E11 para process

What I'm looking for in a paragraph.
-Topic sentence that is clear and on-topic

Good technique 1-2 intro sentences -history, short anecdote

Topic sentence- topic related to the question, controlling idea- your take on it, your argument, your position

QUESTION
Discuss some ways that the moon is prevalent in Jung Sum's life.

TS- mirror that vocab, use synonyms

EXAMPLE
"Throughout Jung Sum's life, the moon has been very important."
"The moon has been very important throughout Jung Sum's life." SIMPLE BASIC EASY

"Jung Sum's life has been dominated by moon. In fact, it is a symbol of his personality." SOPHISTICATED VOCAB, SUBTLE MEANING


3-4 points- clear, well-organized points

Writing about the story, retelleing the plot.

STRUCTURE

PLAN FIRST!


PROCESS
PLAN
1. LIMIT THE TOPIC
2. GENERATE IDEAS
3. OUTLINE THE IDEAS

WRITE
4.ROUGH COPY
5. EDIT- SENTENCES- COMPLETE
WIDE VARIETY OF STYLES- simple, compound, complex
- punc
CS comma splice
- vt
- vf verb form

6. PASS IN