EF5 Wr567 Class 39

 

Good afternoon, everyone.

We will get started at 12:00

If there is anything that I haven’t taught, that you want to learn, please let me know.

 

Today’s agenda

·      Your examples of sentence combining from homework

·      Descriptive presentations

·      Identifying simple, compound, and complex sentences

·      Continue essay work

 

Wednesday

·      Parallelism

·      Continue review of verb tenses- present perfect

·      “Testing Your Prepositions”

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Thursday

·      Parallellism

·      Optional replacement quiz or test.

Sentence combining

6 sentences for a replacement quiz

12 sentences for a replacement test

 

Friday- final day, January 26th

·      Marks day

·      One-on-one conferences

 

 

 

“New Job”

 

 

These are some of your examples from homework.

1.    Angie's mother accepted a higher-paying job in another province and moved her family. SVV SIMPLE

2.    Angei said a sad and tearful goodbye to her friend before she left. COMPLEX- ADV CL

3.    Arriving at her new school, she saw hundreds of unfamiliar faces; the school was her new one.

4.    Angie's mother accepted a higher paying job in another province, so she moved her family. COMPOUND

5.    Angie said good bye to her frinds before she left, which was sad and tearful.

6.    She arrived at her new school, and she saw hundreds of unfamiliar faces. COMPOUND

7.    She missed her caring friends from her old school.

8.    She made new friends in her classes within a month, so she felt happier.

9.    Angle’s mother accepted a higher-paying job which was in another province,so she moved her family.

- hyphen  -- dash, one bar twice as long                                                                    

10.                       Angie was sad; because,she said tearful goodbye to her friends before she left. RW

Angie was sad; therefore, she said a tearful goodbye to her friends before she left.

11.                       She arrived at her new school, and she saw hundreds of unfamiliar faces.                                        

12.                       She missed her old school’s friends; because,they were caring. RW

FIX

She missed her old school’s friends because they were caring.       

 

SIMPLE COMPOUND COMPLEX

13.                       She had made friends who were in her classes within a month; therefore, she felt happier.

She had made friends in her classes within a month; therefore, she felt happier.

 

14.                       Angie's mother accepted a higher-paying job in another province and moved her family.

15.                       Angie was sad and said a tearful goodbye to her friends before she left.

16.                       She arrived at her new school and saw hundreds of unfamiliar faces.

17.                       She missed her caring school friends from her old school.

18.                       She made new friends in her classes within a month and felt happier.

19.                       Angie’s mother accepted a higher-paying job, so she moved her family to another province.

20.                       Angie’s mother moved her family in another province when she accepted a higher-paying job.

21.                       Angie was tearfully sad since she said goodbye to her friends before she left. 

22.                       She saw hundreds of unfamiliar faces when she arrived at a new school.

23.                       She arrived at a new school where she saw hundreds of unfamiliar faces.

24.                       She missed old school friends who cared for her.

25.                       Because the friends at her old school were caring for her, she missed them.

26.                       She felt happier that she had made friends in her class with in a month.

27.                       She had made friends in her classes within a month; therefore, she felt happy.

28.                       Angie’s mother accepted a higher-paying job; so she moved her family to another province.  XXX

FIX

Angie’s mother accepted a higher-paying job, so she moved her family to another province. 

Angie’s mother accepted a higher-paying job; she moved her family to another province. 

Angie’s mother accepted a higher-paying job; for that reason, she moved her family to another province.

29.                       Angie said goodbye to her friends tearfully and sadly before she left. 

30.                       She arrived at her new school where she saw hundreds of unfamiliar faces. 

31.                       She missed her caring friends who were at her old school.

32.                       She felt happier because she made friends in her classes within a month.

33.                       Angie’s mother moved her family because she accepted a higher-paying job that was in another province.  ADV CL ADJ CL

34.                       Angie was sad when she said tearful goodbyes to her friends before she left.

35.                       She saw hundreds of unfamiliar faces when she arrived at her new school.

36.                       She missed her caring(adj) friends who were at her old school.

37.                       She felt happier after she had made friends in her classes within a month.

Well done. There are some very interesting solutions here.

 

 

Simple, compound, and complex sentences

Ex.37

 

toupee- fake hair for a man  two-pay

wig- fake hair for a woman

more tasty = tastier

deep poem – profound, deep meaning

 

Ex.38

 

 

 

 

negotiation(noun) negotiate(verb)

arbitration, arbirate

negotiator(person)

non-binding arbitration

binding arbitration

arbitrator(person)

 

They will come back to the table.

 

 

 

 

Essays

OPTIONAL:

Write a five-paragraph essay on one of the following topics(at least 250 words). You can do it at home. Don’t ask Chat GPT to write it.

I will read it and give it a few bonus points.

1.What are the secrets of a happy life?

2.What three things would you bring to a desert island? (not food or water, no people)

3.Why did you choose Vancouver?

4.Choose your own topic.