Eng 11 Sentence work

Example sentences from you:

Jung Sum hides his feelings since he is a little kid.
vt - verb tense

Jung Sum has hidden his feelings since he is a little kid.
has hidden - present perfect , tricky - started in the past, continue to now
up to now -present, not past
perfect - excellent, wonderful, great, just a word, comes from Latin

Jung Sum has hidden his feelings since he is was a little kid.
since he is was a little kid - time

Jung Sum has hidden his feelings since he is a little kid. 
since he is a little kid - reason why

since - time, reason

Jung Sum has hidden his feelings since/because he is a little kid. 

vt 

Poh-Poh said that Jung Sum was "inside unusual"(87); and, Jung Sum hghghghghghg.

; and,    , and
; TRANS,  ; furthermore,
; in addition,     ; besides, 


He does is not afraid to hang out with Frank, but he is afraid that Frank will figure out how he feels and reject him.


He is not afraid to hang out with Frank, but he is afraid that Frank will figure out how he feels and reject him. COMPOUND COMPLEX

He was not afraid to hang out with Frank, but he was afraid that Frank would figure out how he felt and (would) reject him.

This is about as complicated a sentence that you would ever have to write.
Option to break into several sentences:
He was not afraid to hang out with Frank. However, he was afraid that Frank would figure out how he felt. He didn't want Frank to reject him.



Jung Sum never cried. "I gripped the pillow and not one tear fell from my eyes."(95) XXX

INCORPORATE A FEW WORDS
Jung Sum never cried. In fact, even though he was scared, "not one tear fell"(95) because he was determined to be brave and stoic.


How to quote quotes withing a quote
" "  '  '
https://data.grammarbook.com/blog/commas/quoting-a-question-within-a-question/



Topic sentence that addresses the topic
- supprting sentences
- on-topic
- unified
- coherent
Concluding sentence

Avoid retelling the plot. Only tell plot in order to support a point that you are making.


reminded - Jung Sum reminded his childhood.
remembered (v)
recalled (v)

The fight with Frank reminded Jung Sum of his childhood.
Shelley remembers to brush her teeth.
Shelley's mother reminded her to brush her teeth.

The fight was a turning point for Jung Sum.
a turning point, an important step, a pivotal moment, a critical/crucial point, a decisive moment, a monumental event

The fight was very important for Jung Sum. WEAK

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Building vocab is a challenge.

HW Review Writing Academic English Ch 4 "Paragraphs to Essays"
The Jade Peony Ch 9 for Wed. probably


In-class writing No time! Not enough time! 
I need more time!!!

There's always not enough time.