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Today’s agenda:
1.
Example sentences from your Test#1 paragraph
2.
Simple sentences
3.
HW Prepare
for quiz on simple sentences on Tuesday
Monday- continue simple sentences
Today’s special place in Canada is the Annapolis Valley.
Put some of your sentences from your Test #1 paragraph in
the chat, and we can look at them together.
1.
Covid-19 has changed many things around the world.
Good.
2.
For me Covid19 made me stay home which helped me to
think more about my life and future because before the pandemic started I was
only working full time and I was busy with life which did not give me anytime
thinking and planning for my life.
Too long. Divide it into sentences.
For me, Covid19 made me stay home. This
helped me to think more about my life and future. Before the pandemic started I
was only working full time. I was busy with life which did not give me anytime to
think and plan for my life.
Reads better. Smoother writing
3.
Since the coronavirus pandemic started, COVID-19 has become
a very hot word in the world because it
is really effecting the lives of all humans.
4.
covid 19 had bad effect on my life. CAP
5.
Covid19 is a dramatic one that happened.
one? ww event occurrence situation
6.
I want to be able to do the travel again.
7.
because I lost my job. CAP FRAG
8.
COVID 19 gives causes us a lot of stress. AWK
9.
now I can’t attend any my family and friends
wedding,and other party so can’t celebrate together.
10.
now I can’t attend any my family and friends
wedding,and other party so can’t celebrate together.
11.
Covid19 changed life in the world. ?? ??
Covid19 has changed the lives of everyone in the world.
12.
I tghout thought it will would be
anonymous punc Meaning??
13.
This year is very terrible in the world.
The COVID-19 maked ous change anything in my life.
This year has been very terrible for everyone
in the world.
Bill Gates is very famous in the world. XXX AWK
Bill Gates is very famous all over the world.
14.
After that I had to change my job. And I have to work
hard.
After that, I had to change my job. And Also, I
have had to work hard. vt verb tense
Don’t
begin a sentence with ‘and’ ‘but’, or ‘so’ in school writing. It’s too casual.
15.
Covid 19 affecting people all over the world
and all age. ?
vf is affecting
Covid 19 is affecting
people of all ages all over the world.
I put it on the blog everyday. It will be there forever.
16.
Since Covid-19 started, all the activities that
we love to do as a family is are now limited.
17.
I think Covid-19 affecting everyone’s life during 2020
include me.
I think Covid-19 is affecting everyone’s
life during 2020, including mine. possessive
18.
The Government advised us to stay at home and
have no parties.
told advice ask – I told you to do the dishes. The
doctor advised her patient to stop smoking. Maura asked her sister to
pick her kids up at school yesterday.
pick my kids up
pick up my kids
19.
Many people died around the world.
20.
People's life affected because of this sickness.
People's lives have
been affected because of this sickness.
21.
COVID 19 has disrupted the daily life of everyone in
the world.
22.
When Covid-19 is over, I want to go back to my
normal life. I want to go back to work, church and seeing friends and
meeting new. paralellism
When Covid-19 is over, I want to go back to
my normal life. I want to go back to work, go to church, see friends, and
meet new people.
23.
Covid-19 has come to a time that when I finish
work I do not hanging out with my friends , so often like before ?
Covid-19 has affected my life so that when
I finish work I do not hang out with my friends as often as before.
24.
One year ago, it prevented me from going to work or school.
25.
Now I can’t attend any my family and friends wedding,and
other party so can’t celebrate together. TOO LONG
Now I can’t attend any of my family’s or
friend’s weddings or other parties. Therefore, we can’t celebrate together.
26.
Before Covid-19, I used to be a social butterfly.
used to – activity from the past
Sarah used to do yoga, but now she is too
busy.
I used to live in Nova Scotia.
27.
The second one is taking care of kids. Many people try
to keep their kids at home. For me, it has been really challenging to
provide a fun, amusing and peaceful place for my kids. Nice verb!
28.
People are struggling financially because many people
lost their job because their work site needs to be close due COVID.
Too much for one sentence. Divide it up.
People are struggling financially. Many
people have lost their jobs because their work sites need to be closed due to COVID.
Sentence types:
SIMPLE
COMPOUND
COMPLEX
SIMPLE SENTENCES- most
basic, but powerful
valuable, important
If you want to say something important, use a simple
sentence.
They are easy to understand and memorable.
SUBJECT + VERB
SV
-one independent clause
clause – a group of words with a subject and a verb
The little girl’s doll fell
off the shelf.
My friend dropped
his cellphone.
SSV
Maria and Dave go
dancing on Tuesday nights.
The dog and the cat like to play together.
SVV
Sarah plays
soccer and does yoga.
SV
SSV
SVV
SSSSSV – unusual, don’t sound good
My sister, my brother, my uncle, his aunt, her dog, and your
cat are all in the car together.
imperative sentences – command, tell someone to do something
Shut the window. Don’t
say ‘you’
Close the door.
Do your homework.
You close the door. sounds too aggressive
Close the door, please.
Please close the door.
‘Please’ is the magic word.
Question
Could you close the window, please? Very polite.
Could you go away and never come back, please?
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