E12 sent comb

sentence combining- most effective, improve sentence writing- depth, density, complexity, meaningful

carries a lot of  meaning, concise, dense

William Strong-

A. 1.Pet owners upset by soaring veterinary costs can now register for Medipost. KERNEL

2. Medipost is a prepaid insurance plan for cats and dogs.

ONE SOLUTION

Pet owners upset by soaring veterinary costs can now register for Medipost which is a prepaid insurance plan for cats and dogs.

complex sentence – adjective clause

E. 1. Avignon is a walled city of 93,000 inhabitants.

2. Avignon is enclosed by ramparts.

3.The ramparts stretch a circumference of three miles.

Avignon, a walled city of 93,000 inhabitants, is enclosed by ramparts which stretch a circumference of three miles.