Saturday, 12 October 2013

EF6 The Cask of Amontillado- read for Wednesday

THE CASK OF AMONTILLADO
Edgar Allan Poe

The thousand injuries of Fortunato I had borne as I best could; but when he ventured upon insult, I vowed revenge. You, who so well know the nature of my soul, will not suppose, however, that I gave utterance to a threat. At length I would be avenged; this was a point definitively settled — but the very definitiveness with which it was resolved, precluded the idea of risk. I must not only punish, but punish with impunity. A wrong is unredressed when retribution overtakes its redresser. It is equally unredressed when the avenger fails to make himself felt as such to him who has done the wrong.
It must be understood, that neither by word nor deed had I given Fortunato cause to doubt my good will. I continued, as was my wont, to smile in his face, and he did not perceive that my smile now was at the thought of his immolation.
He had a weak point — this Fortunato — although in other regards he was a man to be respected and even feared. He prided himself on his connoisseurship in wine. Few Italians have the true virtuoso spirit. For the most part their enthusiasm is adopted to suit the time and opportunity — to practise imposture upon the British and Austrian millionaires. In painting and gemmary, Fortunato, like his countrymen, was a quack — but in the matter of old wines he was sincere. In this respect I did not differ from him materially: I was skilful in the Italian vintages myself, and bought largely whenever I could.
It was about dusk, one evening during the supreme madness of the carnival season, that I encountered my friend. He accosted me with excessive warmth, for he had been drinking much. The man wore motley. He had on a tight-fitting parti-striped dress, and his head was surmounted by the conical cap and bells. I was so pleased to see him, that I thought I should never have done wringing his hand.
I said to him — “My dear Fortunato, you are luckily met. How remarkably well you are looking to-day! But I have received a pipe of what passes for Amontillado, and I have my doubts.”
“How?” said he. “Amontillado? A pipe? Impossible! And in the middle of the carnival!”
“I have my doubts,” I replied; “and I was silly enough to pay the full Amontillado price without consulting you in the matter. You were not to be found, and I was fearful of losing a bargain.”
“Amontillado!”
“I have my doubts.”
“Amontillado!”
“And I must satisfy them.”
“Amontillado!”
“As you are engaged, I am on my way to Luchesi. If any one has a critical turn, it is he. He will tell me ——”
“Luchesi cannot tell Amontillado from Sherry.”
“And yet some fools will have it that his taste is a match for your own.”
“Come, let us go.”
“Whither?”
“To your vaults.”
“My friend, no; I will not impose upon your good nature. I perceive you have an engagement. Luchesi ——”
“I have no engagement; — come.”
“My friend, no. It is not the engagement, but the severe cold with which I perceive you are afflicted. The vaults are insufferably damp. They are encrusted with nitre.”
“Let us go, nevertheless. The cold is merely nothing. Amontillado! You have been imposed upon. And as for Luchesi, he cannot distinguish Sherry from Amontillado.”
Thus speaking, Fortunato possessed himself of my arm. Putting on a mask of black silk, and drawing a roquelaire closely about my person, I suffered him to hurry me to my palazzo.
There were no attendants at home; they had absconded to make merry in honor of the time. I had told them that I should not return until the morning, and had given them explicit orders not to stir from the house. These orders were sufficient, I well knew, to insure their immediate disappearance, one and all, as soon as my back was turned.
I took from their sconces two flambeaux, and giving one to Fortunato, bowed him through several suites of rooms to the archway that led into the vaults. I passed down a long and winding staircase, requesting him to be cautious as he followed. We came at length to the foot of the descent, and stood together on the damp ground of the catacombs of the Montresors.
The gait of my friend was unsteady, and the bells upon his cap jingled as he strode.
“The pipe,” said he.
“It is farther on,” said I; “but observe the white web-work which gleams from these cavern walls.”
He turned towards me, and looked into my eyes with two filmy orbs that distilled the rheum of intoxication.
“Nitre?” he asked, at length.
“Nitre,” I replied. “How long have you had that cough?”
“Ugh! ugh! ugh! — ugh! ugh! ugh! — ugh! ugh! ugh! — ugh! ugh! ugh! — ugh! ugh! ugh!”
My poor friend found it impossible to reply for many minutes.
“It is nothing,” he said, at last.
“Come,” I said, with decision, “we will go back; your health is precious. You are rich, respected, admired, beloved; you are happy, as once I was. You are a man to be missed. For me it is no matter. We will go back; you will be ill, and I cannot be responsible. Besides, there is Luchesi ——”
“Enough,” he said; “the cough is a mere nothing; it will not kill me. I shall not die of a cough.”
“True — true,” I replied; “and, indeed, I had no intention of alarming you unnecessarily — but you should use all proper caution. A draught of this Medoc will defend us from the damps.”
Here I knocked off the neck of a bottle which I drew from a long row of its fellows that lay upon the mould.
“Drink,” I said, presenting him the wine.
He raised it to his lips with a leer. He paused and nodded to me familiarly, while his bells jingled.
“I drink,” he said, “to the buried that repose around us.”
“And I to your long life.”
He again took my arm, and we proceeded.
“These vaults,” he said, “are extensive.”
“The Montresors,” I replied, “were a great and numerous family.”
“I forget your arms.”
“A huge human foot d‘or, in a field azure; the foot crushes a serpent rampant whose fangs are imbedded in the heel.”
“And the motto?”
“Nemo me impune lacessit.”
“Good!” he said.
The wine sparkled in his eyes and the bells jingled. My own fancy grew warm with the Medoc. We had passed through walls of piled bones, with casks and puncheons intermingling, into the inmost recesses of the catacombs. I paused again, and this time I made bold to seize Fortunato by an arm above the elbow.
“The nitre!” I said: “see, it increases. It hangs like moss upon the vaults. We are below the river‘s bed. The drops of moisture trickle among the bones. Come, we will go back ere it is too late. Your cough ——”
“It is nothing,” he said; “let us go on. But first, another draught of the Medoc.”
I broke and reached him a flacon of De GrĂ¢ve. He emptied it at a breath. His eyes flashed with a fierce light. He laughed and threw the bottle upwards with a gesticulation I did not understand.
I looked at him in surprise. He repeated the movement — a grotesque one.
“You do not comprehend?” he said.
“Not I,” I replied.
“Then you are not of the brotherhood.”
“How?”
“You are not of the masons.”
“Yes, yes,” I said, “yes, yes.”
“You? Impossible! A mason?”
“A mason,” I replied.
“A sign,” he said.
“It is this,” I answered, producing a trowel from beneath the folds of my roquelaire.
“You jest,” he exclaimed, recoiling a few paces. “But let us proceed to the Amontillado.”
“Be it so,” I said, replacing the tool beneath the cloak, and again offering him my arm. He leaned upon it heavily. We continued our route in search of the Amontillado. We passed through a range of low arches, descended, passed on, and descending again, arrived at a deep crypt, in which the foulness of the air caused our flambeaux rather to glow than flame.
At the most remote end of the crypt there appeared another less spacious. Its walls had been lined with human remains, piled to the vault overhead, in the fashion of the great catacombs of Paris. Three sides of this interior crypt were still ornamented in this manner. From the fourth the bones had been thrown down, and lay promiscuously upon the earth, forming at one point a mound of some size. Within the wall thus exposed by the displacing of the bones, we perceived a still interior recess, in depth about four feet, in width three, in height six or seven. It seemed to have been constructed for no especial use in itself, but formed merely the interval between two of the colossal supports of the roof of the catacombs, and was backed by one of their circumscribing walls of solid granite.
It was in vain that Fortunato, uplifting his dull torch, endeavored to pry into the depths of the recess. Its termination the feeble light did not enable us to see.
“Proceed,” I said; “herein is the Amontillado. As for Luchesi ——”
“He is an ignoramus,” interrupted my friend, as he stepped unsteadily forward, while I followed immediately at his heels. In an instant he had reached the extremity of the niche, and finding his progress arrested by the rock, stood stupidly bewildered. A moment more and I had fettered him to the granite. In its surface were two iron staples, distant from each other about two feet, horizontally. From one of these depended a short chain, from the other a padlock. Throwing the links about his waist, it was but the work of a few seconds to secure it. He was too much astounded to resist. Withdrawing the key I stepped back from the recess.
“Pass your hand,” I said, “over the wall; you cannot help feeling the nitre. Indeed it is very damp. Once more let me implore you to return. No? Then I must positively leave you. But I must first render you all the little attentions in my power.”
“The Amontillado!” ejaculated my friend, not yet recovered from his astonishment.
“True,” I replied; “the Amontillado.”
As I said these words I busied myself among the pile of bones of which I have before spoken. Throwing them aside, I soon uncovered a quantity of building stone and mortar. With these materials and with the aid of my trowel, I began vigorously to wall up the entrance of the niche.
I had scarcely laid the first tier of my masonry when I discovered that the intoxication of Fortunato had in a great measure worn off. The earliest indication I had of this was a low moaning cry from the depth of the recess. It was not the cry of a drunken man. There was then a long and obstinate silence. I laid the second tier, and the third, and the fourth; and then I heard the furious vibrations of the chain. The noise lasted for several minutes, during which, that I might hearken to it with the more satisfaction, I ceased my labors and sat down upon the bones. When at last the clanking subsided, I resumed the trowel, and finished without interruption the fifth, the sixth, and the seventh tier. The wall was now nearly upon a level with my breast. I again paused, and holding the flambeaux over the mason-work, threw a few feeble rays upon the figure within.
A succession of loud and shrill screams, bursting suddenly from the throat of the chained form, seemed to thrust me violently back. For a brief moment I hesitated — I trembled. Unsheathing my rapier, I began to grope with it about the recess: but the thought of an instant reassured me. I placed my hand upon the solid fabric of the catacombs, and felt satisfied. I reapproached the wall. I replied to the yells of him who clamored. I re-echoed — I aided — I surpassed them in volume and in strength. I did this, and the clamorer grew still.
It was now midnight, and my task was drawing to a close. I had completed the eighth, the ninth, and the tenth tier. I had finished a portion of the last and the eleventh; there remained but a single stone to be fitted and plastered in. I struggled with its weight; I placed it partially in its destined position. But now there came from out the niche a low laugh that erected the hairs upon my head. It was succeeded by a sad voice, which I had difficulty in recognising as that of the noble Fortunato. The voice said —
“Ha! ha! ha! — he! he! — a very good joke indeed — an excellent jest. We will have many a rich laugh about it at the palazzo — he! he! he! — over our wine — he! he! he!”
“The Amontillado!” I said.
“He! he! he! — he! he! he! — yes, the Amontillado. But is it not getting late? Will not they be awaiting us at the palazzo, the Lady Fortunato and the rest? Let us be gone.”
“Yes,” I said, “let us be gone.”
“For the love of God, Montressor!”
“Yes,” I said, “for the love of God!”
But to these words I hearkened in vain for a reply. I grew impatient.  I called aloud — “Fortunato!”
No answer. I called again —
“Fortunato!”
No answer still. I thrust a torch through the remaining aperture and let it fall within. There came forth in return only a jingling of the bells. My heart grew sick — on account of the dampness of the catacombs. I hastened to make an end of my labor. I forced the last stone into its position; I plastered it up. Against the new masonry I re-erected the old rampart of bones. For the half of a century no mortal has disturbed them. In pace requiescat!



“The Cask of Amontillado”
Group Discussion Questions

1. What do you think Fortunato did to cause Montresor to seek revenge?
2. How does Fortunato speak to Montresor?  Is he friendly?
3. What ploys does Montresor use to lure Fortunato down into the crypt?
4. What are some examples of irony in the way Montresor speaks to Fortunato?
5. What is the significance of Montresor's family motto: Nemo me impune lacessit (No one attacks me with impunity)?
6. Why does Montresor stop and call out Fortunato's name before placing the final brick?

Wednesday, 9 October 2013

EF6 Sent comb 4

1.    I disagree with certain people who prefer country life to city life.
2.    Country life is quieter and slower-paced; however, it is also isolated and boring.
3.    City life is busy, exciting, and unpredictable.
4.    You never get bored because there is always something to do.
5.    Also, you never know who you will meet or what will happen next.
6.    People from all over come to the city to shop, visit family and friends, and do business.
7.    The city provides entertainment and education for young and old people.

8.    I believe something which is that the city is the best place to raise a family.

Tuesday, 8 October 2013

EF6 sentence combining #3

1.     I have never understood  a certain proverb that says, “You cannot have your cake and eat it, too.”
2.     My mother once interpreted it for me, and she told me that it meant you cannot have everything.
My mother once interpreted it for me and told me that it meant you cannot have everything.
My mother once interpreted it for me, saying that it meant you cannot have everything.
My mother once interpreted it for me as meaning you cannot have everything.
3.     For example, it is impossible to find a job that pays well, interests you all the time, and challenges you every day.
4.     That may be true, but I have often wondered why it has to be that way.
That may be true, but I have often wondered, “Why does it have to be that way?”
That may be true; nevertheless/ however, I have often wondered why it has to be that way.
5.     Why is it impossible to have everything and to be completely satisfied?
STYLE
6.     If you think about the illustration of the cake, it does not make sense.
The illustration of the cake doesn’t make sense if you think about it.
7.     Who would make a cake and not enjoy eating it afterwards?
8.     There is definitely something wrong with the illustration of the cake if you consider it carefully.
If you consider the illustration of the cake carefully, there is definitely something wrong.
BAD STYLE- begin a sentence with a long dependent clause.

I am wearing a sweater because it is cold.
Because it is cold, I am wearing a sweater.
STYLE- consistent

2+2=5
2+2=4

For example, …
To illustrate, …
For instance, …
Allow me to illustrate.
Let me give an example.

LATIN
etc. et cetera “and others” and so on
e.g examplis gratia “for example”
i.e. id est “that is”

He plays soccer, basketball, football, etc.
He plays soccer, basketball, and football.
FINAL COMMA OPTIONAL- Oxford comma
She plays lots of sports (e.g. soccer, football, basketball).

am ante meridian
pm post meridian

RSVP respondez sil vous plait
ASAP as soon as possible
RIP rest in peace

INFORMAL
g2g
lol
fomalol
plz

l8r sk8r

EF3 sentence exercises

1.     I ate a big lunch before I went for a long walk.
After I went for a long walk, I ate a big lunch.
I ate a big lunch because/ so that I went for a long walk.
I go for a long walk every time I eat a big brunch.
I went for a long walk even though I ate a big lunch.
I will go for a long walk even if I eat a big lunch.
adverb cl- future, use present tense
I will go for a bike ride tomorrow if it will be is sunny.
If it will rain rains, I will stay home.
If it doesn’t rain, let’s go swimming tomorrow.
2.     Don played with the children while Mary took the dog for a walk.
While Don played with the children, Mary took the dog for a walk.
Mary took the dog for a walk when/ as soon as she got home.
3.     It was a beautiful, sunny afternoon, so they decided to go shopping.
It was a beautiful, sunny afternoon so that they decided to go shopping.
Since/ Because it was a beautiful, sunny afternoon, they decided to go shopping.
4.     He turned off the television because the TV show was boring.
The TV show was boring, so he turned off the television.
He turned off the television after the TV show was finished.
5.     He turned off the television although/ even though the TV show was very exciting.
Although/ even though the TV show was very exciting, he turned off the television.
Even if the TV show is very exciting, he will turn off the television.
Even though The TV show was very exciting, but he turned off the television.
He turned off the exciting TV show for some reasons.
6.     Jack was reading the newspaper when Ann came
home at 6 o’clock.
7.     Tom had no money, so Jack gave him $10.
Jack gave Tom ten dollars because he had no money.
Jack gave ten dollars to Tom because Tom had no money.
Jack gave Tom money because he had none.  He was happy when he gave him some, but he didn’t pay him back.
PRONOUNS???

8.     While Kelley and Tim ate supper, they listened to music to the radio.
9.     If we want to be on time, we must leave right now.
We want to be on time, so we must leave right now.
We want to be on time so that we must leave right now.
10. She was interrupted by a loud noise as/ when/ just as/ as soon as/ after she began to speak to the group.
11. We put on our best clothes before we went to the party.
We went to the party, so we put on our best clothes.
We will put on our best clothes before we go to the party.
We put on our best clothes because we went to the party.
**We put on our best clothes; afterwards, we went to the party.
**We went to the party after we put on our best clothes.
12. Even though Karen gets a pay cheque, she won’t be able to buy groceries.
Karen gets a pay cheque, but she won’t be able to buy groceries.
Karen won’t be able to buy groceries before she gets a pay cheque.
13. Whenever/ Every time I look at my mother’s photograph, I feel homesick.
When I feel homesick, I look at my mother’s photograph/ picture/ ph

Friday, 4 October 2013

EF3 Most commonly used verbs in English

31 Most Commonly Used Verbs in English




1.     be
2.     have
3.     do
4.     eat
5.     sleep
6.     drink
7.     put
8.     keep
9.     run
10.                        walk
11.                        say
12.                        get
13.                        make
14.                        go
15.                        know
16.                        take
17.                        see
18.                        come
19.                        think
20.                        look
21.                        want
22.                        give
23.                        use
24.                        find
25.                        tell
26.                        ask
27.                        work
28.                        seem
29.                        feel
30.                        try
31.                        leave




From Wikipedia.com

Wednesday, 2 October 2013

EF3 some sentence combining solutions

1. Jim and Ann like pizza.
Jim and Ann both like pizza.
Both Jim and Ann like pizza.
Jim likes pizza. Also, Ann likes pizza.
Jim likes pizza; also, Ann likes pizza.

CHOICE- VARIETY

2. Abby, Luis and Carl play soccer every weekend.
3. The bus and the Skytrain arrived late because of the snow.
Because of the snow, the bus and the Skytrain both arrived late.
The bus and the Skytrain were/came late because of the snow.
Both were late because of the snow.
4. Is the Jeep or the Honda on sale?
Are the Jeep and the Honda on sale?
5. Kam Wong, Sara Smith, Pam Singh, and Ron Adams were at the party.
Kam Wong and Sara Smith were at the party.  Also, Pam Singh and Ron Adams were there.
STYLE


Monday, 30 September 2013

EF6 Sentence Combining Ex 69

Exercise 69
1. Rhonda’s sister is a singer; in fact, she sang the national anthem at the game last night. COMPOUND
Rhonda’s sister who is a singer sang the national anthem at the game last night. ADJ CL
Rhonda’s sister is a singer who sang the national anthem at the game last night. ADJ CL
The singer who sang the national anthem at the game last night is Rhonda’s sister. ADJ CL
ADJ CL
Because Rhonda’s sister is a singer, she sang the national anthem at the game last night. ADV CL
We heard that Rhonda’s sister who sang the national anthem at the game last night is a fabulous singer. N CL
5. Even though the gravy is dark, it tastes good. ADV CL
The dark gravy tastes good. SIMP
The gravy is dark, but it tastes good. COMPOUND
The gravy that tastes good is dark. ADJ CL
The gravy that is dark is tastes good. ADJ CL
I pray that the dark gravy tastes good. N CL

10. Kirsten couldn’t afford a tutor, so she worked extra hard and succeeded at her studies. COMPOUND
Although Kirsten couldn’t afford a tutor, she succeeded at her studies because she worked extra hard. COMPOUND COMPLEX -ADV
I know that Kirsten couldn’t afford a tutor; however, she succeeded at her studies because she worked extra hard. COMPOUND COMPLEX-N & ADV

MODELS- FRAMEWORK- IKEA sentences

2. The dog and the two cats are lying together and enjoying the warmth of the sun. SIMPLE
The dog and the two cats that are lying together are enjoying the warmth of the sun.
The dog and the two cats are lying together because they are enjoying the warmth of the sun.
The dog and the two cats are lying together; at the same time, they are enjoying the warmth of the sun.

CHOICE, VARIETY