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She had a "good strong figure,
She had a "good strong figure... and a determined face." SHOWS WORDS WERE CUT, STILL HAS BE GRAMMATICAL
She had a "good strong figure... determined face." NO GOOD
She had "never thought of marrying" and was "quite alone in the world".
She had "never thought of marrying... [and was] quite alone in the world".
She had "never thought of marrying... [but did not] regret it".
SQUARE BRACKETS MAKE THE SENTENCE GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT
She was completely unprepared to deal with the children as their needs were "wholly unexpected" by her.
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