Good morning, everyone.
Registration for September will begin next Monday.
We will do midterm recommendations on Friday.
These are my courses for September-
Period 1 (9:15-11:30) EF23
Period 2 (12-2:15) EF45
Today’s Agenda
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Return Test1
Optional RW for bonus point
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Continue compound sentences
“Forms for Compound Sentences”
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New dialogue “Going to a Dental Specialist”
Tuesday
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Continue compound sentences
Quiz2 on Wednesday
Choose vocab for the quiz
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Begin persuasive paragraphs
Wednesday
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Quiz2- compound sentences
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Continue persuasive paragraph
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Thursday
·
Continue persuasive paragraph
Friday
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Midterm recommendations
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Vocab “Odd Word Out 2”
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Test2- paragraph
COMING UP
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Hyphenated modifiers
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Modals/modal auxiliaries
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Continue verb tenses- present progressive, past
progressive
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Test 1
Phones and devices put away
Write in pen
Name and class top right
Doublespace
Lined, ruled paper
Write a paragraph of at least 150 words on the following
topic:
Why do you want to get better at English?
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WRITING PROCESS: This is what I do.
It might work for you too.
PREWRITING
(planning)- 5-10m
1. Read the
question carefully. Read it ten times. Read every word. Make sure you understand
what the teacher is asking you to do. You have to be on-topic.
2. Brainstorm some
ideas. Generate ideas. 3-4, brainstorm 10 and choose the best ones
3. Organize the
ideas in a logical order. 3-4 ideas. Make them super clear.
WRITING (sentence
writing)
4. Write the first
draft (first copy)
Topic sentence
Supporting
sentences
Concluding sentence
5. Proofread and
correct the sentences.
spelling verb tense
verb form punctuation
Every sentence has
to be simple, compound, or complex.
6. Submit the legible
corrected draft.
Test 3.5/6 DOUBLED 7/12
Optional RW for
bonus point
EXAMPLES OF SENTENCES:
I also need to learn
how to write good sentences.
She needs to V She
needs to call her sister.
He learned how to swim.
Sarah will learn how to
drive a car.
I want to learn how to speak English better because this will
positively affect my career.
Covid negatively affected her health.
Title: Test 1 RW
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COMPOUND SENTENCES
Next level of compound sentences:
transitional terms
MODELS FOR COMPOUND SENTENCES: SV , SOBA SV.
David likes to swim. David hates to hike. 2 SIMPLES
David likes to swim, but he hates to hike. COMPOUND
MY FREE ADVICE: So far, these are the models to follow when
you are writing in English. These are the models that I use every day.
SIMPLE SV SSV SVV ,
etc
COMPOUND SV, SOBA
SV.
Next level of compound sentences:
transitional terms
; semicolon
David likes to swim, but he hates to hike. COMPOUND
OR
David likes to swim; he hates to hike. COMPOUND
, but = ;
OR
; however,
David likes to swim; however, he hates to hike.
COMPOUND
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These are the three ways to write compound sentences.
1.David likes to swim, but he hates to hike.
2.David likes to swim; he hates to hike.
3.David likes to swim; however, he hates to hike.
, SOBA OR ;
OR ; TRANS,
You can strive to learn all of these compound sentence styles:
1.Organic food is healthy, so some people prefer it.
2.Organic food is healthy; some people prefer it.
3.Organic food is healthy; therefore, some people
prefer it.
You can know all three levels:
First level: , SOBA
Next level: ;
Highest level: ;
TRANS,
Mai loves dogs. She has three chihuahuas. 2 SIMPLES
Mai loves dogs, and she has three chihuahuas. COMPOUND
Mai loves dogs, so she has three chihuahuas. COMPOUND
Mai loves dogs; she has three chihuahuas. COMPOUND
Mai loves dogs; therefore, she has three chihuahuas.
COMPOUND
THREE MODELS FOR COMPOUND SENTENCES
SV, SOBA SV. Sarah
loves dogs, so she has three dogs.
SV; SV. Sarah
loves dogs; she has three dogs.
SV; TRANS, SV. Sarah
loves dogs; therefore, she has three dogs.
CHOICES FOR TRANSITIONAL TERMS:
SV; TRANS, SV. Sarah
loves dogs; as a result, she has three dogs.
SV; TRANS, SV. Sarah
loves dogs; therefore, she has three dogs.
SV; TRANS, SV. Sarah
loves dogs; consequently, she has three dogs.
ANOTHER OPTION:
Sarah loves dogs. Therefore, she has three dogs. 2 SIMPLES
Sarah loves dogs; therefore, she has three dogs. COMPOUND
Sarah loves dogs, so she has three dogs. COMPOUND
Sarah loves dogs and has three of them. SIMPLE SVV
Sarah didn’t pass her exam, so she has to study for it again.
COMPOUND
Sarah didn’t pass her exam; therefore, she has to study for it
again. COMPOUND
Sarah didn’t pass her exam; she has to study for it again.
COMPOUND
Sarah didn’t pass her exam; as a result, she has to study for
it again. COMPOUND
PUNCTUATION
Sarah opened the window, and she felt cold. COMPOUND
Sarah opened the window and, she felt cold. XXX punc
Sarah opened the
window and felt cold. SIMPLE SVV
Sarah opened the window; afterward, she felt cold. COMPOUND
Sarah opened the window; consequently, she felt cold.
COMPOUND
“Introduction to Transitional Terms” HANDOUT
ADDITION
He is taking Math 11; also, he is taking EF7. COMPOUND
He is taking Math 11; in addition, he is taking EF7.
He is taking Math 11 and EF7. SIMPLE
CONSEQUENCE
EXEMPLIFYING
Mei plays a lot of sports; for example, she is good at
volleyball, basketball, and swimming.
Mei plays a lot of sports; for instance, she is good at
volleyball, basketball, and swimming.
EMPHASIS
Vancouver has nice parks and lakes; moreover, it has the
Northshore Mountains.
SIMILARITY
Jun grew up in a village in China; likewise, Samir was
raised on a farm in Iran.
A person who lives in a village is a villager. The place is
a village.
A village is small rural settlement.
urban- city
rural- countryside, farmland
Don volunteers at his church; likewise, Mousa volunteers at
his mosque.
Don volunteers at his church; similarly, Mousa volunteers at his mosque.
CHOICE:
You can have a dog for a pet; on the other hand, you could
choose a cat.
You can have a dog for a pet, or you could choose a cat.
Mei didn’t want to go swimming; instead, she read her book
on the beach.
CONTRAST
Sarah loves to sunbathe; on the contrary, Mei always covers
up.
I love dogs; in contrast, Michelle loves cats.
SEQUENCE
Yesterday, we went shopping at Metrotown; first, we had
breakfast.
She went on a 10-km hike; after that, she was tired.
SUMMARIZING- paragraph
**There are lots of words for transitional terms. I just gave
you just 35 of them.
OTHERS
-usually
Sarah likes to keep fit; usually, she goes to the gym twice
a week.
-as a rule
Students at SHEC can repeat courses; as a rule, they can
take a course twice or maybe three times.
-most importantly
To be healthy, you have to get enough sleep and exercise;
most importantly, you have to eat a healthy diet.
-happily
He asked her to marry him; happily, she said ‘Yes’.
-unfortunately
Moe won the lottery; unfortunately, his dog ate the ticket.
-fortunately
He fell out the window; fortunately, he was on the first floor.
He fell off a thirty-foot ladder; fortunately, he was
standing on the first rung.
The old man fell down the stairs; fortunately, he landed on
his feet.
Joe got a call from his sister; sadly, their grandmother was
in hospital.
Joe’s girlfriend dumped him; sadly, he has a broken heart.
Did you ever get dumped when you were a teenager?
Did you every dump somebody?
Joe’s girlfriend left him for a new taller, richer,
better-looking guy.
Joe is broken-hearted.
-in contrast
Jun loves to go out on the weekends; in contrast, Sam is a
homebody.
FREE ADVICE: Use Chatgpt to get examples of word usage.
Chatgpt is a wonderful teaching tool. It can help check your
writing.
Be cautious: Chatgpt does not sound like a real person. It
doesn’t sound like you.
You still have to learn English.
CONTINUE TOMORROW
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New dialogue “Going to a Dental Specialist”
Small chat groups (4-5 people)
Warm-Up Questions
1.pain, toothache, infection, abcess, bleeding gums, sore
gums, cleaning, filling, braces, extraction, night guard /grind guard, examination,
chipped tooth, broken tooth, surgery, implant, plate/false teeth/dentures
2.nervous, happy?, crying-kids
3.pain, phobia/fear/scared/stressed out, expensive, chit-chat
fair-hair
fear-near
Vocabulary Preview
1. root
canal
2. infected-
pus comes out
Teenagers get acne. They can go to a
dermatologist.
3. pulp-
the inside of an orange
She likes orange juice with pulp.
He likes smooth peanut butter, not crunchy
peanut butter.
4. numb-
no feeling
My hand is numb. His arm was asleep.
You get pins and needles when the numbness
is going away.
Her face was frozen after the operation.
He dribbles
water out of his mouth.
The dog drools when he sees food.
The basketball player dribbles the ball.
5. anesthetic-
6. vibration-
quick shaking, buzzing Her phone
vibrates.
7. seal-
8. filling-
special material to fix a tooth
jam-filled donut
9.
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