adjectives
little brown cute dog XXX wrong order

What is the right order of adjectives?

Opinion         Size         Age         Shape         Colour         Origin         Material         Purpose      NOUN

Order of Adjectives
Opinion An opinion adjective explains what you think about something (other people may not agree with you).
For example: silly, beautiful, horrible, difficult
Size A size adjective, of course, tells you how big or small something is.
For example: large, tiny, enormous, little
Age An age adjective tells you how young or old something or someone is.
For example: ancient, new, young, old, five-year-old
Shape A shape adjective describes the shape of something.
For example: square, round, flat, rectangular
Colour A colour adjective, of course, describes the colour of something.
For example: blue, pink, reddish, grey, sky blue, forest green
Origin An origin adjective describes where something comes from.
For example: French, lunar, Canadian, eastern, Greek
Material A material adjective describes what something is made from.
For example: wooden, metal, cotton, paper, leather
Purpose A purpose adjective describes what something is used for. These adjectives often end with “-ing”.
For example: sleeping (as in “sleeping bag”), roasting (as in “roasting tin”), school, work

Opinion         Size         Age         Shape         Colour         Origin         Material         Purpose      NOUN
beautiful                                                                                                    gold                wedding      ring
 
Janice has a beautiful gold wedding ring. order of adjectives
Janice has a gold beautiful wedding ring. XXX
The kid has a large round green beach ball.

HIGHER LEVEL: We use commas when we have two adjectives in the same category.
e.g. The cute, gorgeous baby is smiling at me. same category, comma
The cute little baby is smiling at me. different categories, no comma


Opinion         Size         Age         Shape         Colour         Origin         Material         Purpose      NOUN
informative                   new                                                                                             exercise      book
“The teacher gave us an informative new exercise book.” different categories, no comma

Opinion         Size         Age         Shape         Colour         Origin         Material         Purpose      NOUN
informative/challenging                                                                                                  exercise      book
“The teacher gave us an informative, challenging exercise book.” informative, challenging same category, comma


Opinion         Size         Age         Shape         Colour         Origin         Material         Purpose      NOUN
                                                                           sky blue       Japanese                                             kimono
“Junko is wearing a sky blue Japanese kimono.”


Opinion         Size         Age         Shape         Colour         Origin         Material         Purpose      NOUN

Try one of your own in the Chat.

1. My son has a small red car that is his favorite car.
2. Mary bought a beautiful red car yesterday.
3. She wore a beautiful red dress.
4. Yesterday I saw the majestic large Lake Louise.
5. Lily has a large gray/grey cat in her house.
6. she is taking large old expensive book
She is taking an expensive large old book.

7. My sister bought some big fresh shrimp for dinner. 
8. My Five years old daughter wearing blue cotton dress.
9. My five-year-old daughter was wearing a blue cotton dress.
10. My sister has long curly light brown hair.
My sister has beautiful, healthy hair.
My sister has healthy, beautiful hair.

11. Lily bought a small silver ring yesterday.
12. The party yesterday was enjoyed, beautifully birthday for me.
The party yesterday was an enjoyable, beautiful birthday for me.
The party yesterday was an beautiful, enjoyable birthday for me.
13. I have a friend who is playing a funny short videogame.

funny? fun?
funny – makes you laugh
fun – enjoyable
Swimming is funny.   strange meaning
Swimming is fun. probably our meaning

Opinion         Size         Age         Shape         Colour         Origin         Material         Purpose      NOUN








PASS-IN WRITING
Yesterday for homework, you wrote a description of a person or thing. 
Pass-in your paragraph by 12:45.
Make sure each sentence is simple, compound, or complex.