1. We were preparing for the second performance of our play, and the dressing room was in a state.
The dressing room was in a state because we were preparing for the second performance of our play.
The dressing room was in a state while we were preparing for the second performance of our play.
second play performance -awkward phrasing
2. Costume racks and makeup trays were scattered around the room.
The costume racks and makeup trays were scattered around the room.
"The" is for both
The costume racks and the makeup trays were scattered around the room.
3. Nearly everyone was nervous as helpers were dressing cast members and applying their makeup.
4. The female lead could not get her wig to stay on properly, and the male lead was having a tug-of-war with his uncooperative suspenders.
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