INTRO PARA GRABBER?
“dom” is old English word for “law”- the law gives priviledge, but also demands compliance XXX follow it/ obedience
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Thesis- idea
disagree,not so simple
THESIS STATEMENT NOTE: flight can bring some freedom but comes with a price
The pursuit of flight can bring XXX personal/ great/ immense freedom but comes with demands a XXX significant/ steep price.
BODY PARA 1
1.Jonathan Livingston Seagull
-risk of personal danger along with personal freedom
nearly killed himself in dive
-end of chapter, free, but lost family
BODY PARA 2
2.Icarus -free from captivity, but foolishly died
-freedom must be used with caution
-free from some restraints, but still subject to repercussions
of choices, actions
BODY PARA 3
3.Wright bros. Orville and Wilbur
-slaves to dream of flying, all-consuming pursuit, single-minded passion
-no family, children, only airplanes,Wilbur said not time for a wife and an airplane
CONCLUDING PARA- restatement
CLINCHER- What do you think?
Aren’t birds XXX
CLEARLY ORGANIZED- 3 distinct ideas
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