Comm 11/12 Sailor's Home sentence combining

1-2 The sailor stands behind the wheel and sails the ship. SIMPLE
The sailor who stands behind the wheel sails the ship. COMPLEX- ADJ

The sailor stands behind the wheel while sailing the ship.
The sailor stands behind the wheel sailing the ship.

The sailor stands behind the wheel, and he sails the ship. COMPOUND
The sailor stands behind the wheel; meanwhile, he sails the ship. COMPOUND


VARIETY OF SENTENCES

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The sailor thinks of home. His large house that is made of stone has a bay window that stands on the hill surrounded by green grass that reminds him of the sea.
The sailor thinks of home, a large house that is made of stone with a bay window that stands on the hill surrounded by green grass that reminds him of the sea.


I have a sister, Kathy. APPOSITIVE
My sister, Kathy, is a nurse.
My sister, whose name is Kathy, is a nurse.

The sailor thinks of home, a large stone house with a bay window that stands on the hill surrounded by green grass that reminds him of the sea. TOP QUALITY- NICE STYLE

The sailor thinks of his large stone house on a hill which has a bay window surrounded by green grass that reminds him of the sea. WONDERFUL SENTENCE!