Eng11 Sentence combining "In Touch"

Lots of ways- variety of styles- mix it up

EF4 - simple sentence
Eng 11- rich variety, interesting sentences
stretch our boundaries- comfortable writing

anxiety about writing, anxious- nervous, afraid

smoking cigarettes and dancing

1. Children are remarkable for something. KERNEL
Children are remarkable for something.
These children are .
Young children are remarkable for...
Children who are young are remarkable for...
The something is an ability
Children who are young are remarkable for an ability to remain "in touch" with their feeling.

She has the ability to sing opera in German.

2. They know themselves well, but they haven't learned to wear masks to cover up feelings.
They know themselves well; however, they haven't learned to wear masks to cover up feelings.
They know themselves well. However, they haven't learned to wear masks to cover up feelings.

Transition words- WAE pp296-299

She plays soccer; also, she plays volleyball.
She plays soccer. Also, she plays volleyball.
She plays soccer, also, she plays volleyball. WRONG

Which one do you know? Which ones do you not know yet?
Start to use them.


Because Although they know themselves well, they haven't learned to wear masks to cover up feelings.
although, even though, though- same meaning

VERY HIGH QUALITY WRITING

9-13
They acknowledge and show their feelings of joy, unhappiness, curiosity, and excitement.
Not only do they acknowledge their feelings, but also they also show joy, unhappiness, curiosity, and excitement. YOU CHOOSE

14-15
They do not repress feelings because they have not learned how.
They have not learned how to repress feelings.

16-19
They are in still in touch and respond with openness to the world and others.
They are in still in touch, so they respond with openness to the world and others.
As/ Since/ Becuase they are in still in touch, they respond with openness to the world and others.
They are still in touch enough to respond openly to the world and others. VERY NATURAL

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