super awesome useful
build sentences- dense, compact sentences that carry a lot of meaning
increase the quality of our sentences
William Strong- professor
his students were not really good writers
very simple sentences, repetitive
sentence combining -beginning level to extremely high level
Kai plays soccer. KERNEL
Avoid repetition
Kai plays soccer, and he plays well. Poor writing
Kai plays soccer well.
He scored a goal.
Kai plays soccer well, and he scored a goal.
Since Kai plays soccer well, he scored a goal.
Kai, who plays soccer well, scored a goal.
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