awk - phrasing, translation from another language
cs comma splice - two sentences separated by a comma, comma is not strong enough
I like to go hiking, she likes to go swimming. XXX
I like to go hiking. She likes to go swimming.
I like to go hiking, but she likes to go swimming.
I like to go hiking; however, she likes to go swimming. HIGHER LEVEL
; however,
; therefore,
; nevertheless,
; afterwards,
; moreover,
frag - not a complete sentence
My kids to school. XXX
My kids go to school.
he/she/we
My mother is 74.
You must help you. XXX
You must help yourself.
ro run-on
I like Vancouver Vancouver is nice it is beautiful there are lots of parks the mountains are nice.
I like Vancouver. Vancouver is nice. It is beautiful. There are lots of parks, and the mountains are nice.
agr #1 error
He take the bus. XXX
He takes the bus.
vt verb tense
vf
I am
wf word form
She is happiness. XXX
She is happy.
ww wrong word
? unclear Meaning? Try to write it a different way.
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