E11 More practice with ""

     

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PohPoh does not like to show affection to Jook

Liang: “elbowed away”. (33) 

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Jook-Liang tried to give her grandma a hug, but

PohPoh “elbowed [her] away”. (33)

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grammatical

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Jook-Liang tries to give her grandma a hug, but

the little girl is “elbowed away” by PohPoh.

I wrote the sentence to match the quotation.

Jung Sum found a “snakelike, angry… turtle” in the shed. (78)

... ellipsis

Jung Sum found a “snakelike… eye-glittering… turtle” in the shed. (78)

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