Friday, 31 March 2023

EF34 Class 28 - narrative writing

  

EF3/4

 

Today’s agenda-

·      Begin review of verb tenses

·      Continue narrative paragraphs

·      Listening

 

Monday

·      Continue narrative paragraphs

Paragraph tomorrow

 

Tuesday

·      Test#3 – narrrative paragraph

 

 

 

Review of verb tenses

Simple present – always, habit, usual, everyday, true, state of being

Simple past

Simple future

 

*simple present

I take a shower everyday. I usually take a shower in the morning.

I go to work in the evenings six days a week.

I drink 3-4 glasses of water every day.

Every year, I throw/have a birthday party for my son.

Dogs are animals. truth, fact

The capital of Eritria is Asmara.

This course has three weeks left.

She is very tall. She is a happy person.

He is from Iran.

*simple past- one event in the past

She moved/ immigrated/ came to Canada in 2017.

Yesterday, I was busy with work.   Yesterday, I was busy working.

I was born on August 19th. passiv voice

Yesterday, she was very happy because she saw a pretty girl.

My friend went to the hospital last night because she had a problem with one of her eyes.

Last night, I had a crick in my neck.

 

buy   bought

drive   drove

see   saw

learn   learned

eat   ate

 

*simple future

will   OR   be going to

will – decide right now

be going to – already decided

I am going to get a bus and the Canada Line to the airport.

She will get a coffee. I will get a tea, please.

 

simple present

simple past

simple future

 

Let’s take a few minutes and write some sentences from our own imagination that use these three tenses.

 

I visited my friend last night.

I visited my friend yesterday evening.

 

 

I am going to Hong Kong next month.

Every day, she drinks green tea in the morning.

He has to do his taxes by April 30th.

My son will play Fortnite with his friends.

My son and his friends will play Fortnite together.

 

I helped my mom to clean up the kitchen.

I am going to study business management at ABC School next year.

I am going to study business management in/from September.

I am going to study business management in the future.

I am going to study business management whenever I finish high school.

I will/am going to have a test next Tuesday. sounds more natural

 

Practice. Practice.

simple present

simple past

simple future

 

 

Fun listening to a nice song.

Baby Beluga-

Misty- jazz song, sung by Ella Fitgerald

 

violins begin to play

leading me on

notice how hopelessly I’m lost

following

on my own

wander

wonder

 

Ella Fitzgerald – famous jazz singer

 

 

simple present

simple past

simple future

 

 

 

 

 

Narrative writing – tell a story

 

Structure of a narrative paragraph

 

Topic sentence- usually the first sentence , addresses the question, responds to the question, shows the reader what the paragraph is about

 

Supporting sentences- tell the story, step by step, chronological, time-order

 

Concluding sentence- wraps up the paragraph, ends the paragraph

(80-120 words)

 

EXAMPLE QUESTION:

Write about a scary experience when you were a kid.

 

Topic Sentence

          The time I got lost when I was a kid was very scary.

 

Supporting sentences- tell the story in 5-7 sentences

I remember that I was out shopping with my mother. She was looking at clothes, and I wandered away. I saw her across the store and walked over to her. When I got next to her, I realized that this person was not my mother. It was a stranger.  KEEP TELLING THE STORY TO THE END

 

Concluding sentence

That was a scary moment for me.

 

 ROUGH COPY

The time I got lost when I was a kid was very scary. I remember that I was out shopping with my mother. She was looking at clothes, and I wandered away. I saw her across the store and walked over to her. When I got next to her, I realized that this person was not my mother. It was a stranger. I ran around the store yelling for her. She heard me and came right over. She had been looking for me, too. When my mother finally found me, she looked very relieved. My fear left me as she took my hand and we left the store together. That was a scary moment for me and for her.

 

Homework. Choose one:

“What is your dream for the future?”

“What was a scary moment that happened to you?”

“What did you do on your first day in Canada?”

 

- topic sentence

- supporting sentences- 5-7 sentences tell the story

-concluding sentence

(80-120 ww)

 

Email it to me by Sunday night. We can look at them together Monday in class. The stories will be anonymous.

 

“In Iran, I lived in a small town.”

I will change it, or you change it: “In ABC Land, I lived in a small town.”

 

 

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EF67 Class 28- Latin roots, adjective clauses

 

Good morning, everyone.

We will get started at 9:15.

 

Today’s agenda

·      Continue adjective clauses

Quiz Monday

·      Listening

·      Test- paragraph- advice column

 

 

Monday

·      Quiz-adjective clauses

·      Begin sentence combining

·      Begin business letters

 

Tuesday

·      sentence combining

·      Business letters

 

Wednesday

·      sentence combining

·      Business letters

 

Thursday

·      Easter lecture

 

Friday

·      Good Friday

·      NO SCHOOL

 

Monday

·      Easter Monday

·      NO SCHOOL

 

 

 

Latin words=

medical specialists

cardiologist – heart specialist

oncologist- cancer specialist

nephrologist- kidney specialist

gynocologist- women’s reproduction specialist

psychiatrist- mental health

phlebotomist- specializes in taking blood

dermatolist- skin specialist

neorologist- brain specialist

biopsy- take a piece of you to test

 

dentist- tooth specialist

kinesiologist- movement

 

physiologist- movement

hermatologist- blood cells and bone marrow

pediatrician – specializes in children and babies

 

audiologist- specializes in hearing

 

English – three main sources- Latin, Greek, Anglosaxon

 

Latin roots

*audio – sound

audience, auditorium-place to listen,

rium- room

audition- for a play, TV, movie, for an actor

 

aquarium aqua(water)

 

interview – job

inter- between

international

excellent interpersonal skills- resume, job description

 

photograph- photo-light   graph-picture

phonograph- phono-sound

telegraph – tele- across a distance, faw away

telephone- sound across a distance

television- seeing across a distance

fax- facsimile – likeness, close copy

telekinesis- movement over a distance

kinetic- movement  kinesiologist- joint specialist

 

photocopy machine

 

inventor of liquid paper, inventor of post-it notes

 

Latin roots

 

 

 

Preparing for the quiz

who that which

Vocab. to review

1.    alley

2.    slim

3.    upset

4.    upgrade

5.    roam

6.    struggle

7.    goofy

8.    cattle

9.    swell

10.                       section

 

 

Test#4

Paragraph of 150-200 words.

Take out your advice question.

Write a paragraph givng advice to the writer.

Label your paragraph A, B, C...

Thursday, 30 March 2023

EF34 Class 27- adjective clauses, narrative writing, vocab

 

 

EF3/4

 

Today’s agenda-

·      Finish work on adjective clause- Go over your examples from homework

·      Begin narrative paragraph

·      Listening

 

Friday

·      Begin review of verb tenses

·      Continue narrative paragraphs

 

Monday

·      Continue narrative paragraphs

Paragraph tomorrow

 

Tuesday

·      Test#3 – narrrative paragraph

 

 

Adjective clauses

who - people

that – things, animals

which- special things, unique things

 

These are the sentences that you sent me for homework:

 

1.    Jie who wants to speak English in class that is hard. XXX

Jie who wants to speak English in class that is hard.

Jie who wants to speak English in class is trying/tries to improve his English.

 

2.    Jasmir who went to the store to get milk that was delicious. XXX

Jasmir went to the store to get milk that was delicious.

Review and practice.

 

3.    Mark who has never visited Korea Which is pretty. XXX

Mark has never visited Korea which is pretty.

 

4.    Mark who is looking at the pictures online has never visited Beijing.

5.    Mark has never visited Beijing which is a big and beautiful city in China.

6.    Jie who slept didn't do her homework.

7.    Jie didn't do her homework that was too hard for her.

8.    Sally, who was not very hungry and ate a lot of food yesterday who still felt full XXX

9.    Sally, who was not very hungry and ate a lot of food yesterday, still felt full.

 

10.                       Arleen who could not speak French who just spoke English who only read English books

Arleen who could not speak French just spoke English.

 

11.                       Jasmir, who went to the store to get milk, felt the milk was very delicious. that was good health

12.                       Lily who didn't do her homework who was tired who felt uncomfortable

Lily who didn't do her homework was tired.

 

13.                       The little boy who cry cried/was crying did not want to go to school.

 

14.                       Sarah who wanted to find a new job to improve her English studied hard.

15.                       Let’s go to the swimming pool that is big.

16.                       I didn’t do my homework that was hard.

17.                       The police arrested the guy who hit my car.

18.                       I like people who are on time.

19.                       Jie who is my classmate wants to speak English in the class.

20.                       Jasmir went to the store to get milk that was skim milk.

21.                       Mark has never visited Korea which is his father's home country.

Ok start. Not bad. You have to practice a lot.

These are harder than the other kinds of sentences that we have been learning.

 

***

Every year, from mid-November to the end of January (Quarter 2), I do a sentence structure tutorial on Zoom. It is Tuesday nights from 5-6PM.

This is for students at English Foundations 6-English 12 level.

I will post the Zoom link on my blog in early November.

You are welcome to join. You do not have to register. You can just attend.

***

 

 

Paragraph Writing

Types of paragraphs:

1.narrative-tell a personal story, something that happened to you

2.descriptive- describe some topic, looks, sounds, tastes

3.process- teach how to do something

4.persuasive- give your opinion on a topic

 

 

narrative writing – telling a story

narrative paragraph – tells a short personal story

personal story – a story from your life

 

- In EF34, a paragraph is about 80-150 words.

- In EF56, a paragraph is about 150-200 words.

 

narrative (adj)

narrate (v) – to tell a story

narrator (noun) – a person who tells a story

 

narrative writing- often first-person narration “I” “my” “me”

usually a personal story, writing about your life and your experiences

 

GOOD TOPICS

“What did you do on your first day in Canada?”

“Tell a funny/scary thing that happened to you when you were a kid.”

 

narration tells a story and can illustrate a point

 

 

Point of View in Narrative Essays

-you tell your own story - first-person “I” “me” “my”

-you tell somebody else’s story- third-person “she” “her”

 

In this class, you choose either one, but first person “I” is usually easier.

 

Do you like to read or listen to stories?

Talk about sources of great narrative stories

Books - Chicken Soup for the Soul– People telling interesting stories from their lives.

-very short stories

-mostly happy stories, feel-good stories

This would a good book to do some reading in English.

library VPL Vancouver Public Library, http://www.vpl.ca/

 

listening practice

-podcasts – radio show, over the internet, download podcasts to your phone, for example

 

-You have to get an app to listen to podcasts. FREE APPS – e.g Overcast

seacrh for podcast apps

 

The Moth Podcast – people telling big stories from their lives – funny, serious, sad, powerful  HIGHER LEVEL ENGLISH!

 

There are podcasts for any interest. You can find some great stuff to listen to.

e.g.

-News CBC, BBC

-sports- all sports

-music-

-language lessons- Japanese, English “Bob’s English Lessons”

-ghost stories

-psychology

-business

 

Reading in English: intermediate English learners- Read children’s books!

For EF56 – Read Young Adult novels. Books for teenagers

Read magazines. VPL – magazies on science, food, cooking, travel, sports, fashion, music, current events

No sometimes! Go today and grab a magazine or a book. Go to a coffee shop and relax and read for half an hour.

 

 

 

 

Word List 1.3 and 1.4

Groups of two or three.

pronunciation- listening

CHOICE:

EASIER Pick a word and say it out loud.

HARDER Pick a word and put it into a sentence.

 

depth(n)

She is quiet but is very deep. She has a lot of depth.

IDIOM Still waters run deep. Quiet people are often deep thinkers.

 

 

 

 

EF67 Class 27- adjective clauses, advice

 

Good morning, everyone.

We will get started at 9:15.

 

Today’s agenda

·      Continue adjective clauses- your examples from homework

·      Continue advice columnist

Talking and reading exercise- Advice Columnist / Agony Aunt- giving advice

Opportunity to express your advice. BONUS PTS

·      Harder vocab

 

Friday

·      Test- paragraph- advice column

·      Continue adjective clauses

Quiz Monday

·      Listening

 

Monday

·      Quiz-adjective clauses

·      Begin sentence combining

·      Begin business letters

 

Tuesday

·      sentence combining

·      Business letters

 

Wednesday

·      sentence combining

·      Business letters

 

Thursday

·      Easter lecture

 

Friday

·      Good Friday

·      NO SCHOOL

 

Monday

·      Easter Monday

·      NO SCHOOL

 

 

These are the examples you sent me for homework.

 

1.    The cookies (that) she baked was were delicious. SV AGR

subject verb agreement

2.    He will always remember the day when we met/ that we met.

3.    Do you know the woman whose picture was in the newspaper?

whose – possession, own something

The boy whose dog ran away felt worried.

 

4.    The car (that) we drive is leased. object pronoun

5.    I love the chicken which that was bought from Costco.

6.    The toy (that/ which) we bought from Disneyland is a gift for my friend.

7.    The woman who I met at the bus station yesterday was gorgeous.

The woman I met at the bus station yesterday was gorgeous. OPTION TO OMIT OBJECT PRONOUN

The woman whom I met at the bus station yesterday was gorgeous.

‘whom’ can be used as an object pronoun- VERY FORMAL, NOT HIGH-FREQUENCY USAGE

 

8.    I got and an advice from my sister that made me feel better.

advice(n) noncount noun

some advice

a piece of advice, two pieces of advice

I got some advice from my sister that/which made me feel better.

 

IDIOM a piece of a person’s mind – complaint

She gave me a piece of her mind.

 

IDIOM peace of mind

Doris would give a million dollars for some peace of mind.

 

9.    I still keeping have the last present which my mother gave to me.

10.                       The book that is on the shelf is my favorite.

11.                       The boy who is wearing a red shirt is my brother.

12.                       The teacher who is very kind gave us extra credit.

13.                       I often recalled my grandmother who made delicious foods that I really liked.

14.                       The boy who is sitting in that fancy car is my neighbor.

15.                       My necklace and bracelet which my mom gave to me were my favorite gifts in the world.

16.                       The dog that my daughter best-loved pet is Golden Retriever. XXX

The dog that is my daughter’s best-loved pet is a Golden Retriever.

17.                       My daughter is playing basketball with a boy who is her classmate.

18.                       Biriyani, that which is an Indian food, has good flavour.

19.                       The student who sat next to me is my friend. 

20.                       Sara has a dog that can understand numerical numbers.

21.                       The sea beach which is located in Cox's Bazar is the longest sea beach in the   world.

22.                       Those whose names are on the list will be sent to the camp.

23.                       Eco-friendly cars that run primarily on electricity benefit the environment.

24.                       The slurping noise, which is incredibly annoying, is why Anne does not like to eat soup with her brother.

25.                       I enjoy telling my friends about Jane Austin, whose most recent book is excellent.

26.                       The coffee that I drink gives me energy.

27.                       The food that I cook every day is healthy.

28.                       Frank who helps people is sick today. 

29.                       I see the girl who wears is wearing the red dress.

30.                       The table that is on the balcony is made of wood.

31.                       The bracelet which is in my hand is from my grandmother.

32.                       They are our new friends who(m) we met in Paris.

33.                       Michael, whose son is John, is here.

34.                       The diamond ring which she is wearing is extravagant.

35.                       I live in Vancouver which is the most beautiful city in North America.

36.                       We are studying sentences that contain adjective clauses.

37.                       The song they are singing is good.

38.                       He decides to go to Costco where sells any daily products. XXX

He decided to go to Costco which sells all daily products. 

He decided to go to Costco where he can get all daily products. 

 

39.                       She tried to apply for to UBC which was is one of the best universities in Canada. 

40.                       My mom bought an antique ring which is 50 years old.

41.                       I like the book that I got from the library near our house.

42.                       This is my sister who lives in California.

43.                       The man who I hired to paint my house finished the job in four days.

44.                       I hired a man who finished the job in four days to paint my house. 

45.                       The book that I read was good.   Object pronoun.

46.                       The book I read was good.    Object pronoun.

47.                       I read a book that was good.      Subject pronoun

48.                       Sara lost the ring which her mom gave her for her wedding/marriage.

49.                       I am from Afghanistan which is a mountainous country. 

 

Really good work.

 

 

 

 

 

Putting commas around adjective clauses

A Joe’s brother, who lives in Calgary, is a mechanic.

Joe’s brother, who lives in Calgary, is a mechanic.

Joe’s brother is a mechanic. THE SENTENCE STILL MAKES SENSE- 1 brother

 

B Joe’s brother who lives in Calgary is a mechanic.

Same meaning?

A – one brother

B- more than one brother

 

Grammar book- Restrictive and non-restrictive clauses

                               essential and non-essential clauses

 

*Deeper level – not critical, if you get it wrong, no one will go to jail

commas or no commas around adjective clauses

 

-Use commas around an adjective clause – really special, absolutely unique, only one- a good time to use commas

 

‘which’ is a good candidate for commas

Manila, which is the capital of The Philippines, is a huge city.

extra information

Grammar-  non-essential, non-restrictive

 

Beijing, which is in the north of China, has a huge population.

Beijing, which is in the north of China, has a huge population.

sentence still makes sense

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

appetite for adventure, etc.

humble brag

In the airport, we were treated like cattle.

Math is drudgery to me. Her work is drudgery.

gigantic(adj) very large size

extravagent(adj) – extreme wealth, opulence, big performance

We were goofing around.

She hatched a plan to get a better job.

You can see Venus with your naked eye.

I am outraged! rage-extreme anger  outrageous(adj)

The price of houses in Vancouver is outrageous.

urban-city   suburban-outside the city, mostly houses   rural-farmland

She peddles computers. He peddles wine to restaurants.

If you want to lose weight, keep an eye on your portion size.

On Saturday afternoon, he roamed around downtown while his daughter was taking dance lessons.

She looks smart. She is always well put-together.

She struggles with anxiety.

swell(v) swelling(n) swollen(adj)

I woke up and my eyes were swollen and puffy.

swell(adj) – great, fun  The party was swell. (old-fashioned)

 

upgrade(v)She upgraded her phone/computer/ English.

She upgraded improved her life.

She upgraded her driving licence.

She upgraded herself. XXX