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Topic sentence- subject, controlling
idea
Why did Poh Poh treat Jook Liang the way
that she did?
TS must be linked to the question.-
address the question directly
on-topic – mirror the vocab, use synonyms
In
old China, women were treated poorly. off-topic
Poh Poh treated Jook Liang the way that
she did for several reasons. clear, on topic, very simple, very basic
Poh Poh treated Jook Liang more harshly
than the other grandchildren because she was a girl. in-depth, sophisticated
Poh Poh treated Jook Liang badly because
of the way Poh Poh was treated when she was a girl.
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INCORPORATING TEXT INTO YOUR OWN SENTENCES
Quality of the sentences- simple,
compound complex
Sentence combining-
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