EF56 sentence combining

 

English Foundations 5/6

Good morning, everyone.

We will get started at 8:30

 

 

Never quit! Keep going.

If you think too much about it, it can become overwhelming/too much.

Then you will shut down.

Keep going day by day. Don’t worry too much about your progress. The progress will come unexpectedly.

Have faith in the process- daily practice. Believe in your ability. Believe in yourself.

Keep reaching for the next level if you want to make progress.

 

 

Today’s agenda

·      Sentence combining, your examples from homework

·      Final test   Choice:

- Paragraph on a general topic, not a short story

- Business letter on a topic I will give you

 

 

Friday (Final day)

·      Review of work covered this term

·      Marks day

·      I can give you your final mark.

No report card tomorrow.

 

 

 

 

REPORT CARDS

Report Cards are usually available three business days after the end of term.  Students may request a report card by emailing southhillregistration@vsb.bc.ca   Pease note the following:

Subject line in email	“Report Card Request”
Name	Last Name, Usual First Name
DOB	Date of Birth - dd/mm/yyyy
Course	Name of Course taken
Time	Please specify the Period the course was held

 

 

 

 

 

1.    There is an atmosphere which is relaxed and friendly in the class.

complex – adj cl

There is a relaxed and friendly atmosphere in the class.

simple

 

2.    There is no homework,and SV delicious food ,so that it can be eaten at the end of lab.   , and ,so   RW

 

3.    Hamish is learning recipes this week that use eggs and dairy products which include milk and cheese.

complex- adj cl

 

4.    There is no home work and there is delicious food that can be eaten at the end of the lab. REP

 

5.    There is an atmosphere in the class that is relaxed and friendly.

6.    Hamish is learning recipes this week. The recipes use eggs and dairy products it include milk and cheese. RO run on sentence

Hamish is learning recipes this week. The recipes use eggs and dairy products. It includes milk and cheese.

not combined fully

 

This week, Hamish is learning recipes that use eggs and dairy products that include milk and cheese.

This week, Hamish is learning recipes that use eggs and dairy products such as milk and cheese.

This week, Hamish is learning recipes that use eggs and dairy product including milk and cheese.

 

She plays many sports including soccer, baseball and lawn bowling.

 

Margot has travelled to many countries including Canada, the US, Ireland, and India.  – there are more-

 

7.    He cooked an omelette on Tuesday.The omelette was lightness and perfect ;also,it was stuffed with cheese, green peppers and spices.

He cooked an omelette on Tuesday. The omelette was light and perfect; also, it was stuffed with cheese, green peppers and spices. learn spacing after punctuation . ; , put a space afterward

 

8.    Hamish is a growing boy he ate the omelette that contained four large.eggs.He did the dishes and clean the lab in which he worked ,after that he left for lunch. XXX

Hamish is a growing boy. He ate the omelette that contained four large eggs. He did the dishes and cleaned the lab in which he worked. After that, he left for lunch.

 

9.    On Tuesday He cooked a light omelette which had perfect lightness stuffed with cheese, peppers, and spices.

 

10.                       There is a relaxed and friendly atmosphere in the class. simple

11.                       There is no homework, and the food that can be eaten at the end of the lab is delicious. compound complex

 

12.                       This week, Hamish is learning recipes that use eggs and dairy products that include milk and cheese this week.

13.                       On Tuesday, he cooked an omelette that stuffed with cheese, green peppers and spices was light and lightness was perfect.  RW

On Tuesday, he cooked a perfect light omelette that was stuffed with cheese, green peppers and spices.

 

14.                       Hamish is a growing boy and ate the omelette that contained four eggs that were large. complex- adj cl

15.                       He did the dishes and cleaned the lab in which he worked and left for lunch.   AAA and BBB and CCC XXX    

   He did the dishes, cleaned the lab in which he worked, and left for lunch.  AAA, BBB, and CCC.

 

She hikes, swims, and does yoga.

 

 

16.                       There is an atmosphere in the class that was relaxed and friendly. vt

There is an atmosphere in the class that is relaxed and friendly.

There is an atmosphere that is relaxed and friendly in the class.

In the class, there is an atmosphere that is relaxed and friendly.

IDIOM six of one, half dozen of the other- either way is fine, the same

 

17.                       Hamish is learning recipes this week, which use eggs and dairy products. The products include both milk and cheese.

18.                       He cooked an omelette on Tuesday that was light and perfect. The stuffed that was with It was stuffed with cheese, green peppers and spices.

 

A teddy bear has stuffing inside.

A turkey has stuffing inside.

He is a stuffed shirt.

 

19.                       The cooking class is a welcome break from English and math concentrated.   hours of study  XXX

 

20.                       There is a relaxed and friendly atmosphere in the class.

21.                       There is no homework, but delicious food can be eaten at the end of the lab.

The delicious food can be eaten.  -passive voice

She ate some of the delicious food. – active voice

 

I fed the dog. active voice

The dog was fed (by me). passive voice

*In general, active voice sounds better and stronger.

 

22.                       Hamish is learning recipes this week, and the recipes use dairy products like/example such as milk and cheese.

 

23.                       He cooked an omelette on Tuesday, and the lightness was perfect stuffed with cheese, green peppers, and spices.

 

On Tuesday, he cooked an omelette stuffed with cheese, green peppers, and spices, and it was light and perfect.  busy sentene with lots oif information, put ‘on tuesday’ at the front, out of the way

 

He cooked a light omelette (that was) perfectly stuffed with cheese, green peppers, and spices.

 

24.                       Hamish is a growing boy, so he ate an omelette that was contained four large eggs.

 

The cooking class is a break from concentrated hours of Math and English.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Final Writing

 

Paragraph

What are your next steps in learning English?

OR

Business letter

Write a letter to this restaurant asking to have your wedding banquet at their venue.

 

Joe Chen, manager

Tasty Food Restaurant

2341 Hastings Street

Vancouver, BC

V6T1K7