We rode on the Seawall.
We were riding bicycles. KERNEL - CENTRE SENTENCE
We were riding bicycles on the Seawall. SIMPLE
We were riding bicycles, and we rode on the Seawall. COMPOUND, REP
We were riding bicycles; in fact, we rode on the Seawall.
COMPLEX?
2. Our red and white bicycles were rented.
We rented red and white bicycles.
We were renting bicycles which were red and white.
Our bicycles which we rented were red and white.
Our bicycles that were red and white were rented.
3. We wore helmets that were required for safety.
We wore helmets because that were required for safety.
We wore safety helmets which were required.
We wore required safety helmets.
We were required to wear helmets for safety.
For safety, we were required to wear helmets.
5. The safety helmets were an ugly colour.
The helmets were for safety, but they were an ugly colour.
The helmets that were an ugly colour were for safety.
Even though the helmets were an ugly colour, they were for safety.
6. The Seawall was busy and crowded.
The Seawall was busy because it was crowded.
The Seawall was very busy because it was so crowded.
The busy Seawall was crowded.
7. People were walking and rollerblading.
8. We rode slowly, and I rode in the middle.
We rode slowly with me riding in the middle.
9.My brother rode in front, and our friend rode behind.
My brother rode in front; in addition, our friend rode behind.
10. We rode for an hour without stopping, so I was out of breath; also, my legs were sore.
I was out of breath and my legs were sore because we rode for an hour without stopping.
We rode for an hour without stopping; therefore, I was out of breath; also, my legs were sore. AVOID, STYLE
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