1. Ricky heard his mother calling him in, and her voice sounded colder than the winter wind.
COMPOUND
FOUNDATIONS- SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX
Ricky heard his mother calling him in with a voice that sounded colder than the winter wind. COMPLEX- ADJ CL
Ricky heard his mother whose voice sounded colder than the winter wind calling him in.
COMPLEX- ADJ CL
Ricky heard his mother, whose voice sounded colder than the winter wind, calling him in. STYLE
Ricky heard his mother, who her voice sounded colder than the winter wind, calling him in. XXX
2. He turned reluctantly from the frozen white walls that he had made and looked hopefully to the back door. COMPLEX - PARALLEL
3. His cheeks were red from hours of play, and his nylon suit was a shade darker form the melted snow.
COMPOUND- PARALLEL
His cheeks were red from hours of play; similarly, his nylon suit was a shade darker form the melted snow.
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