Friday, 3 March 2023

EF67 Class 18- complex sentences- adverb clauses, Malala

 

Good morning, everyone.

We will get started at 9:15.

REMINDER: haleyshec.blogspot.com

 

Next Friday is the last day before Spring Break- I would like to have the sentence work done by then.

 

Four weeks completed.

Next week is our last week before Spring Break.

 

Assessments so far:

Quiz#1

Test #1

Test #2

HW- checkmarks

RW Bonus- a few

Spoken x/10

NEXT WEEK – Quiz#2, Quiz#3(maybe), Test#3

 

I will talking to you each about midterm recommendations in the next week or two.

midterm recommendations – based on snapshot of  how you doing so far

 

Quarter 4 (April-June) Tentatively, I be teaching the following:

Period 1 EF1/2

Period 2 EF 6/7

**NOTE: If you stay with me next term for EF67, the course will be very much the same. The grammar, sentence work and quizzes will be very similar. The stories, readings, and tests will be different.

If you are happy about getting a lot of repetition, great.

If you want to something new and fresh, choose a different class.

 

 

 

THEME: Powerful women fighting for their rights.

 

Today’s agenda

·      Begin complex sentences- adverb clauses

·      Continue “Malala Yousafzai”

·      HW OPTIONAL

          Writing – 2 BONUS PTS

          PARAGRAPH       “What can a teacher do help a student who has

low self-confidence?”

          Email it to me by Sunday or pass it in first thing Monday

 

 

IDIOMS

hit the books – study

hit the road- leave

hit the sack, hit the hay – sleep

hit the ground running – begin your day/ a new job with full energy

hit the roof- get very angry

hit the nail on the head- exactly right  “You hit the nail on the head.”

 

 

Monday

·      Test#3- paragraph related to ideas coming “Malala Yousafzai”

·      Continue complex sentences- adverb clauses

 

Tuesday

 

Wednesday

·      Quiz #2- adverb clauses

·      Begin noun clauses

 

COMPLEX SENTENCES- Adverb clauses

 

REVIEW OF SENTENCE STYLES

You can practice these every day. You will be amazed at how good you will get at sentence writing in six months.

 

*SIMPLE – 1 main/independent clause

SV   SSV   SVV  SSVV   Imperative   Interrogative

 

*COMPOUND     , SOBA     ;     ; TRANS,

2 main clauses/independent clauses joined together

1.    , FANBOYS , SOBA

2.    ; semicolon

3.    ; TRANS,   ; moreover,

 

*COMPLEX - 1 main clause and 1 subordinate clause

- adverb clauses

- noun clauses NEXT WEEK

- adjective clauses AFTER SPRING BREAK

 

 

COMPLEX SENTENCES=       

 

simple sentence + subordinate clause (dependent clause)

main clause + subordinate clause

main clause = independent clause

 

-independent-

independent person- by yourself, support yourself, don’t need help, buy your own groceries, cook your own food, do your own laundry

 

-dependent person – needs help, can’t stand by yourself, need support, cook for them, drive them around

independent clause- a group of words with SV, is a simple sentence

dependent clause- a group of words with SV, not a sentence

 

The sky is blue. SIMPLE, INDEPENDENT CLAUSE

 

although it is chilly. DEPENDENT CLAUSE, SENTENCE FRAGMENT

 

The sky is blue. Although it is chilly. XXX

The sky is blue although it is chilly. COMPLEX- ADVERB CLAUSE

 

 

COMPLEX SENTENCE- ADVERB CLAUSES

- because when if (most commonly used)

 

 

because – give a reason

Joan is happy today. Her son is visiting her. Two main clauses. Two simple sentences.

 

Turn one of the main clauses into a subordinate clause. +because

1.    main clause + adverb clause

Jun is happy today because her son is visiting her.

Jun is happy because her son is visiting her today.

 

Jun is happy today. Her son is visiting her. 2 SIMPLES

Jun is happy today because her son is visiting her. 1 COMPLEX, ADV CL

NOTE: no comma before because

 

2.    adverb clause, + main clause 

Because Jun’s son is visiting her, she is happy today.

Because Jun’s son is visiting her today, she is happy.

NOTE: need a comma

 

Either way is good. It is your choice.

 

COMMON ERROR:

Jun is happy, because her son is visiting her today. XXX

Small error with the comma. No big deal.

 

** OLD-FASHIONED RULE-   Don’t start your sentences with ‘because’.

It’s fine. I do. We can ignore this rule.

 

Because its snowing, some people are a little late. OK

Because its snowing – makes this the focus of the sentence

 

Some people are a little late because its snowy. Alternative

Some people are a little late – makes this the focus of the sentence

 

Either way is fine. It’s your choice. This is more about style and intention than grammar.

 

COOMON ERROR

Some people are a little late, because its snowy. XXX

Don’t put a comma before ‘because’. You will see people do it, but it isn’t the best choice. Keep your school writing at a more formal level.

This is a stylistic choice concerning your writing style.

stylistic(adj) style(n)

 

DISCLAIMER: My writing and speaking style tends to be more formal than many. I aim to keep my writing and speaking style formal especially for work, school, and business. I take a professional tone in a professional situation.

Other people are much more casual in their language usage.

You can decide what level of formality is appropriate for any situation that you are in.

 

MAIN THING ABOUT COMMAS WITH ADVERB CLAUSES:

The baby is crying because she is tired. NO COMMA

Because the baby is tired, she is crying. COMMA

 

MAIN CLAUSE (SIMPLE SENTENCE) + ADVERB CLAUSE

MAIN CL + ADVERB CL = COMPLEX SENTENCE

 

ADVICE: If you do it like that, it will always work. Everything will be ok

 

 

 

*when - time

1.    main clause + adverb clause

My dog gets up when I get up. no comma

2.    adverb clause, + main clause 

When I get up, my dog gets up. comma

Call your sister when you get home.

When you get home, call your sister.

SAME MEANING- your choice

 

DIFFERENCE when / while

 

When Harim got up this morning, she was surprised to see snow on the ground.

Harim was surprised to see snow on the ground when she got up this morning.

 

*when – same time, pretty much the same time

*after, before – not the same time

 

Harim was surprised to see snow on the ground after/when she got up this morning.

 

*when – one time, once

*whenever- everytime, happens many times

Whenever Butter has to pee, he rings a bell on the door.

My neighbour’s dog escapes whenever they let it out in the backyard.

 

Whenever it rains, Mei takes an umbrella.

Mei uses an umbrella whenever it rains.

 

Mary gets nervous when she has a test. SOUNDS OK

Mary gets nervous whenever she has a test. SOUNDS BETTER

Whenever Jay watches scary movies, he has nightmares.

 

night

mare- horse

Old superstition- People used to believe that hearing a horse running at night was bad luck.

 

 

*if- maybe yes, maybe no, don’t know, not decided

1.    main clause + adverb clause

Maria should start saving her money if she wants to buy that expensive dress. no comma

2.    adverb clause, + main clause 

If Maria wants to buy that expensive dress, she should start saving her money. comma

Call me if you want to go for a hike.

If there is heavy snow, listen to the radio regarding school cancellations.

Listen to the radio. imperative (simple sentence)

Close the door if we are being too noisy.

Practice everyday if you want to get better at jujitsu.

 

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Martial Arts – judo, karate, aikido, jiujitsu, taekwondo

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Model for adverb clauses:

Main clause adverb clause.

Adverb clause,  main clause.

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**** YOUR CHOICE. You should be able to do it both ways. GOAL! ****

 

 

‘if’ – past, present, future

My sister would play with her dolls if she was bored. past

Let’s grab some coffee if you are free now. present

I will call you if I need a lift to the airport. future

 

EXAMPLES:

You should call your sister if you want a ride from the airport.

If you want a ride from the airport, you should call your sister.

 

You should call your sister, if you want a ride from the airport. XXX punc

-small error, does not impede understanding, still not right

 

IMPERATIVE: Call your sister.

Call your sister if you want to get a ride.

If you want to get a ride, call your sister.

 

REVIEW -

COMPOUND

2 independent clauses put together

COMPLEX

1 independent clause and 1 dependent clause put together

 

COMPOUND

We are going camping this weekend, so we have to pack our gear.

 

COMPLEX

We have to pack our gear because we are going camping this weekend.

Because we are going camping this weekend, we have to pack our gear.

 

*Same information- different sentence styles- compound and complex

We are going camping this weekend, so we have to pack our gear.

We have to pack our gear because we are going camping this weekend.

 

If you really want to use a comma in the middle of the sentence, put the adverb clause first, or use a compound sentence.

e.g. Jan is late because it is snowing.

Because it is snowing, Jan is late. COMPLEX- adverb clause

It is snowing, so Jan is late. COMPOUND , SOBA

 

 

GOOD WORDS FOR ADVERB CLAUSES

* Adverbial conjunctions (adverb clause words)

Learning these will expand your ability to express your thoughts more clearly and precisely in English.

 

** When you learn these 24 words, you will be a rock star in your English class!

 

time-                     after, before, ever since, since, until, when, whenever,

while

place-                   wherever

condition -          if, even if, provided that, unless

manner-               as, as if, though, although, even though, so ... that

cause-                   because, since

purpose-              in order that, in order to, so that,

 

CONTINUE MONDAY

 

“Malala Yousafzai”

Reading

1.activist(person) action, active- someone who works to improve a situation

2.drastically- big change Food prices have gone up drastically in the past two years.

positive – dramatically  I have improved my English skills dramatically.

 

5.amnesia- can’t remember

 

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