Sentence styles are top priority.
SIMPLE
SV SSV SVV
COMPOUND
SV SV ,SOBA ,FANBOYS
; semicolon
; TRANS,
David likes to swim, he hates to hike; on the contrary. XXX
David likes to swim; however, he hates to hike. BASIC MODEL
David likes to swim; he hates to hike, however.
David likes to swim; he, however, hates to hike.
Does it sound good?
COMPLEX
-adverb clause
-noun clause
-adjective clause
COMPOUND-COMPLEX
Maria likes skiing, but she doesn't like snowboarding because she doesn't like not being able to move her legs freely.
I have a white dog, and my sister has a dog that is brown.
Jim bought a TV that has a 100' screen, but he can't get it into his house.
I know that you want to go to New York, but I would rather go to New Westminster.
Small business - editing business for university students
internet business, email
edit their writing - fix mistakes, rewrite phrasing, variety of sentences, polish
SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX, COMPOUND-COMPLEX
add some style, punch up
ADVICE:
Mix of styles
Mix of sentence lengths
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